Dearest Minu
Like literally while writing this review your words were echoing in my mind. I had been absent for long though I caught up with the Updates every now and then yet I failed to come and drop in my comments. Well for someone like you, it's unfair to not acknowledge your efforts and hard work. So I completely understand your frustration especially when you are penning such long updates and with such precision and detailing. Be it the language or the setting or the emotions or the characters in pregnant silence, your power to imagine each scenario is astounding. This is not the work of an amateur but someone I see with great potential and I mean it. Look at your chapters, they are replete with not only what keeps the readers hooked but also with detailing of a thorough professional which makes each setting or backdrop just so believable. It is all so realistic and charming. Keep up the good work.
A lot has transpired in the past few chapters, be it naina s predicament which keeps leading her to that insane vikram or sameer s turmoil in the name of his family or the intimacy between the two central characters which seems to be progressing at a healthy rate.
But I'll talk about my favourite parts today from various chapters.
Coming to naina and her predicament, she is caught in a web, rather been tricked into a situation where no woman would want herself to be. The lives of two most valued people in her life is at stake and she would go to any length to save them. Yes she is being trapped yet she steeling herself against the malicious being. Staring him into the eye, challenging him with every ounce of strength. The strength that is borne out of her love for nisha and sameer. Nobody could have described the situation with more finesse that you did. The heroine, roared, hollered, struggled yet fought with such grit. I think Naina s character in this ff is praiseworthy. I literally felt proud being one seeing and feeling her grit. Marvellous is the word for you for depicting it.
Sameer and his family troubles have been an object of fancy even in our show. A lot of times its often conjured that sameer s anger issues in the show stems from his very roots. Here I loved how you have handled the entire plot. Be it naina s confrontation with somani and visakha or sameer meeting his half brother and his wife. Especially the part with rohan wherein he invites sameer over to his place. Stargazing Lillie's, you had me look it up on Google and I was pleasantly enchanted not only with the flowers but also the way the entire scene at rohans house panned out. It felt like the an Iron shield that had been built with tenacity and grit was starting to melt. I loved Amrita, her chirpyness, made me feel a kind of kinship with her. It all felt so cozy and cuddlesome. Though sameer tried to keep his emotions at bay yet they made their way straight into his heart and undeniably the efforts were rewarded in a subtle yet touching manner. It was beautiful.
Nisha I can rave about that kid relentlessly. She gives me prishi vibes like literally. And the more my daughter grows the more I feel closer to nisha. Am sure she too would have plenty of questions to asks when she grows up like Nisha does. Cowboys and playboys!!!!! Haha haha I just can't stop laughing. In fact my shoulders are shaking from the north while I type these words for you. Am sure answer had a gala time explaining. Especially boys who play are playboys hahahhaah, am sure he wouldn't want any such boy near nisha when she grows up. Kids, they are like this rainbow in your life, no matter the kind of day you are experiencing, they always seem to make it bright! And the brightness dulls only when they are ill.that entire episode, I could picture myself. The frantic me running pillar to post to get my baby back to health. The pain, anguish, even anger in both sameer and naina seemed so relatable to me. Your mind actually stops functioning and you are in a kind of limbo and all you can think about is your child and whether and how to make her feel better. You do everything in your power while you pray and hope for the best. The sameer and naina of your ff did just that. Am sure all doubts lingering in naina s mind are gone forever since the way answer handled the entire situation extending his support and love was beautiful in very sense. Nisha couldn't have asked for better parents. She is blessed.
Intimacy
The topic is often a taboo to be discussed in open groups especially in the vicinity of elders in our society yet its all part and parcel of our daily lives. Sameer and naina s progression has been gradual and ethereal here. There's love and then there lust. The lust is laced with love and with need though it's cossetted in care. The love making scenes depict just the emotions. They are not only borne out of lust and love but a myriad of emotions that the two feel for one another. The act is about giving a d even deriving pleasure. Pleasure is at the very core, yet at the end you pine the care, the warmth, you want yourself to be held while you bask in the post coital bliss. And hence the emptiness that naina felt after her session of self gratification was quite relatable. Your body has needs, it understands hunger, and somewhere the parched feeling is difficult to live through until you are satiated bodily. The lust is doused and the famished body is fed by an act of self gratification yet the soul pines for love, for togetherness, for that one being who is your soul mate and that has nothing to do with lust or hunger. Brilliant is the word!!!!!
Hahahah cherry on the cake was the object! Cleanser! Hahhaha like literally you have an amazing sense of humour! That part was hilarious. I had a laugh riot imagining chachijis expressions while she tried gushing the object in naina s hand. Even sameer finding out about it, hahah it was amazing! The wheedling sameer and the flustered naina were a delight to read about.
Eagerly waiting for the next part
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