Nice prologue pls update soon
Nice prologue pls update soon
Thank you for the PM!!! Interesting start, it reminded me of my baby’s mother...
Originally posted by: ishrasoul
My Illegal Wife
Prologue
raman was pacing to and fro while his dadi was sitting in front of him she holds raman hand and says: sit down puttar
raman: how can you be so cool dadi.. i cant believe.. you are not joking na
dadi: na puttar i am not joking
raman: matlab in real you got me married to her in childhood
dadi: yes puttar. tumhari kundli mein dosh tha jo kay shadi hone kay baad hi hat sakta tha isiley i got you married to her
raman: and now you are telling me right one week before my engagement with shagun.
dadi: puttar tu shadi nhe kar sakta kisi aur say you are already married she is your wife
raman: dadi she is my illegal wife. you know i am doomed because of you. ab kiya hoga mummy papa shagun how will they react aur mein kahan say dhondho ga usy..
dadi: ishita.. ishita naam hai uska..
raman shook his head and thinks: chal beta raman start your mission to find your illegal wife ishita...
thats it my dear friends i hope you all will like it waiting for your comments and response
love
riddi
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Lovely start
Now Raman will search for his illegal wife
Update part 1 soonish
Beautiful update
Update soon
Thnx for this one .. I thought u won’t write it coz it came 2nd in the polling ... but u wrote ...I loved the whole concept 😚😚start writing soonish🥰🥰🥰
First of all thankyou somuch Rida for dedicating this story to me .
Second its a lovely prologue .
So ishra had childhood marriage .
I want ishita to be strong in this story .
Waiting for part one .
Thanks for pm .
Hello friends I am here to start this story. I really hope you will enjoy reading the journey of raman and his illegal wife ishita.
My illegal wife
Part 1
Mrs bhalla were checking the arrangement for the engagement as it is around the corner. Mr bhalla comes and says: stop toshi jee let the help do the arrangement and whats the hurry abhi 6 din hai engagement mein
Mrs bhalla glares at him and says: you don’t know anything. Just keep quite
Mr bhalla: its his engagement not marriage. Pata nhe ap shadi pay kiya karogi
Mrs bhalla: I want everything perfect for my son. He is raman kumar bhalla. Muje koi kami nhe chahiye.
Mr bhalla: wesy apky ladly sahibzade kahan hai
Mrs bhalla: he is with mummy jee. You know nw how much he loves his dadi.
Mr bhalla: I know maa bohat pyaar karti hain raman. I will go to them.
Mrs bhalla stops him and says: no help me. You check the invitation list. Abhi aur bhi kaam hain.
Mrs bhalla nods and both gets engrossed in preparation of engagement of raman their son unknown that something is cooking between dadi and pota.
Dadi room
Raman was sitting near vasundrahis dadi still unable to digest the shocking news his dadi had gave him. He looks at dadi and says: dadi in real you got me married at such tender age just because a so called pandit said that I will die if I didn’t get married to ameen rashi girl.
dadi nods and says: I will tell you everything raman
raman nods and says: I have all ears dadi but no long flashback story keep it short and simple. He gives his dimple smile while dadi chuckles listening to raman words and hits him lightly and says: shaitan..
raman shook his head and says: oh hello.. I am not devil.. you are devil who has dropped this bomb on me today..
dadi: will you listen to me. She glares at raman who nods his head like a scared kitten and signs her to continue. Dadi caresses raman face and start narrating past.
Om Prakash and santoshi had baby boy after long wait of six years. Bhallas were ecstatic with the new found happiness they named the baby raman kumar bhalla. He was apple of eyes. after him they had twins rinki and simmi. being the only son of bhallas every body in the family showered love and affection on him. Vasundra lived in village while om lives with his family in dehli as he was struggling to furnish his business. When raman turns 8 he start getting frequently sick he uses to have high fever no medicine was working on him.
Vasundra gets worried for her grandson, she goes to pandit and tells him the state of raman who told her that there is some dosh in raman kundli and it will be removed only when he will marry a girl who is meen rashi. Vasu was shocked listening to pandit she tells the same to bhallas who instantly disagree that its not possible.
Bhallas were doing everything which is in their hands but nothing worked. Vasundra asked them to visit her in village as there are many ved. Not having other option bhallas visit and start treatment of raman by ved. Vasundra hada friend subbhlaxmi who was living with her granddaughter ishita who is orphan. Vasundra gets to know about ishita having meen rashi
She shares shubblaxmi abou tpandit prediction she pleads her to get ishita married to raman to save his life. Laxmi denies straight as she cant play with life of ishita. Otherside raman health start detoriating making vasundra scared. One day she sneakily gets the two kids and trick them with playing and got them married.
She hides the matter with everyone while after three days raman fever got subsided and he start getting better. Bhallas leaves the village while vasundra thought to forget the matter of marriage as no one knows it being selfish. But one day laxmi gets to hear the talk of vasundra and pandit who got ishra married.
She was shocked seeing her best friends has betrayed her. She lashes out on her and tells that she doesn’t accept this marriage and she is taking ishu with her and never want to meet vasundra ever.
Vasundra looks at raman and says: after that day I never met laxmi I don’t know where she is.
Raman: dadi you betrayed your friend.
Vasundra: I love you my child I was selfish I wanted to save you at any cost
Raman: but why now? You only told me that your friend don’t accept it as marriage.. in fact that was not marriage it was your blind faith.
Vasundra: you are not married in eyes of law but in eyes of god you and ishita are married to each other I couldn’t hide this fact from you now its your decision.
Raman: I don’t think god accept these kind of marriages.
Vasundra looks down and says:do find her raman.. kiya pata wo aj bhi tere naam pay bethi ho.
Raman looks at his dadi and thinks: itna simple to nhe hai I am sure dadi is again hiding something. But what.. he holds dadi hand and says: dadi I am youngest CEO agar media ko ye pata laga kay meri koi illegal biwi hai to.. sab khatam ho jayega. I don’t know how to handle it. And shagun.. I have promised her. Uskakiya
Vasundra: you have to do something raman.
Raman: okay let me think but this matter will not go out. My position will be at stake.
Vasundra: raman tu aisa kar Chennai ja laxmi ki behan wahan hoti thi kiya pata wo log wahan hoon.
Raman: how can I find them in this big country dadi. Aur agar dhoondh liya to kiya. Aur kiyon dhoondho the marriage was illegal infact null and void. Lets forget it
Vasundra: no.. you have to find her.. for my sake. Meri kasam raman.
Raman looks suspiciously at his dadi who is so keen to pursue him to find his illegal wife. He pulls his hairs in frustration thinking he is trapped badly. He leaves the room deciding that he will lie to his dadi that he tried finding her but couldn’t and will get married to shagun he thought this is best solution for this mess but unknown to him, somebody has listened and recorded everything and next morning everything will get changed.
Otherside dadi was sitting on her rocking chair and says: raman I didn’t told you full truth because you will shrug it off thinking that I am illogical. Pandit jee has told me that your life is going to turn upside down and only your wife will save you. I hope you will find ishita before it become too late.
That’s it my dear friends I hopeyou all will like it waiting for your lovely comment and response don’t forget to hit like also. ishita will be introduced little late in this story because before the quest of raman finding his illegal wife I will provide closure to shagun.
Love
riddi
Interesting start
I really liked the fact that raman is not in denial.
Oh is she a village girl
M curious
Waiting for next part
Superb part
Loved it
Update soon
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