Samaina Fanfiction : Tum Sahi Nahi Ho, Bas Mujhse Alag Ho

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Hey everyone, I've been a silent reader of this forum for a very long time, and I only made this ID to write this fanfiction. Due to lockdown Sony channel is airing some of their old shows, and one among them was my favorite "Yeh Un Dinon Ki Baat Hain", although they replaced it with some other show after one month (Middle finger to Sony for that.). Watching it on telly made me fall in love with Sameer and Naina once again, and I repeat watched all the episodes on SonyLiv. Watching the show again motivated me and gave me an idea to write a fanfiction on Samaina. Hope you all like it. So without wasting more time, here it is.


Introduction:

Naina's Voiceover : Ahmedabad, mera shehar, jaha main apne chachaji, chachiji, aur meri pyari behen Preeti ke sath rehti thi. Mere mummy, papa bachpan mein hi guzar gaye. Par chacha ji aur chachi ji ne mujhe kabhi unki kami mehsoos nahi hone diya. Mujhe apni beti ki tarah rakha aur Preeti se bhi zyada pyar diya.

Au mere dost, Swati, Shefali aur Kamya. Ye log bhi meri family se kam nahi hain. Ye thi meri choti si duniya, par isme jald hi koi aane wala tha, jo mujhe, meri zindagi, aur logon ko dekhne ka nazariya bilkul badalne wala tha.

Main Naina Agarwal, aur ye, meri kahani hai.

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Chapter 1:

Naina’s Voiceover : Ahmedabad, 12 June, 1992. Jaha meri zindagi ki nayi shuruaat hone jaa rahi thi, wahi kisi ki zindagi khatam ho chuki thi.

A dead body of a young girl in her 20s was found near a forest area in the morning. A group of guys passing by were the first to spot the dead body and they immediately called the police from the nearest PCO. The police officers arrived and what they saw completely shocked and and disgusted them. The3 girl was completely naked and there were multiple marks on her body.Clearly this was a case of rape, torture and murder.

Naina’s Voiceover :Aaj 2020 mein iss tarah ki ghatnayein common ho chuki hain. Aaye din hum roz hum akhbaron mein balatkar ke bare mein padhte rehte hain. Par ye un dinon ki baat hai, jab iss tarah ka bhayankar apradh koi soch bhi nahi sakta tha. Ye ek bahut hi sangeen jurm tha, aur iske apradhi ka jald se jald milna bahut zaroori tha.

Aur in sab cheezon se anjaan aur bekhabar, ussi shehar ke Nirmal Jyoti society mein ek ladki rehti thi. 18 saal ki Naina Agarwal, josapnein dekh rahi thi. Din ke sapne nahi, raat ke sapne.

Naina, Preeti, Kitna sogi tum dono. Dhoop nikal aaya hain,utho ab, Bela shouted at both the girls.Kya hai mummy? school khatam ho gaya hai, humein kahi nahi jaana hai, sone do na, Preeti spoke getting irritated at her mother.

Bhagwan jhuth na bulaye, school khatam ho gaya hai to kya tum dono sara din khumbkaran ki tarah soti rahogi, utho jaldi, Bela again shouted.

Losing her patience,Bela hit Preeti hard on her head.

Ouch, mummy kya hai?, Preeti shouted getting up from her sleep. Aap ko sirf main hi dikhayi de rahi hoon, ye Naina ko dekho na, kaise ghode bech kar so rahi hai, said Preeti looking at Naina.

Naina was in her dreams. Both Bela and Preeti were wondering what is she dreaming about. It was obvious that she was dreaming about something because there was a huge smile on her face even while sleeping. Belatook a glass of water and sprinkled some of it on Naina’s face.

Naina beta, sapno ki duniya se bahar aa gayi? Bela asked sarcastically. Ji chachiji, Naina replied. Bhagwan jhuth na bulaye, subah ke aath bajne wale hai, utho tum dono jaldi aur rasoi mein aakar mera haath batao,Bela spoke the final word and left.

Waise mujhe to der se uthne ki aadat hain, par aaj tujhe kyaho gaya tha?, Preeti asked looking at Naina.

Kya matlab? Naina replied pretending she’s not understanding a thing.

Matlab ye ki tu kiske sapne dekh rahi thi meri behen?,Preeti finally asked with a mischievous smile on her face.

Sapna, kaisa sapna? Naina said in her usual stutter whenever she lies about something. Wohi Sapna, jise dekhte huye tu neend mein bhi muskura rahi thi, Preeti teased again.

Main kab muskurayi?, Naina asked now getting irritated with Preeti’s teasing.

Jhooth mat bol, mummy ne bhi dekha tujhe muskurate huye,Preeti told Naina.

Preeti, bekar ki baat mat kar, jaldi uth warna chachiji phirchilayengi, with this Naina exited the room with an embarrassed face.

Bata na, kya sapna dekh rahi thi? Preeti again asked while they were having breakfast.

Kaun sa sapna, main koi sapna nahi dekh rahi thi, Naina replied.

Theek hain mat bata, mujhe kya hai, Preeti grumbled.

Preeti main keh rahi hoon na, main koi sapna nahi dekh rahi thi, Naina said with an innocent face. Kha meri kasam, Preeti said.

Ab itni choti si baat pe kasam kaun khata hai, Naina said. Mujhe pata hai, koi sapna to zaroor dekh rahi thi, Preeti said.

Tu jaan kar kya karegi, Naina finally accepted that she was dreaming about something. Arre, main bhi to jaanu ki meri behen kis baat par itna muskura rahi thi.

Tu sach bata, tu apne sapno ke rajkumar ke bare mein soch rahi thi na?, Preeti teased again.

Chup kar, aisa kuch nahi hai, Naina replied blushing.

Achha, to tere gaal kyun laal ho rahe hai? Mujhe na pata hai, tu na, apne sapnon ke Rajkumar ke bare mein hi sochti rehti hai, said Preeti

Hawa aane de, main tere aur Swati jaisi nahi hoon. Jise kisi sapnon ke Rajkumar ki zaroorat hain, replied Naina.

To phir kyun deewani bani phirti hain, Maine Pyar Kiya ke Prem ke peeche?, asked Preeti.

Preeti, Filmon aur asal zindagi mein bahut fark hota hain.Ye jo Prem, Raja, Rahul jaise ladke hote hai na, wo sirf filmon mein hi hote hain. Asal zindagi mein nahi, Naina replied trying to act mature.

Lekin agar maan le, Prem jaisa koi asal zindagi main mil gaya, to kya karegi?, Preeti asked with a grin on her face.

Aisa kabhi hoga hi nahi, replied Naina.

Par maan le, aisa agar ho jaata hain to?, asked Preeti.

Hearing this question, Naina had nothing to say in comeback.

Naina’s voiceover : Haha, iss sawaal ka mere paas koi jawaab nahi tha. Ki main kya karoongi agar Prem jaisa pyar karne wala ladka sach much meri zindagi mein aa jaata. Kya wo bhi mujhse utna hi pyar karta jitna Prem ne Suman se kiya tha? Uss waqt Preeti ko to nahi bataya, par aapko bata deti hoon.Haan, ye sach hain. Main apne sapnon ke Rajkumar ke bare main hi soch rahi thi.Ussi ke sapne dekh rahi thi. Wohi Sapna jo har ladki dekhti hain. Ki ek din ek Rajkumar safed ghode par baith kar aayega, aur use dulhan bana kar le jayega.Par mujhe iss baat ka zara sa bhi andaaza nahi tha, ki main apne asli Rajkumar se aaj hi ke din milne wali thi.

SHEFALI’S HOME :

Door bell rang. Shefali opens the door. Naina, Preeti, kaisi ho tum dono, aao andar. Shefali, hum dono yaha ghar mein baithne nahi aaye hain, told Naina

To phir?, asked Shefali.

Yaar, jab se school khatam hua hai, hum dono ghar mein baithe bore ho gaye hai, chal na kahi ghoom kar aate hain.

Arre to do din baad shuru to ho raha hai na College, itni kya utavli ho rahi ho tum dono, asked Shefali.

Arre aisa kuch nahi hain, humein na bas law garden ghumne ka mann kar raha tha. Ye Preeti to har cheez badha chadha kar bolti hai, told Naina.

Tu bhi chal na humare saath, asked Preeti.

Achha theek hai, main tayyar hokar aati hoon, tab tak tum log baitho, replied Shefali.

All the three girls enter the law garden, and start chitchatting with each other.

Yaar main to bahut excited hoon, College jaane ke liye, said Preeti. Tumhara mann ho to padho, nahi mann ho toh mat padho, jab chahe class bunk karo, koi rokne wala nahi, koi tokne wala nahi.

Achha? Aur attendance ka kya? Teri attendance kam hui totujhe exam likhne nahi diya jayega, reminded Naina.

Arre tu hai na meri behen, meri Proxy lagane ke liye,replied Preeti.

Chal, hawa aane de, main aisa koi galat kaam nahi karnewali, told Naina.

Theek hai meri sanskari behen, mat laga meri proxy. Ye Shefali aur Swati hain na, meri Proxy lagane ke liye, said Preeti.

Dekh agar tune class bunk kiya na, to main ghar mein chachaji aur chachiji ko sab kuch bata dungi,aur agar kisi ne teri proxy lagayi na, to main teacher se bhi complain kardungi.

Yaar tu kaisi behen hai? Asked Preeti getting angry at Naina, school na khatam ho gaya hai. Ab tu head discipline monitor banna chor de.

Arre tum log wo sab chodo, ye socho ki college mein kitne handsome ladke aayenge, said Shefali excitedly. Jab Ahmedabad aayi thi, to socha tha koi handsome sa boyfriend banaungi, par na to school main koi dhangka ladka mila, na hi humari society mein. Tum dono ka koi bhai bhi nahi hain nahi to use hi pata leti.

Chi, kuch bhi bolti hai to, said Naina making a puking face.

Kya bola maine?, asked Shefali.

Wohi….Boyfriend, kitna ganda sa lagta hain, said Naina.

Isme ganda kya hain Naina? Tu na bahut zyada bholi hain.Chal, boyfriend nahi, special friend bolu to chalega?, teased Shefali.

Chup kar, snapped Naina.

Shefali, Special friend nahi, tu na usse sapnon ka Rajkumarbol, now Preeti too started teasing Naina.

Kya matlab? Asked Shefali, not understanding what she was saying.

Kuch nahi, said Naina, trying to stop her teasing.

Naina’s Voiceover : Boyfriend, special friend,Rajkumar…chahe kuch bhi naam dedo, par ye wohi waqt tha jab maine usse pehli baar dekha.

A loud voice of glass smashing came from behind, and they all turned around to see what was that about. A group of hooligans started fighting with each other.

Yaar, chalo yaha se, mujhe yaha ka mahaul bilkul theek nahi lag raha, said Naina and was about to move when Preeti pointed out.

Naina, wo dekh, Munna aur Pandit, said Preeti.

Naina and Preeti were shocked to see them. Munna and Pandit were very naughty and mischievous, but they never expected them to fight like goons in a public place. This was a new low for them.

Ye wohi dono hain na jo tumhare school mein padhte the?asked Shefali. Naina and Preeti didn’t answer as they were still looking at the fight. They all were fighting like animals and it seemed like they willactually kill each other.

There was one more guy on the side of Munna and Pandit. Naina and Preeti didn’t know who he was, but he was a handsome guy with very nice facial features and a Salman Khan style haircut.

Munna, Pandit and the guy with them were fighting with 5 other guys on the opposite side who were older than them. Nobody was ready to back down. Blood was starting to spill from their face and body and it seemed like they are going to get some serious injury.

The handsome boy started beating the leader of the opposite group black and blue. The leader got scared with all the beating and started torun. Sameer, pakad saale ko, shouted Munna. Sameer was his name. Sameer started running behind the guy who was running towards the girls. The girls get scared seeing them coming towards them. Preeti and Shefali get out of their way. Naina too tries the same, but the goon runs too close to her, and Sameer too does the same but ends up colliding with Naina, ending up them twirling into each other.Both look at each other and get lost into each other’s eyes for a moment.

Naina’s voiceover : aap log soch rahe honge. Ki bas. Ye Naina ko to ho gaya pyar.Par yaha story kuch different hai. Afsos, pehli nazar mein pyar to nahi hua. Par aap niraash mat hoyie. Wo dialogue hai na Hum Tum ka, ki pyar hone mein, kabhi kabhi to pehli mulaqat hi kaafi hoti hai, aur kabhi kabhi, kai mulaqaate bhi kam pad jaati hai.

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Chapter 2:

Sameer and Naina look at each other for a moment and share an eye lock. It seemed like both were lost in each other for a moment until it was broken as Sameer again looked at the goon with rage in his eyes. He runs behind the goon and catches him. Both fall on the ground. Sameer gets up and starts punching his face with each punch. His eyes were black and face was covered in blood, but he wasn’t ready to back down. The other members of the gang seeing their leader getting beaten up like that, run towards Sameer and try to stop him, holding him back. Sameer tries to fight back but all 4 goons hold him tightly so that he can’t harm their boss anymore. Munna and Panditcome and free Sameer from the goons clutches. But they too don’t allow Sameer to hurt anyone anymore. Munna and Pandit come and free him from the goons. But they too don’t allow Sameer to hurt anyone anymore as they know that he might kill someone in his rage. The gang leader,who was severely injured because of Sameer’s beatings gets up with the help of his cronies.

“Ye tujhe bahut mehenga padega Sameer Maheshwari. Aaj ki beizzati k badla main zaroor lunga”, warns the gang leader. “Ae chal, pehlejaaklar apna aspatal mein ilaa jkara” shouted Munna.

“Badla lena hain toh abhi lena? Dhamki kya de raha hain?”said Sameer as he walks towards the gang leader. The gang member gets scared seeing him coming closer but don’t move as they had enough embarrassment. Munna and Pandit too get scared as they don’t want Sameer to again get into a fight again. Sameer comes close to the goon, looks in his bruised eye and says, “agli baar mujhse bhidne ki koshish ki, to abhi to sirf chehra pehchan mein nahi aa raha hain, agli baar puri body pehchaan mein nahi aayegi. Sameer snaps his fingers towards the gang members signaling them to take their boss out of their sight, and they follow his command without saying anything.

As the goons leave, Pandit says “ Sameer chal yaar, hum bhi nikalte hain yahaan se”

“Haan yaar, yahan pe police ka chakkar bhi ho sakta hain”says Munna. Upar se kuch jaan pehchaan walon ne bhi dekh liya hai” says Pandit looking at Naina , Preeti and Shefali.

“Chal Bhai Chal” says Munna and the boys leave.

“ Ye kya tha yaar” says Preeti finally breaking the silence among them.” Munna aur Pandit ko kya ho gaya tha? School mein bhi kam badmaashnahi the par iss tarah se gundo ki tarah ladna? Aisa lag raha tha ki jaise wolog ek dusre ki jaan hi le lenge.”

“Par wo teesra ladka kaun tha” asked Shefali.

“Mujhe nahi pata. Pehli baar dekha usse Munna aur Pandit ke saath”answers Preeti.

“Shayad ussi ki galat sangat ka asar hain” speaks up Naina.“ Dekha nahi wo hi kaise un gundo ko maar raha tha. Munna aur Pandit to sirf uski madad kar rahe the.”

“Khair chodo. Ab hum kya kar sakte hain, kisi din police kehaath aayenge, aur jab unke dande padenge na, tab inki akal thikane aayegi”says Preeti.

SAMEER’S HOUSE

Sameer is sitting in his room with Munna and Pandit. Sameer is bandaging his hands as they really got hurt when he was punching the goon.There was no internal damage to his bones but his fists were badly wounded.Munna and Pandit were applying antiseptic to their wounds in their arms, legs and face, along with looking in the mirror.

“ yaar Pandit, ye chehre ka nishan chala to jayega na?” asks Munna.

“Mujhe kya pata yaar. Meranishan to aur bhi bada hai” Pandit replies. “ Yaar kahi pe bhi chot lage par chehre par nahi lagni chahiye. Aisehi wo Swati Bandar bulati hai, agar ye thobda aur bigad gaya na, pata nahi kya bulayegi” says Munna.

“ Achha? Aaj jo kand karte huye humein Naina aur Preeti aurunki uss khubsurat friend ne dekha hain na, jab wo teri frock wali Pandit kobatayengi na, tab dekhna wo tujhe gunda, mawali aur kya kya naam se bulati hain.” Says Pandit.

“Kya? Matlab tune bi unki uss khoobsurat friend ko notice kiya?” Munna asks with a shocked face

“Tune bhi matlab? Tune bhi?” asks Pandit with similar shocking expression.

Munna says shyly “Haan yaar, kya gazab dikhti hai wo. Ye gore gore gaal” “Ye lambe lambe baal” continues Pandit. Both got lost in Shefali’s dreams for a second until they snapped back to reality, looking at each other in anger.

“Wo meri hain samjha” both shout at each other in unison.

“Aur waise bhi. Tu to uss frock wali pandit se pyar karta hain na?” asks Pandit.

“Haan, karta to hoon. Pichle 5 saal se uske peeche padahoon, par wo mujhe ghaas hi nahi daalti. Usse to Sameer jaisa koi hero typeladka hi pasand aata hain. Aakhir kab tak uske peeche bhagunga. Meri bhi koi self-respect hain.” Says Munna.

“Achha to iska matlab ab tu mere sachhe pyar par nazar lagayega?” asks Pandit.

“Kaun sa sachha pyar? Aaj hi to dekha hain tune usse. Tujheto uska naam bhi nahi pata.” says Munna.

“Haan to tujhe pata hain kya? Aur ye pehli nazar ka pyaar hain samjha.” Replies Pandit.

Sameer finally speaking up “Arre kya lad rahe ho tum log.Dono uss par chance maar lo na. Jiski kismet achhi hogi, Usse wo ladki milegi.”

“Kya khaak milegi. Uss teacher ki chamchi Naina ki dost humse kabhi dosti nahi karegi. Pata nahi mujhe bhi uss behenji Naina ki doston se hi kyun pyaar hota hain.” Says Munna.

“Upar se uss behenji ne humein park mein maar peet karte huye bhi dekh liya. Kahi Principal ko bata diya toh?” asks Pandit.

“Abe Ponga Pandit, Naina school ki monitor thi, aur Schoolab khatam ho chuka hain. To wo school ke Principal se kya complain karegi?”asks Munna.

“ Haan par wo College ke Principal se toh complain kar sakti hain na?” asks Pandit.

“Abe usne VJN College mein thodi na admission liya hoga.Topper log toh Patel Mahavidyalaya mein padhte hain na” says Munna.

“Arre tum log kya bekaar mein tension le rahe ho. Koi Schoolya College ka Principal kuch nahi kar sakta. Kyunki humne jo kuch bhi kiya hai,school aur college ke bahar kiya hain.” Says Sameer.

“Haan par Police to kar sakti hain na Sameer” says Munna.“Sameer jo hum log khule aam sadko par gundo se ladte rehte hain na, hum bhi abgunde hi ban gaye hain. Kisi din police pakad kar le gayi na, to pehle police humein kutegi, uske baad humare gharwaale”

“Aisa kuch nahi hoga” says Sameer. “Agar kabhi police kachakkar hoga toh bas kuch paise khilane ki zaroorat hain. Do minute mein choddegi.”

“Sameer baat wo nahi hain yaar, tu samajh kyun nahi raha hain” says Munna getting frustrated.

“Samajh raha hoon. Dekho agar phir wo gunde mujhse ladne aate hain, to tum dono ko mera saath dene ki zaroorat nahi hain, Mujhe pata hain ki tum dono ko ye sab pasand nahi hain. Bas dosti nibhane ke liye unn gundo se ladte ho, jabki unki asIi dushmani mujhse hain. Dekho na, aaj tum dono ko kitni chot lag gayi. Main nahi chaahta ki meri wajah se tum donon ko kuch ho.” Says Sameer.

“Achha? Tujhe hamari haalat dikh rahi hain, par apni nahi?”asks Munna getting angry now.

“Mujhe kya hua hain” asks Sameer with a confused face.

“Yaar main nahi samjha sakta tujhe. Pandit tu hi samjha”Munna says finally giving up.

Pandit now gets confused on what to say looks here and there.

He sits besides Sameer and holds his hand saying, “Sameer,tu kyun kar raha hain apne saath ye sab”

“Main kya kar raha hoon?” asks Sameer.

“Tujhe nahi lagta tu, Nanaji ke jaane ke baad badal gaya hain?” asks Pandit.

Pandit reminding Sameer of Nanaji made him feel like someone has pierced a sword in his heart.

After being lost for a few seconds, Sameer gives a fake smile and says, “Haan, badal to gaya hoon. Par iska matlab ye nahi ki main khush nahi hoon.”

Pandit after thinking for a moment says “Tujhe lagta hain Nanaji aaj agar tujhe aise dekhte to bahut khush hote?”

“Nahi, wo khush nahi hote, par Nanaji mujhe nahi dekh rahena” asks Sameer.

“Kahi se to dekh rahe honge naa?” asks Pandit.

“Ye sab bekaar ki baatein hain, Swarg, Nark, Bhagwan, ye sab kuch nahi hota. Aur agar bhagwan hain bhi, toh main usse kyun maanu? Log sochte hain, ki Nanaji ne marne se pehle Karodo ki property chod di, jisse meri saath pushte aaram se khaa sakti hain. Par kya karunga main itni saari daulat ka?”

Sameer gets up from his chair. Tears finally start to drop from his eyes. Looked like he was about to break down.

“Tu bol Munna? Pandit? Kya karun main itni saari daulat ka?Log kehte hain ki zindagi mein paisa hi sab kuch hain. Par meri zindagi toh mere Nanu the. Mere baap kisi aur saath mujhe aur meri maa ko chod kar chala gaya. Meri maa ne sadme mein aakar khud khushi kar li. Bachpan se lekar aaj tak Nanu hi mere liye sab kuch the. Mere mom, dad, my best friend. Par ab wo bhi mujhe chod kar chale gaye”

Sameer’s voice gets heavy as he goes on saying,”Kyun maanu main kisi bhagwan ko jisne mujhse meri iklauti khushi cheen li? Batao Munna Pandit, Kyun maanu main kisi bhagwan ko? Nanaji mar chuke hain. Aur ab wo kabhi wapas nahi aane waale, na hi wo mujhe kahi se dekh rahe hain”

With this Sameer finally breaks down on his bed and starts crying. Munna and Pandit sit beside him and try to console him but they didn’t know what to say. Was there anything which was going to make him feel better.They knew that they can’t fill the void Nanu left Munna and Pandit sit beside him and try to console him but they didn’t know what to say. Was there anything which was going to make him feel better. They knew that they can’t fill the void Nanu left in Sameer’s life. Both were only thinking, that if not them, who can make up for Nanu’s absence in Sameer’s life? Who can teach Sameer to live again? Who can make Sameer to love again?

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Chapter 3:

Munna and Pandit somehow make Sameer stop crying. Munna wipes Sameer's tears from his eyes and face and says, "achhi khasi shakal ko kyun kharab kar raha hain ro kar yaar?" which makes Sameer chuckle. "Aur tujhe agar nahi pata ki ye saari daulat ka kya karna hain to tu isse aadhi-aadhi hamare naam kar de, kyun Munna? " says Pandit, trying to lighten the mood. "Haan bilkul, Sameer, tu humein apni jaaydaad de dena, humein pata hain iska kya karna hain." Says Munna, playing along. Sameer smiles hearing this. "Ab jaakar muskuraya hamara Bhai.", says Munna. Pandit puts his hand around Sameer's shoulder and says, "Sameer, tu kabhi mat sochna ki tu iss duniya mein akela hain, tu bhale hi humein sirf apna dost manta ho, par tu hamare liye hamari family hain....aur tu agar kabhi bhi bolega ki hum apne maa-baap ko chodkar, tere paas aa jaaye, to iss Munna ka to pata nahi, par main bina kuch soche aa jaunga.". Hearing this Munna shouts, "Ae Ponga Pandit, Mera pata nahi se kya matlab hain tera? Main bhi aa jaunga, apne Bhai ke ek ishare par".

Sameer's eyes again get wet hearing this, but he wipes his tears and says, "Thank you Munna, Pandit, tum dono ho, isliye mere paas jeene ki koi wajah hai...warna main toh, kabka mar gaya hota". "Ae, ye bekaar ki marne ki baatein mat kiya kar."says Munna. "Wohi toh, hum log hain na tere saath, ab tu ye kyun soch raha hain ki hum saath nahi hote toh kya hota?", says Pandit. "Achha, ab bahut ho gaya ye rona-dhona, ab thoda excitement waali baatein bhi kar le." says Munna. "Do din baad hamari School wali life khatam, College waali life shuru."

"Haan yaar, College mein kya maza aane wala hain na" says Pandit getting excited. "Jab mann chahe class bunk karo, Uniform ka bhi koi jhanjhat nahi, poore style mein hero ban kar college mein ghumo". "Aur sabse badi baat? Hamara Bhai Sameer hamare saath padhne wala hain" says Munna, "Sameer ke saath hamari kya thaat hogi College mein." With this Pandit says, " Haan, Sameer jis bhi ladki ko apni girlfriend banayega, unki dost shayad tujhe bhi thoda bhao de de". "Ae Ponga Pandit, Sameer ki pehle se hi girlfriend hain toh woh College mein kisi aur ko kyun apni girlfriend banayega?". Hearing this, Sameer gets a little upset.

Someone knocks on the door, and the boys see a girl standing outside Sameer's room. It was Amrita, Sameer's girlfriend. The boys stand up from the bed seeing her. "Agar tum log busy ho to main baad mein aa jaungi." Says Amrita with a smile. "Arre nahi nahi, hum log kaun se busy hain, chal Pandit, nikalte hain yaha se." says Munna. "Haan...haan, theek hain, Sameer, hum log bahar hi hain haan, tum log aaram se baith kar baat karo." says Pandit, and with this both of them leave from there. After Munna and Pandit leave, Amrita comes near Sameer and says, "Ye itni chot kaise lagi tumhe, phir kisi ke saath, maar peeth ki kya?" Sameer doesn't answer and looks here and there trying to avoid Amrita's eye contact. Amrita says, "Theek hain, mat batao, par main tumhe batane aayi thi ki main Delhi wapas jaa rahi hoon." Hearing this, Sameer who was avoiding to look at her until now, looks at her in surprise. "Aaj shaam ki hi flight hain, bas, aakhri baar tumse milne aayi hoon." Says Amrita. Sameer gets shocked and asks, "Tumne mujhe pehle kyun nahi bataya?" to which Amrita smiles and answers, "bas, aise hi". "Par...Amrita...tum aise... achanak se..." Sameer wasn't finished but Amrita puts her finger on his lip amd says, "Shhh...its okay Sameer, tum guilty feel mat karo." Amrita puts her finger down and goes on, "Humein saath mein sirf teen mahine hi huye hain, aur main maanti hoon ki main, iss rishtey ko lekar shuru mein serious thi, par jaise jaise waqt beetata gaya, mujhe samajh aa gaya ki, hum dono dost hi behtar hain." Being silent for a few seconds, Amrita goes on, "Waise bhi, mujhe Delhi toh wapas jaana hi tha na, mera ghar, meri family, toh wahi hain. Iss rishtey ka, kabhi koi future tha hi nahi. Main toh bas, tumhare Nanaji ke jaane ke baad, tum akele naa ho, bol kar yaha aa gayi, aur tumhara dard baatnein ki koshish ki, par ye rishta tumhare liye ek bhoj ban gaya, aur main kisi ke liye bhoj nahi banna chahati Sameer." "Amrita, tum ye sab kya bol rahi ho, tum mere liye kabhi bhi bhoj nahi thi." Says Sameer trying to convince her. "Sameer main jaanti hoon....tum mujhse pyar nahi karte, aur na hi main karti hoon, hum bas ek doosre ko like karte the, aur maine isse pyar mein badalne ki koshish ki, par sach toh ye hain ki, pyar kabhi bhi koshish karne se nahi hota hain, pyar toh bas.... ho jaata hain." Amrita now holds Sameer's both hands and says, "Toh...main bas itna bolungu ki, tum guilty feel mat karo. Hum dost the, aur hamesha rahenge. Aur jab bhi meri zaroorat pade, mujhe bejhijak call kar sakte ho.". With this, Sameer and Amrita smile at each other. "Main tumhe miss karunga Amrita." Says Sameer. "Maana ki hamara relationship successful nahi hua par, maine tumhe hamesha apna dost maana hain".

"Haan wo sab theek hain, par abhi humara break-up hua nahi hain," says Amrita. Sameer gets confused and asks, "matlab?". "Matlab ki, agar break-up kar hi rahe hain toh, aise Bhai-Behen ki tarah haath mila ke kyun kare. Couple ki tarah break-up karte hain." Says Amrita. "Main kuch samjha nahi", says Sameer still confused. Amrita goes and closes the door of Sameer's room, turns back and gives a sly smile. Sameer, now understanding what she meant smiles back at her. Amrita goes near Sameer, holds his face and kisses him passionately. After the kiss they look at each other, and Amrita throws him on the bed and falls all over him. Both had a hot and passionate sex for one last time and they both enjoyed it, before Amrita bidding farewell to Sameer.

Nirmal Jyoti Society, 15 June 1992.

Naina's Voiceover : Aakhir kaar wo din aa hi gaya, jab main College mein apna pehla kadam rakhne jaa rahi thi...aur doosri baar Sameer se milne waali thi. Bahut tension thi aakhir College kaisa hoga, par excitement bhi thi.

"Preeti, mera hair band kahan hain?" asks an irritated Naina searching all over the place. "Arre mujhe kya pata, Almari mein hoga na." says Preeti, who was combing her hair. "Aur waise bhi, tujhe hair band ki kya zaroorat hain, College mein khule baal rakhna allowed hota hain. Khule baal rakhegi toh aur achhi lagegi". "Tujhse na maine salah nahi maangi hain, jo pooch rahi hoon, bas uska jawaab de, aur almari mein nahi hain, isiliye tujhse pooch rahi hoon." Says Naina. "Arre bola na mujhe nahi pata" says Preeti now she also getting irritated. "Tune hi usse kahi idhar-udhar kiya hoga." Says Naina. "Arre ek hair band ke liye kya ghar sar par utha liya hain tune, aur maine tere hair band ko haath tak nahi lagaya hain." Replies Preeti. "Haan, uthaungi ghar sar par main, wo hair band maine khaas college mein pehen ne ke liye liya tha.", says Naina. With this Shefali enters their room. "Naina, Preeti, kya kar rahi, hum log late ho rahe hain, chalo jaldi." Says Shefali. "Haan bas ho gaya Shefali, bas baal banana baaki hain", says Preeti. "Shefali dekh na, mera hair band hi nahi mil raha hain", says Naina with an upset face. "Arre Naina, itni si baat par mooh kya bana rahi hain. Baad mein dhoond lena hain. Mere paas extra hair band hain,abhi ussi se kaam chala le." Replies Shefali. Preeti asks,"Swati aur Kamya kaha hain?". "Dono ghar se nikal chuki hain. Raaste mein hum unhe pakad lenge. Tum log abhi jaldi karo." , says Shefali.

Naina and Preeti after getting ready, leave with Shefali for College. They catch Swati and Kamya on the way. "Bhaiya, aur kitni door hain VJN College?" Preeti asks the auto driver. "Bas thodi door aur madam." Replies the auto driver. "Kamya, thodi jagah dona." Says Swati. "Arre jagah ho, toh doon na, main khud hi adjust nahi kar paa rahi hoon. Bola tha maine hum doosri auto mein aa jayenge." Says Kamya. "Arre jab hum 5 log hi hain toh aur ek aur auto karke paise ki barbaadi kyun karna?." Replies Naina. "Waise achha hain na, ki Naina aur Shefali ne bhi hamare saath VJN mein admission liya, warna inke barhavi ke marks toh itne ache aaye the, inhe toh aaram se Patel mein admission mil jaata.", says Shefali. To which Shefali replies sarcastically, "haan ab kya kar sakte, ab tum log toh hamari standard tak pahuch nahi sakte, humein hi hamara standard girana padega.", to which everyone laughs. "Waise, mujhe aur Preeti ko kaafi minnate karni padi Chachaji ko manane ke liye. Wo toh mujhe Patel Mahavidyalaya hi bhejna chah rahe the. Badi mushkil se manaya unhe, ki top toh main kahi par bhi padh kar ho jaungi, par jin doston ke saath main bachpan se rahi hoon, unke bina mera mann hi nahi lagega." Says Naina. "Waise iss par top kar itna aasan nahi hoga Naina." Says Swati. "Aur nahi toh kya, iss baar tera competition Shefali se hain." Says Kamya. "Haan, ye bhi toh apne school ki topper reh chuki hain" says Preeti. "Arre arre arre...meri barabari Naina se toh mat hi karo." Says Shefali. "Naina ka muqabla padhai mein koi nahi kar sakta, main bhi nahi." Saying this, Shefali sarcastically holds her hands in front of Naina, to which Naina playfully hits her.

Enjoying their jokes and all, the girls didn't realize when they reached the College. The girls look around the big campus with their eyes and mouths open, completely being in awe. This surrounding was really new to them. They were just started adoring this place then only a car passes by them at full speed taking their and everybody's attention. It was a red Mercedes Benz 190E. It was not common to see a sports car during that time. So everybody was looking at it in awe. It might be the first time that a sports car entered VJN college. The car was going at full speed and slows down at once during the parking. The guy driving the car opens the car door and comes out, with black shades on and a cigarette in his hand. It was none other than our lovable hero Sameer Maheshwari. Munna and Pandit too come out of the car, getting happy that they have given their best first impression. Naina and Company were also looking at them along with the rest.

Naina's Voiceover : Main bhi na kitni badi waali buddhu thi. Ye Sameer baar baar mere saamne hero ki tarah entry maar raha tha. Bhagwan mujhe baar ishara de rahe the ki Naina, yahi hain tere sapnon ka Rajkumar, par mujhe samajh hi nahi aaya. Mere liye toh tab Sameer koi tha hi nahi, mujhe to ye bhi nahi pata tha ki uska naam Sameer tha ya kuch aur. Khair, main toh abhi tak Sameer ki Deewani bani nahi thi, College ki baki ladkiyan, wo toh usse pehli nazar mein hi dekh kar apna dil de baithi thi. Aur inme mere do dost bhi shaamil the.

"Haaye, kaun hain ye ladka?" asks Kamya. "Ekdum Salman Khan jaisa dikhta hain" says Swati. "Mujhe toh ye Salman Khan se bhi zyada handsome lag raha hain." Replies Kamya. "Ye toh Munna aur Pandit ka dost hain." Says Swati. Sameer, Munna and Pandit get surrounded by girls, who have now became fans of Sameer and his car. Seeing this, Kamya says, "chalo na, hum log bhi jaakar usse baat karte hain." To which Swati immediately agrees, but Naina says, "Koi zaroorat nahi hain, woh ladka theek nahi hain.". "Matlab, tu jaanti hain usse?" asks Kamya. "Haan wo, main, Naina aur Shefali ne usse Munna aur Pandit ke saath law garden mein kuch gundo ke saath maar peeth karte huye dekha tha." answers Preeti. "Arre toh kya hua, dekh na Naina wo kitna handsome hain." Says Swati. "Tum dono ne suna nahi ki abhi Preeti ne kya kaha? Wo ek awara ladka hain. Gunda hain wo. Aise ladko se jitna ho sake door rehna chahiye.", says Naina. Shefali says,"Yaar Naina, ab jaane de na unhe, baat hi toh karna chahti hain ye dono. Isme kya galat hain?" "Theek hain, jao, mujhe kya" replies Naina with an angry face.

Kamya and Swati go to talk to the boys. Seeing them surrounded by so many students, Kamya and Swati decide to make Munna and Pandit a bridge between them and Sameer. "Munna, Pandit", shouts Swati from behind. Munna hearing Swati's voice says, "Arre, ye toh Frock wali Pandit ki awaaz hain." He sees Swati and Kamya waving their hands from behind the crowd. Munna gets happy seeing Swati calling her, comes out of the crowd to talk to her. "Arre, frock wali Pandit, tu yaha? Kaisi hain, bade dinon baad dekh raha hoon tujhe." Asks Munna with a grin on his face. Swati and Kamya disappointed to see only Munna, "Tum akele kyun aaye, apne dost ko bhi bulao na." to which Munna asks,"kaun, Sameer?". "Uska naam Sameer hain? Hai, Naam bhi kitna pyara hain?" says Kamya. "Tum bulao na usse" says Swati to Munna. Munna gets sad realizing that Swati was calling him only to talk to Sameer, but his sadness turns into excitement when he sees Shefali standing with Naina and Preeti at a distance and he gets an idea. "Achha main mila doonga tum dono ko Sameer se, par tumhe bhi humein usse milana padega" says Munna. "Kisse?" ask Swati and Kamya in unison. Munna points towards Shefali. "Shefali se tumhe kyun milna hain?" asks Swati to which Munna replies,"Maine tujhse pucha ki tujhe kyun Sameer se milna hain?" with a tone of anger. "Achha theek hain, milwa denge hum tumhe Shefali se, tum Sameer ko lekar waha aa jao." With this Kamya takes Swati and goes back to Naina, Shefali and Preeti, and Munna goes to get Sameer out of the crowd.

"Kya hua, bina mile wapas kyun aa gayi tum dono?" asks Preeti. "Yaar Shefali, hamari madad kar dena please." Says Kamya. "Wo Munna na tujhe like karta hain. Tu usse dosti karle, toh uska dost Sameer bhi hamara dost ban jayega.". "Kyaa? Main usse kyun dosti karun?" asks a bewildered Shefali. "Shefali, tu dost ke liye itna bhi nahi kar sakti hain. Please maan jaa na." says Kamya. "Dekh Kamya mujhse ye sab nahi hoga." Says Shefali. "Arre bas, Hai, hello, acting hi toh karni hain, itna karne mein tera kya jaata hain." Kamya continues trying to convince Shefali. "Swati, tu bhi kuch bol na" says Kamya. "Huh, haan, main kya bolu?" Swati was having mixed feelings regarding this, as she was now getting kind of jealous seeing Munna being interested in Shefali. "Achha theek hain yaar, kar dungi." Says Shefali finally agreeing. "Kya theek hain, tum log un awara ladko se dosti karogi?" says Naina with a grumpy face. "Haan yaar, mujhe bhi theek nahi lag raha hain ye sab. Aur Shefali tu? tune to dekha tha na kaise ye teeno uss din gundo ki tarah maar peet kar rahe the?" says Preeti. To which Shefali replies, "Naina, Preeti, jo humein dikhayi deta hain wo hamesha poora sach nahi hota....Humne unhe ladte huye dekha tha, wo kyun lad rahe the, ye toh hum nahi jaante hain na?"

While the girls were talking, Munna and Pandit somehow clear all the crowd who were just not leaving as they couldn't have enough of admiring Sameer's car and especially the girls who were so busy talking to Sameer. Finally when the crowd was cleared, and all the girls left Sameer, all three boys walk towards the girls. Naina was staring at Sameer who was busy taking puffs of cigarette, not noticing her.

Naina's Voiceover : Haan haan, jaanti hoon main ki aap log bahut utavle hain ye jaan ne ke liye ki aakhir Sameer aur Naina ne pehli baar mil kar kya baatein ki hongi. Kya the wo pehle shabd jo Sameer ne mujhse kahe? Aur Kya wo mere liye yaadgaar the? In sab sawalo ka jawaab aap ko milenge par abhi nahi, iss kahani ke agle chapter mein.

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Hii😃

Its really an interesting story. Do continue it. Will love to read further.❤️

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Wow 3 chapters in one go... Very good. Nice story. Pl continue. Waiting for next update.

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That was an amazing start ..even i started to watch yudbh during lockdown and am too crazy that i started to watch all the episodes in a go...within 3 weeks...even i have a plan to write something on them...and one suggestion please write in english because am from chennai and i dont know much hindhi....and do pm me when u update

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