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Dev was actually a son of policewoman and a politician and that's why everyone in school was scared of him. He bullied Saransh and Ruhi. First he made Ruhi fall and then when she complained, then he closed her in washroom and spread smoke over there but later she was saved by his sister Alia (Maisha Dixit), later Alia and Saransh became frnds n Saransh was in love with Alia and so Dev warned Alia to stay away from Saransh but she refused, next day he changed Saransh's beaker in the lab and a disaster happened and he got badly injured. Rudra and Preesha complained of him and got him restricted from school. So then Dev got flyers printed of Preesha that she will pleasure man but RuSha shooed away the guns by hitting them. Next day in school Dev was still there and when Saransh passed by, he passed lewd comments with his friends on Preesha looking at the flyer, and Saransh got instigated and brutally assaulted him but Alia called principal and rescued Dev. Then Dev got admitted to hospital where his mother Revati came and tried to get Saransh arrested but Dev took back his case to look good in front of his mother. Next day, Saransh was practicing with Aliya for annual function and Dev's frnd informed him about their togetherness and Dev threatened Saransh of sending him to jail.

Preesha took Dev's friend's help and collected proof against him. Dev even planted drugs in her cabin and tried to get her arrested before. Then Dev got to know that Preesha has proof against him so he decided to kill Ruhi so that Preesha gets depressed after her death and forgets about him and so he tells a student to tell Ruhi that her father has a surprise for her and she went to the roof and Dev too went to roof.

After seeing Dev, she pushed him and hid herself but he got successful in finding her.

Saransh got to know about Dev and that he has taken Ruhi,

so he rushed to the roof to rescue her but Dev hid with her and Saransh acted to go to inform Rudra

And later came again so that he comes out of the hideout

Saransh rushed to Dev but he threw marbles in his way and Saransh fell, Ruhi bit Dev's hand and ran to him but she stepped on marble and fell and got unconscious

Then Dev said that now it is easy for him to kill her, so then Saransh rushed to him to stop him and successfully pushed him but unfortunately he fell because of the marbles he threw because when Saransh pushed him, he stepped on the marble and collided with the unmade wall and fell and screamed for Saransh to help him but till then it was too late.


The credit for the summary goes to Salley145.





Saransh rang up Rudraksh.

Rudraksh:Saransh,where are you?

Saransh was weeping.Rudraksh was shocked.

Rudraksh:Saransh,what happened?

Saransh:Rudra..I am at the terrace.Please come here.

Rudraksh:Ok.

Rudraksh cut the call.

Preesha:What is the matter Rudra?

Rudraksh:You come with me.We have to go to the terrace.

They both rushed to the terrace.

Saransh ran towards them and hugged them.

Saransh:Mumma...Rudra...

Preesha:What happened Saransh?

Suddenly their eyes fell on Ruhi.

Seeing Ruhi unconscious,Preesha ran towards Ruhi,

Preesha:Ruhi!

Rudraksh was shocked:What happened here Saransh?

Saransh burst into tears.

Rudraksh:Say Saransh..

Saransh explained them everything.

Rudraksh and Preesha were shocked.

Rudraksh and Preesha looked down.There they saw Dev lying in a pool of blood.


Rudraksh looked at Preesha and said:Preesha,don't wake up Ruhi,It's better that Ruhi sleeps now.Otherwise she will get to know what happened here and it will affect her.

Preesha nodded emotionally.

Preesha:What will we do now Rudra?

Saransh cried.

Rudraksh:Saransh,don't cry.We both are with you.We will find a solution.

Preesha:Yes Saransh.You did'nt do anything intentionally.It was for self defense that you pushed Dev.The court can't punish you.

Rudraksh:Forget about the court.I will not let Saransh go to the court.

Preesha was stunned.

Preesha:But how is that possible?

Rudraksh:We have to remove Dev's body from there.

Saransh and Preesha were shocked.

Preesha:But how?

Rudraksh:Leave that to me.First we have to keep Ruhi away from this.We will keep her in our car first.We will go through the back door.

Preesha:Ok.

They went out through the backdoor and kept Ruhi in the car.

Rudraksh:Saransh,you be with Ruhi here.

Saransh:Ok.

Rudraksh and Preesha went to the area where Dev's body was lying.

But they got a shock there.Dev's body was not seen there.Most shockingly there was not even blood drops there.

Preesha:How is it possible?Where is Dev's body?

Rudraksh:That means somebody has taken away Dev's body from here.That person has cleaned this area too.

Preesha:But why would that person do so?Will he be alive?So that person took him to the hospital?

Rudraksh:It's not possible.If that person's intention was to take him to the hospital to save his life,he would have focused on that.But here he wiped the blood drops too with a lot of effort.That means his intention was to cover thde crime.

Preesha was stunned.

Preesha:But why would he do that?Why would he try to cover up Saransh's crime?

Rudraksh:That's a big question.Anyways we will leave the school now itself before the function gets over.This ambience is not good for Saransh.

Preesha:Yes.Poor Saransh is scared.

They went back to the car.

Saransh:Dev's body?

Preesha stammered.

Rudraksh lied:The problem is solved Saransh.You don't worry.

Saransh was relieved.

Saransh:Really?

Rudraksh:Yes.

Preesha stared at Rudraksh.

Saransh:But what did you both do with Dev's body?

Preesha was worried.

Rudraksh:Saransh,I told you that everything is fine.Don't think about that incident.Be happy that everything is solved.

Saransh smiled with relief.

Rudraksh:And remember...you don't tell anyone about this incident.

Saransh:Ok.

Preesha and Rudraksh looked at each other painfully.




At home...


They reached home.Ruhi woke up from the sleep with fear.

Ruhi:Dev bhaiyya....he...

Preesha felt sad seeing Ruhi's condition.

Preesha hugged her tearfully.

Preesha:Don't get scared beta.Dev bhaiyya got scolding from Saransh and he left from there.He won't trouble you again.

Ruhi:Is it true?

Preesha:Yes.Now you sleep.

Ruhi hugged Preesha and slept.


After some time....


Rudraksh was standing in the room thinking of the incident.Preesha went near him.

Preesha:Why did you tell Saransh that everything is solved?Just because his body was missing,did you think that everything was solved?

Rudraksh:No.Now we are in darkness and now the problem has increased.But how can I tell the truth to Saransh?He is a child.He will be in trauma.He will lose his sleep too.That's why I hid the truth from Saransh.Did I do anything wrong?

Preesha:No Rudra.You are right.But what will we do?

Rudraksh:No idea.I am completely blank.Only CCTV camera can tell us the truth.

Preesha:But then... Saransh will also be exposed.

Rudraksh got tensed.

Rudraksh:I will not let that happen.

Preesha burst into tears and fell on his chest.

Preesha:I am really scared Rudraksh.Will we be able to prove that Saransh is innocent?

Rudraksh felt upset.He caressed her.







He wiped her tears.

Rudraksh:Preesha,you trust me right?I will not let anything bad to happen to Saransh.But you be strong for Saransh and Ruhi.Otherwise both our children will be worried.They need courage at this moment.

She nodded her head.



Rudraksh met the school staff.

Rudraksh:I want to see the CCTV footage.

Staff:Sorry sir.We can't show it to the outsiders.

Rudraksh:I can give you money.Please show yesterday's visuals.

Staff:Sir,even if I try,I can't show yesterday's visuals to you.Because we noticed that the CCTV is damaged.I don't know how.

Rudraksh was shocked.



Rudraksh said this to Preesha.

Preesha was shocked.

Preesha:That person must have damaged the CCTV camera.He wants to hide himself.

Rudraksh:Yes.

Preesha:But why is he doing it?

Suddenly an unknown number rang up Rudraksh.

He:Hey Rudraksh Khurana!

Rudraksh:Who are you?

He:I am your well wisher.I can't reveal my name.

Rudraksh:By hiding your identity how can you be my well wisher?Nonsense!

Rudraksh tried to cut the call.

He:I am your well wisher and that's why I removed Dev's body.

Rudraksh was shocked.

Rudraksh put the call on speaker for Preesha.

Rudraksh:You only removed Dev's body?

He:Yes.

Rudraksh:Why did you do that?

He:I told you that I am your well wisher.That's why I did that.

Rudraksh:Say your name.

He:I can't say my name.But I can hide about Dev to save your Saransh.But.....

Rudraksh and Preesha were stunned.


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Mysterious disappearance Part 2

He:I told you that I am your well wisher.That's why I did that.

Rudraksh:Say your name.

He:I can't say my name.But I can hide about Dev to save your Saransh.But.....

Rudraksh and Preesha were stunned.

Rudraksh:Tell me properly.

He:I will hide the truth.But I need 30 lakhs.

Rudraksh-Preesha were shocked.

Rudraksh:Are you mad?You will not get a single penny from us.

He:Then the whole world will know that Saransh killed Dev.Then what about Saransh's future?

Rudraksh-Preesha were upset.

Rudraksh:You said that you are our well wisher.But you are blackmailing us.

He laughed.

He:The choice is yours.Money or Saransh?

Rudraksh:Ok.I will give you the money.But where?

He:I will give you the location.A person sent by me will come there.You give the money to that person.

Rudraksh:Ok.

He cut the call.Rudraksh looked at his number.

Preesha:What is his number?We can trace him.

Rudraksh:It's private number.

Preesha:Oh no...how will we find him?

Rudraksh:Through the person who will come to collect the money,we will trace him.

Preesha:But Rudra,why did you agree to give him such a big amount of money?Do you think he will stop troubling us after that?He will keep blackmailing us forever.

Rudraksh:I know that Preesha.But right now,for Saransh's safety,there is no other option.

But once we go there,we will fix it up.



Dev's mother ACP Revathi and her husband were upset about Dev missing.

Revathi:Where is my Dev?

Rakesh:Revathi,you are a strong woman.Don't be shattered.

Revathi:But I am also a mother.How can a mother be strong in this situation?

Rakesh:I know.But Revathi...you are investigating very well.You will find Dev.Trust yourself.

Revathi nodded tearfully.



Rudraksh and Preesha reached the place where the blackmailer asked them to come.

A masked person was there.

Rudraksh whispered:This person seems to be a woman.

Preesha:You are right Rudra.

Rudraksh gave her a suitcase of money.

Suddenly Preesha pulled out her mask.Seeing the woman's face,they were shocked.

Preesha:Mahima akka!

Rudraksh was very angry.

Rudraksh:You were with the blackmailer to torture us?I can't believe it Mahima.

Preesha:Akka,you forgot that I am your sister and Saransh is your son.You tortured us a lot.Still you are not satisfied?You are playing games for money using your own son Saransh?

Mahima became upset.

Mahima:Please listen to me Preesha.

Preesha:What is left to hear Mahima akka?

Rudraksh:What excuse can you give after doing this to us?Cruel lady!

Suddenly someone came there and said:Not even a word against Lakshmi.

Rudraksh-Preesha were confused:Lakshmi?

He:I am Rishi.This is my wife Lakshmi.

Rudraksh-Preesha:What?

Rudraksh:Don't cook up any new story.We can recognize Mahima.

Mahima:Yes.I was your Mahima.But after going to jail,I realized my mistakes and changed myself.So they released me from the jail.Then I met Dr.Rishi in the hospital where I worked as a receptionist.

Rishi:I fell in love with her.She told me her bad past.



Flash back....

Rishi knelt down before Mahima and held her hand.

Rishi:I had never thought of marriage.But after seeing your golden heart..how you behave with others,I fell in love with you.Will you marry me?

Mahima became upset.

Mahima:What do you know about me Dr.Rishi?You have no idea about my past.Then listen..you will hate me when you come to know about my past as I was a witch in my past.

Rishi was shocked.

Mahima:I was a gold digger.I fell in love with a rich man named Rajeev for his money.But he did not have the guts to marry me against his strict father.I became pregnant.After giving birth to a baby boy,I left him with my sister Preesha and left the place because of the shame of being an unmarried mother.Years later,when I wanted luxury,I returned.Rajeev had passed away in an accident.My sister Preesha married his brother Rudraksh.They both were bringing up my son Saransh.I became blinded by my desire for luxury.So I snatched their property and tortured them in every way.I even tortured my own son.

Mahima was in tears.

Mahima:I got arrested my the police.Then I realized how I destroyed my own life by hurting my own people.Then I started a new life.

Rishi wiped her tears.Mahima was stunned.

Rishi:I don't hate you Mahima.Because that was your past and you are a changed person now.That's why you confessed the truth.

Mahima looked at him emotionally.

Rishi:Now tell me.Will you marry me?

She blushed.

Rishi pecked her palm sweetly.

Rishi and Mahima got married.

Present....

Mahima:After marriage,Rishi gave me a new identity as I wanted to forget my past.

Rishi:Lakshmi is not like you think.I swear!

Mahima folded her hands and said:Please believe me.I am not the old Mahima now.Please forgive me.

Rudraksh:Then why did she come here on behalf of the blackmailer?

Rishi:To save you both from the blackmailer.

Preesha:Means?

Rishi:The blackmailer is my cousin.He stays in my house as he lost everything after the business loss.

Mahima:I heard him blackmailing you on the phone.I informed it to Rishi.Rishi enquired about what he was upto and realized that he arranged someone to collect money from you.I was shocked to know that his target was Preesha and Rudraksh.I want to redeem myself by saving you both and Saransh from that beast.

Rishi:So we kidnapped the person sent by him and Lakshmi came here in disguise of that person to meet you all.

Rudraksh:Who is that blackmailer?


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Mysterious disappearance Part 3

Rishi:The blackmailer is my cousin.He stays in my house as he lost everything after the business loss.

Mahima:I heard him blackmailing you on the phone.I informed it to Rishi.Rishi enquired about what he was upto and realized that he arranged someone to collect money from you.I was shocked to know that his target was Preesha and Rudraksh.I want to redeem myself by saving you both and Saransh from that beast.

Rishi:So we kidnapped the person sent by him and Lakshmi came here in disguise of that person to meet you all.

Rudraksh:Who is that blackmailer?

Rishi:Armaan!

Rudraksh and Preesha were shocked.

Preesha:Armaan!

Mahima:Who is Armaan?

Preesha:He is someone who tried to separate me from Rudra.

Mahima and Rishi were shocked.

Mahima:Why?

Rudraksh:He was obsessed with Preesha.

Mahima was shocked.

Mahima:So is he doing this to take revenge on you both?

Rudraksh:Definitely he is taking revenge on us.But how did he use Dev's body for this?

Rishi:Dev is alive.He is not dead.

Rudraksh-Preesha:What nonsense!

Rishi:I am serious.Armaan brought a young boy to our house.He introduced him as his friend's son.He said that his parents have gone abroad,So for some time he needs shelter and that's why he brought him there.He was introduced as Shravan to us.

Preesha:Why do you feel that Shravan is Dev?We saw Dev's body.

Rishi:Because I overheard Armaan calling him 'Dev'.That made me suspect him.

Rudraksh:But how can the dead Dev be alive?

Preesha:Only Armaan can clear our doubt.

Rudraksh:Yes.We want to meet Armaan.

Mahima:Why only Armaan?You can meet Dev too.Come to our house.

Rudraksh-Preesha:Yes.We are coming.

Rishi and Mahima went home with Rudraksh and Preesha.

Rishi went to a room.There Armaan and Dev were talking.

Rishi:Hey...some people have come to see us.

Armaan:Who?

Rishi:It's a surprise.Anyways you both come to meet our guests.

Armaan:Ok.

Rishi went out.

Dev:Armaan uncle,should I come?

Armaan:Yes.You also come.Don't be scared.Nobody can identify you here.

Armaan and Dev went to the living room.

Rishi:Meet our guests.

Mahima:My sister Preesha and her husband Rudraksh.

Rudraksh and Preesha came in front of them shocking Dev and Armaan.

Rudraksh and Preesha slapped Armaan.Dev started sweating.

Preesha:We realized that you only blackmailed us Armaan.

Armaan pretended to be innocent:What blackmailing?

Rudraksh:Don't try to act innocent.We know everything.

Armaan was embarrassed.

Preesha:We are not asking why you are doing it as we know that it is your revenge.

Rudraksh:But tell me what really happened.

Armaan:I lost my business and everything when I lost Preesha as I went crazy after losing her.So I was really angry with Rudraksh.I wanted to teach you both a lesson.So I was keeping an eye on your life.That's how I came to know about your issues with Dev.I met Dev at the hospital and gave him an idea to attack Ruhi and Saransh.

Preesha:Are you not ashamed to brainwash a child to do criminal activities?

Armaan and Dev were silent.

Rudraksh:Say what happened.

Armaan:Everything was pre-planned.Even the fall was planned.So I put a mattress down and Dev fell over there.Dev lay down as if he was dead.The blood was not real.Before you could reach Dev's body,I removed the blood and took away Dev from there.Then I started blackmailing you both not for money,but to ruin your peace of mind forever.

Rudraksh:Shame on you Armaan!

Preesha:Your game is over Armaan.You are exposed.

Suddenly Revathi and team came inside shocking Armaan and Dev.

Revathi handcuffed Armaan.Dev was not able to face Revathi.

Revathi slapped Dev.

Revathi:How could you Dev?I tried to correct you many times.But you always chose the wrong path and defamed your mother who is a police cop.You did a criminal act Dev.You faked death to trap innocent people.

Revathi's eyes became wet.

Dev shed tears:Please forgive me mom.

Revathi was silent.

Preesha:He is still a child.So we don't have any complaint against him.You please forgive him Revathi.

Revathi,Dev and Rudraksh were shocked.

Preesha told Rudraksh:Because of us,a school student like Dev's future should not get affected.

Rudraksh nodded.

Dev:You both are great.That's why I am forgiven.I don't deserve pardon.But please forgive me.I will apologize to Ruhi and Saransh too.

Rudraksh and Preesha nodded emotionally.

Dev looked at Revathi tearfully:Please forgive me mom.I promise that I will not repeat it.

Revathi:I will leave you only if Saransh and Ruhi forgive you.Because they were the victims.

Dev became upset.

They all left from there.

Preesha and Rudraksh thanked Rishi and Mahima.

Preesha:Thank you so much Mahima akka and Rishi jiju,Because of you both only our biggest problem got solved.

Mahima:I don't need thank you from you Preesha.Because I don't deserve it after what I did to you in the past.

Preesha:But the truth is that I got my Mahima akka back.We will be the best sisters like before Akka.

Mahima and Preesha hugged each other emotionally.

Rishi smiled seeing their reunion.

Rudraksh:Thank you very much Rishi.

Rishi smiled.

Preesha and Rudraksh bid good-bye and left.

Rishi looked at Mahima:Lakshmi,are you happy now?

Mahima:Yes Rishi.I am very happy that I got my sister back.It's all because of you.I am lucky to have you in my life.

Rishi:I am also lucky to have you in my life Lakshmi.You are my luck.You are my Bhagyalakshmi.

She smiled.They embraced each other.

Rudraksh and Preesha told Saransh about everything.

Saransh was surprised:Dev is alive?That means I am not a criminal.

Preesha smiled:Yes beta.

Saransh hugged Rudraksh and Preesha happily.

Revathi,Rakesh,Alia and Dev went to Khurana house.

Dev apologized to Saransh and Ruhi.They were nervous to see Dev.

Dev:I did unforgivable mistake to you both.But I promise that I will be changed person from now onwards.I will never trouble you both.

Rudraksh and Preesha were tensed about Saransh's reaction.

Saransh:Rudra and mumma told me everything.I have forgiven you Dev.

Dev:Thank you Saransh.Will you be my friend?

Saransh smiled:Yes.

Dev smiled:Thank you so much.

Alia to Saransh and Ruhi:Saransh..Ruhi...Sorry for what my brother did to you both.Please give him a chance.He won'r repeat it.

Saransh:It's ok Alia.I understand.

Ruhi was silent.

Preesha:Ruhi beta...I told you that forgiving is the best thing you can do.Please forgive Dev bhaiyya.

Ruhi:But what Dev bhaiyya did..

Rudraksh:Forget it and move on Ruhi.Be friends with everyone.

Ruhi:Ok..I forgive Dev bhaiyya.

Dev smiled.

Ruhi:But if you repeat it,Revathi aunty should scold him.

Revathi:I will not only scold him,but also beat him.

Dev was embarrassed.

Dev:Mom...dad...won't you both forgive me?

Revathi was silent.

Rudraksh:Children make mistakes.If they correct it,please forgive them,so that they won't do mistakes again.

Alia:Please forgive Dev bhaiyya.

Preesha:Even Saransh and Ruhi have forgiven him.Please forgive him.

Revathi and Rakesh caressed Dev's head.Dev hugged them tearfully.

Everyone smiled.

The End


Edited by jasminerahul - 2 years ago
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