OS : Main Ishitha, sirf Ishitha - updated part 22 on pg 43 21.11 - Page 3

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Bhallas r so selfish. They take adi kid and throw ishu out of their house. Adi came back to home and all r shocked to see him. He searches for his ishimaa.
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just wrote part 2..
started as an os and wanted to finish in one shot but looks i need another 2 updates.. updating part 2 here

Please read and give your feedback.

Adi broke down after telling them his entire hardships. All of them tried to console him. With great difficulty he gathered himself and asked ishima ko phone kiya kya. Abhi thak nahi pahunchi'

All of them were scared not knowing what to tell him

Part 2

Bhallas and Iyers are looking at each other not knowing what to do..

Raman Adi tum pehle andhar jao. Fresh ho jao phir baath karenge.

Adi Teek hain papa. Par ishima ko boliye jaldi aane ko. Ruhi , Pihu aaj chutti le lena.. hum ishima ke saath khoob masti karenge..ok.. main yun gaya aur yun aaya

Raman chal ja andhar aur fresh ho jao. Aliya jao uske saath

Aliya goes inside and sees Adi looking at his room. She goes inside and hugs him tight. She starts howling and crying and Adi is consoling her. He says sorry and ensures he will never leave her again.. She smiles and says jao jaakar ready ho jao.. itne gandhe lag rahe ho..

Outside all of them are thinking what to do.. They are happy Adi is back and want to call Ishitha back.

Raman- Maa main use phone kar doonga and bolunga ghar aane kho.. Adi ko khud dekhegi tho use accha lagega..

Toshiji haan puttar. Jaldi phone kar. Aaj kushi ka maauka hain. Adi waapis aa gaya or ishitha bhi aa jayegi..

Ruhi and Pihu are not feeling good. They are thinking how the family is not talking about apologizing or having a conversation with her. They just assumed she will come back. As a woman Ruhi is feeling very bad though she is happy atleast now her ishima will be back home.

Raman tries her number and she comes online

Raman Ishitha kya tum abhi ghar aa sakthi ho. Bahut important hain.

Ishitha Hmmm

Raman kya soch rahi hain.. important hain. Please jaldi aa jao.

Ishitha is very confused why Raman is calling her.. His voice was sounding excited and happy. But why would he call her when he is happy. What is so important that he wants her to come home. It cant be about Ruhi or Pihu because he does not let them meet her. Bacha to unhi ke paas hain. Ab kya ho gaya. She is very confused and worried. She cant handle another show down inher life. She has lost everything. He family, her kids, her parents, her siblings, her love everything. She has nothing more other than her life to lose.

Ishitha Nahi Raman . aap mujhe phone mein batiye kya baat hain.. Abhi main clinic mein hoon aur nikalna mushkil hain.

Raman dekho, bahut zarrori hain. Please aa jao.

Ishitha is in shocked as Raman said please.. she could not refuse

Ishitha teek hain. Main abhi nikalthi hoon.

Adi comes out and sees all of them worried standing in the hall. He again asks the same

Adi Ishima kahan hain.

Raman phone kar diya hain. Abhi aa jayegi. Tu pehle khana kha le.

Adi ah voh bhi teek hain. Kya hain khane mein..

He goes to the kitchen and looks around and finds all non veg. He is a little disappointed. He wants something light.

Adi Arre Ishima ne kya banaya aaj. Mujhe vo de do Neelu didi.

Neelu is stammering andlooking at everybody and saying Adi Baba vo ishitha bhabi... Voh... Bhabhi..

Adi kya huwa Neelu Didi.. khana hi to maanga hain. Kya hua.

He looks around and finds everybody's reaction very suspicious. He looks around and sees Ruhi staring at all of them. Aliya is trying to look everywhere but him.

Adi Kya hua.. aise kyu dekh rahe ho sab log. Ruhi, kya hua.. batao mujhe

Ruhi - Bhai aap pehle kha lo.

Adi Nahi pehle batao..

Ruhi Bhai, ishima ab hamare saath yahan nahi rehthi.. Abhi papa ne unhe phone kiya aur yahan bulaya.. Ishima ko patha nahin ki aap waapis aa gaye ho.

Adi Kya matlab yahan nahi rahti. Kyu kya huwa.

Ruhi Kyoki unhone aap ko goli maari thi..

Adi - haan voh tho teek hain. Par maine param aur suraj ko baath karthe huye suna ki ishima ko sazaa nahin huyi kyoki unhone self defense mein shoot kiya tha.

Ruhi haan bhai court ne sazaa nahin di par gharwalon ne di. Ishima ko sabne boycott kar liya. Kohi unse baath nahi kartha aur unka naam bhi lena allowed nahin hain. Main aur Pihu unse chup chup ke milte hain.

Adi kya? Matlab humne phir se ishima ko iss ghar se nikal diya..zaahir si baath hain papa ne baanj, manhoos jaise shabd bhi istemel kiye honge. Hain na papa?

Raman haan kiya tha maine. Usne tuje maara..

Adi aur maara kyu.. maine kaam hi kuch aise kiye the right.. manta hoon goli maarna galat baat hain par aap he sochiye.. haalat kaise huwe honge ki ishima ne mujh par goli chalayi.. baath ki aapne unse.. poocha ki kya huwa.. nahi bus bol diya hoga chale jao. Right?

Adi ab kya kehkar bulaya hain. Ah?

Raman bas bulaya hain. Kuch nahi bola..

Adi - I don't believe this. Humne to boycott kiya par thatha, patti aapne kyu kiya? Jab bhi koi musibhat aati hain hum sab ishima ko alag kar dete hain. Par jab hum chahthe tab unko hum sab ke liya sab kuch tyaag karna padtha hain .hain na?

Just then Shagun and Mani enter as Aliya has informed them when Adi was taking a shower. They are so happy to see Adi. Shagun and Mani come running to him and Shagun is excited and hugs him tight. Adi hugs them back but is still annoyed that his Ishima was sent out.

Adi Ah.. hum kahan the? Ruhi aur pihu ke alawa aur kaun ishima se baath kartha hain.

Shagun does not understand that Adi is angry. She thinks he is angry with Ishitha and says Adi humme se kisi ne bhi ussse baath nahi ki..

Adi voh tho mujhe patha hain. Papa ne bola hoga ki koi baath nahi karega.. par main puch raha hoon ruhi aur pihu ke alawa aur kaun ishima se baath kartha hain.

Kiran - Main.. main ishitha se har do din me baath karthi hoon. Main usse akela nahin chod sakthi thi. Bura lag raha tha mujhe. Usne mere liya bahuth kuch kiya hain.

Iyers are shocked to hear that Kiran is in touch with Ishitha.

Mani understands the situation and tells main bhi uske touch mein hoon. Voh kya haine ki vo sabse achi dost hain aur kabhi mera bura nahi chaha. To main usse kaise akela chod deta.

Shagun Mani tum uske touch me the. Ye jante huye bhi ki usne mere beta ko mara hain

Adi Main unka beta hoon Shagun mamma.

Adi Aur tum Aliya.. hamesh mujse ladthi rahti ho ki tum ishima ki favourite aur main nahin. Tumne kaise soch liya ki ishima jaan boochke tumari zindagi barbadh karegi? Aap sab ne bahut galat kiya.. maanta hoon goli maarna bahut galat hain par kya aap logo ne ek baar ishima se pooocha ki unki halath kya thi maarne ke bad..

Aaj ishima ke paas unke betiya aur unka dost aur Kiran aunty hain. Jo unka asli parivar hain vo unse door hain. Kya fayda aisi parivaar ka.

Just then the door bell rings.. Neelu goes and opens the door. She is so happy to see her favourite bhabhi back. Ishitha is at the door but hesitant to step in.

Neelu Bhabh andar aayiye na..

Ishitha - Nahi Neelu.. raman ko bolo ki main aayi hoon. Vo mujse kuch kehna chahthe the.

Raman walks to the door and says andar aa jao.

Ishitha- its ok Raman. Aap boliye kya bolna hain.

Raman nahi Ishitha ek baar andar aake dekh to lo.

Ishitha is worried that probably somebody is sick. She hesistantly steps in to see Adi there. She is shocked, overwhelmed, happy, confused, speechless and tears are roling down automatically. She is taking step by step to reach him.

He hugs her tight and says - Ishima

Adi is all what ishitha managed to say before collapsing.


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