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Res!
And a very Happy Birthday to Sweety!!!
Minu, this is such a beautiful update! As I read it in the first half what stood out to me was the contrast between the huge physical distance between them and the barely there emotional distance between them.
Finally, Naina has reached the point where she does not hold back. Sometime back she would have not shared the news of Nisha's attempted kidnapping so quickly, she would have tried to deal with the situation herself. But this time irrespective of where he was, whether he could do anything or not... she shared it immediately. And that marks a huge positive growth in their relationship.
The conversation between Sameer and Nisha was very endearing. They have become such a beautiful loving family! Her request to him to send a kiss to Mumma and he obliging immediately π³
Now, coming to the second half... phir she bouncer dal diya tumhe! Yeh do kamine toh thay hi pehele se... ab tisra Kaun aaya hai?! Again their edgy dialogues were very well written. Makes me very uncomfortable to read their exchange.. only because the evil makes my soul shiver. You have created these two characters so wonderfully! No one would ever want to encounter them in real life, but reading them here is exciting and intriguing.
Now looking forward to the unveiling of the mystery of the kidnapper!
Loving this well rounded offering from you dearπ
Love, May
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