Originally posted by: Labhya
Isko Bolte hai chhotu sa pyaaara sa cute saaa ekdum. Mast sa OS meri suhani diidiiiii k taraf se ... Kya gift tha bohot hi bole to bohot hi maza aagaye ....
Tujhe maza aaya usse jyada aur kya chahiye hoga🤗
Ne wah meri belaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ko kisi ki nazar na lage....
bhagwan jhut na bulaye bhabhiji aapke muh se aise baat main toh dhanya hogyi🤣
Aur esa kyu kaha ki first time try kiya hai ? Arey itna mast to likha hai bohot zordaaaar....dil khush kr diya
First attempt to write this type of story.not my genre na lekin I am glad you liked it.
Mujhe naaaa kya kya pasand aaya mai batata hai aapko
ji bilkul
The starting i always wanted to see sameer and naina fighting with each other and that tooo when they were kidsss koochi koochi koooooo
Samaina as kids bhi sach main bhut pyare rhe honge💓💓
The mid again you fulfilled my wish of showing the fights between the teenage samaina and swapree's comment. True naina will surely miss sameer like anything
naina ne sameer ko miss nhi kia toh kya kia😂
And the ending (jo nahi honi chahiye thiii mujhe aur padhna thaaaaaa lekin honi ko kaun taal sakta hai ) sameer protecting naina from getting embarrassed and then their conversations and those jittery and butterfly feelings in naina and their confession!!!! Haaaye everything was soooooooooooo gooooooodd!!!!!!
khtm toh krna hi padta hain lekin ending main kiss shiss dia na khush krne ke liye
haha aapko pasand aaya bas
Amazzzzziiiiiiinngggggg write up like always
I loved the word Brat! Afterall That is what sameer is 😉
Ji Sameer was surely a brat before Naina made him her sameer
Keep smiling
Labhya 😃
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