Le jaa mujhe saath tere,pt 10 on pg 70,teaser on 74,27/1

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Hi everyone,today I am really happy,as today I am here with my 150th story.


Yes,today I am going to start my 150th story and it's a really very big thing for me,so a big thanks to all my lovely readers for ur love and support.


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Love u all


Before updating this story ,I wanna share something with u all,these days I am facing criticism and mocking,that my stories r really bad and now boring and monotonous.though I don't wanted to share all this,but this is making me very sad now a days,so I wanna ask,if u all too think so ,please do tell me .I will just update my stories and then quit writing ,as sometimes,these mocking get really bad.


Achcha enough of my banter,do enjoy the new prologue and don't forget to congratulate me on my big success.


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Index

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PART 1

PART 2

PART 3

PART 4

PART 5

PART 6

PART 7

PART 8

PART 9

PART 10

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Author's note-based on original yhm with a bit of twist as per -RKB-'s suggestion.


LE JAA MUJHE SAATH TERE

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Raman-bahut achcha khel khela tumne,miss iyer.main toh tumhe bholi samjhta tha but tum itni shatir niklogi ,umeed nahi thi mujhe. Thoda saa bhi bura nahi lagaa naa tumhe khud ko iss tarah bhejte hue.he said in sheer anger clapping his hand .

Ishita-shut up Mr bhalla,don't u dare to say this,main muh tod dungi tumhara.

Raman clutched her hair and said-just shup up,warna jaan le lunga .abhi bhi tum mein itni himmat hai ,ki tum mujhse nazarein mila kar baat kar rahin ho.kitni ghatiya ho.paison ke liye koi itna kaise gir sakta hai.mujhe toh lagta tha,ki shagun duniya mein sabse ghatiya hai,but tumne toh uska record bhi tod diya aur phir se saabit kar diya,ki saari ladkiyan bikau hoti hai,bas keemat lagane ki zarurat hoti hai.

Ishita wiped her tears and said pushing him-pata nahi main tumse baat bhi kyun kar rahi hoon.mujhe tumhe koi safai dene ki zarurat nahi,mera sach main jaanti hoon aur mere parent ko mujh par bharosha hai ,I don't owe u an explanation,Mr bhalla.

Raman-tumne joh mere saath,meri ruhi ke saath kiya hai,usse maaf nahi karunga main aur bhoolunga toh kabhi nahi .tumhari zindagi maut se badtar naa bana di,toh tum bhi kya yaad rakhogi,ki koi mila tha tumhe ,Raman Kumar bhalla naam ka,main tumhe barbaad kar dunga,Dr ishita iyer,aur yeh vada hai mera tumse. He was saying when they heard ruhi crying bitterly.

Both turned and saw ashgun taking ruhi to the car while she was crying bitterly to let her go.

She opened her arms and cried-papa,mujhe apne saath le chalo,mujhe shagun mumma ke saath nahi jaana .she was crying making ishra cry with her,but shagun put her in the car and drive away.

Ishra look at each other and Raman said-i hate u ,Ishita iyer .

Ishita-it goes without saying,the feeling is mutual Mr Raman Kumar bhalla.she said and both walked in opposite direction.


That's all,enjoy.

Edited by cutieruhi - 4 years ago
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Updated something new.

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Congratulations di on your achievement as a writer...πŸ₯³πŸ₯³

And please don't get demotivated by some stupid mockings.....we love you and your stories alot😘😘😘

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Congratulations on your succes di❀️❀️❀️

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Omg di 150 stories.......thats huge diπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Many many congratulations πŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ₯³

Don’t listen to these mockings di

These people don’t know your talent and worth

We have seen u writing since so many years and so many different stories di

This is your real talent.....don’t let yourself get affected

We are with u❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️

Fabulous prologue di

Loved it

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Posted: 4 years ago
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First of all congratulations for your 150th story di....

And don't listen to idiot's.. i love your each and every story of yours

Very interesting prologue di.....

Continue soon plz

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Congratulations di

on your achievement as a writer..

Omg 150 stories...really amazing sisπŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—

Plzz ignore negativity sis

They always try to hurting peoples

Be positive always sis

I read your stories daily sis..

I have any tension just read your stories

it's make feel very good and also very much relaxedπŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—

Your stories really very different and unique sis ...

You are really talented ..and also wonderful writer πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—

Plzz sis update stories ...

Eagerly waiting to read your stories

Love u lotsssπŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—

KILL THEM WITH YOUR SUCCESS AND BURY THEM WITH A SMILEπŸ™‚

Edited by suwathi78 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Big big congratulations

When success comes its common criticism will come along with it u don't be disappointed

U r just awesome remember that

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Congratulations dear

Awesome staring

Eagerly waiting for next part

Plz continue soon

Nd thanks for pm

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