Dear May,
First of all sorry for replying so late and dil se thank you for such a beautiful story....will keep re-reading it. When I first read the title of story I was not very sure whether I would continue reading it...to be honest after reading the first chapter I was like how is it even possible, but out of curiosity I continued to follow the updates (that's the magic of your writing π) and I am glad I did that else would have missed this beautiful story. Little did I know I would fall so much in love with this story..desperately waiting for the updates (would have loved to see this made into a series).
Coming to the update....
Loved to read about the proposal for preeti. Finally, Naina has joined Sameer in the business (always wanted to see this, thank you so much). Sameer's happiness only doubled up on the prospect of getting glimpses of his Naina throughout the day β€.
I could imagine preeti's grumpy face after been asked to prepare mathia βΊ and that muttering under the breath after taiji's taunt to get plastic surgery done to fix Taiji's nose. This was so hilarious (I laughed out loudly π).
Loved the sweet talk between the sisters, Naina's sense of updating her sister with some much needed knowledge.
Liked the way you detailed the business proceedings, changing times, fashion sense; and clients and customers requirements.
Naina bossing Sameer over having food on time and caring for him was dil le lo β€π
The song played in the car was very apt and justified the beginning of their journey.
The anniversary celebrations and surprise was so beautiful. Naina's excitement, the cake cutting, the card everything was bliss and that line by Sameer "kisi ke pass meri Naina nahi hai" was cherry on top...it was love...it was blissπ.
Dil se thank you for giving us Swana, for munna-pandit, for preeti and including each and every character from the series in the story...they were like the spices needed to prepare a tempting and delicious chat π
Finally thank you so much and congratulations for completing the story and making your readers happyπ€.
Be proud of your hard work and achievements, your sincerity, determination and thank you for being patient with your readers.
"There is no greater agony than bearing an untold story inside you." - Mata Angelon
Hope this is not the end of the road in your story...keep writing, keep inspiring for I believe YOUR STORY IS STILL WAITING TO BE WRITTEN.
In wait of the next story...bye dear..take care and lots of love. God bless you.πππΌπ€
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