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Posted: 4 years ago
#61

Beautiful start.. Plz continue

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#62

Yes please.... Update it soon

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neki aur puchh puchh...fouran uodate kardo dear

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Yes I would like an update on this story and to be on the PM list for future updates.

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Originally posted by: UmeraTariq

Would you guys like an update of this story?



Off course please go for it.

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Yes pls update

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Thank you for Umera for kick-starting such a delicately poised IshRa story at this point of time... The premise is based on YHM which excites me more, albeit it's a bit mellowed version of YHM..As such, we don't see hate between IshRa but only Mohabbatein ☺️☺️

I was certainly impressed with the Raman in this story, lol he is no Raavan Kumar 😁... He is marrying Ishita for a reason but he wants to give a chance to this relationship for themselves 😍, a welcoming gesture...And most importantly Ishita and Raman are willing to talk to each other and ready to flush out their differences...

Ishita isn't under any face, she vented out her pain and insecurities in front of Raman, who was equally empathetic... Also, loved the characters of Mrs Iyer and Toshiji, especially the latter's talk with Ishita, easing out her insecurity... The duo of son and mother indeed made Ishita wanted, not just for the sake of Ruhi ke liye... Awaiting quick updates...

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: srini18

Thank you for Umera for kick-starting such a delicately poised IshRa story at this point of time... The premise is based on YHM which excites me more, albeit it's a bit mellowed version of YHM..As such, we don't see hate between IshRa but only Mohabbatein ☺️☺️

I was certainly impressed with the Raman in this story, lol he is no Raavan Kumar 😁... He is marrying Ishita for a reason but he wants to give a chance to this relationship for themselves 😍, a welcoming gesture...And most importantly Ishita and Raman are willing to talk to each other and ready to flush out their differences...

Ishita isn't under any face, she vented out her pain and insecurities in front of Raman, who was equally empathetic... Also, loved the characters of Mrs Iyer and Toshiji, especially the latter's talk with Ishita, easing out her insecurity... The duo of son and mother indeed made Ishita wanted, not just for the sake of Ruhi ke liye... Awaiting quick updates...


Thank you so much Srini for such a detailed response. It makes me very happy to see appreciation for a story I've written with a lot of love and heart.


Thank you once again.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#69

I will definitely get back to this story. I've a lot planned in terms of story. Hopefully, once I'm free I'll post an update.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Teaser

The Bhallas and Iyyers distributed sweets amongst each other and rejoiced at this happy occasion. Raman called Ishita aside and took her hand in his. This gesture made Ishita’s heart beat fast and seeing Raman teary-eyed did not help either. She cupped his face and made him look into her eyes. She could tell he was broken from within. Ishita wiped his tears and signaled him to tell her what was wrong. He mouthed “Ruhi” as a mere whisper and Ishita understood exactly what was wrong. She held Raman’s hand and took him out in her car.

Ishita drove aimlessly for hours, not knowing where to go. She just kept on driving and finally arrived at a stop. Raman got out of the car and walked a slight distance to slump onto the ground. Ishita rushed to him and held him to make him sit on a nearby bench.

Please do give your likes and feedback. I would want to know what you think of the story. Thank you

Edited by UmeraTariq - 4 years ago
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