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Posted: 2 years ago
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Aaj sunani hai ye kahani tumhe,

Kahani nahi beeti hai jo zamane mein hai wo gaatha yeh,

Baat hai yeh us waqt ki jab adharm dhara par faila tha,

Dwaparayug mein jo janma wo hamara kanha tha,

Bankar aaya tha wo Kans ka kaal,

Karne dur is dharti ka har malal,

jagpaalak aaya tha bann baalak,

Putra Yashoda ka wo kehlaya tha gopalak,

Kali raat me janam liya tha mitaane ko andhkaar,

Uske janam lete hi khul gaye the kaaraagaar ke sabhi dwaar,

Leeladhar ki hi ye leela thi,

Jo khuli Vasu-Devaki ki bediyaan thi,

Dhaar ke bhagwaan ko sar pe,

Pahunche Vasudev Yamuna ke teere,

Jaan gai thi Yamuna maai,

Hari ne yeh adbhut leela hai dikhaai,

Phir Chhune Hari charan ko,

Yamuna maa thi uchhal padi,

Chuye jab charan banwari ke tab thi Yamuna ghati,

De Vasudev ko Gokul ka raasta,

Tha nibhaya Yamuna ne farz apna,

Paakar maarg Vasudev Gokul ko aaye,

Devakinandan fir Laal Yashoda ke kehlaaye,

Putra ko chhod Yashoda dware, nandsuta ko le Vasudev the kaaragaar padhare,

Devi ne phir Kans ko batlaya,

Teri maut bann swayam ishwar Gokul hai aaya,

Yahi katha thi Krishna janam ki,

Shuru ho gayi thi phir leelaaen bhagwan ki,

Bann gopala Jagdeeshwar hai aaye,

Kaise mahima hum unki gaaye!!



I wrote this in November but posting it now on the occasion of janmashtami [ yeah I am late] but do read it😂

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Posted: 2 years ago
#2

Wow. Very nice. So you are churning out your poetry gems in this forum. Nice. Jai Shree Krishna

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Posted: 2 years ago
#3

Originally posted by: nutmeg7

Wow. Very nice. So you are churning out your poetry gems in this forum. Nice. Jai Shree Krishna


Thank you❤️


@bold Nah yaad aaya toh post kar diya😂😂


Kaafi Arse se kuch likha hi nahi hai😂


HARE KRISHNA

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Posted: 2 years ago
#4

Originally posted by: Rani_Sahiba

Aaj sunani hai ye kahani tumhe,

Kahani nahi beeti hai jo zamane mein hai wo gaatha yeh,

Baat hai yeh us waqt ki jab adharm dhara par faila tha,

Dwaparayug mein jo janma wo hamara kanha tha,

Bankar aaya tha wo Kans ka kaal,

Karne dur is dharti ka har malal,

jagpaalak aaya tha bann baalak,

Putra Yashoda ka wo kehlaya tha gopalak,

Kali raat me janam liya tha mitaane ko andhkaar,

Uske janam lete hi khul gaye the kaaraagaar ke sabhi dwaar,

Leeladhar ki hi ye leela thi,

Jo khuli Vasu-Devaki ki bediyaan thi,

Dhaar ke bhagwaan ko sar pe,

Pahunche Vasudev Yamuna ke teere,

Jaan gai thi Yamuna maai,

Hari ne yeh adbhut leela hai dikhaai,

Phir Chhune Hari charan ko,

Yamuna maa thi uchhal padi,

Chuye jab charan banwari ke tab thi Yamuna ghati,

De Vasudev ko Gokul ka raasta,

Tha nibhaya Yamuna ne farz apna,

Paakar maarg Vasudev Gokul ko aaye,

Devakinandan fir Laal Yashoda ke kehlaaye,

Putra ko chhod Yashoda dware, nandsuta ko le Vasudev the kaaragaar padhare,

Devi ne phir Kans ko batlaya,

Teri maut bann swayam ishwar Gokul hai aaya,

Yahi katha thi Krishna janam ki,

Shuru ho gayi thi phir leelaaen bhagwan ki,

Bann gopala Jagdeeshwar hai aaye,

Kaise mahima hum unki gaaye!!



I wrote this in November but posting it now on the occasion of janmashtami [ yeah I am late] but do read it😂


Beautiful❤️ all the scenes played like movie in my mind while reading it


Do write more nd keep sharing😉

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Posted: 2 years ago
#5

Originally posted by: Rani_Sahiba

Aaj sunani hai ye kahani tumhe,

Kahani nahi beeti hai jo zamane mein hai wo gaatha yeh,

Baat hai yeh us waqt ki jab adharm dhara par faila tha,

Dwaparayug mein jo janma wo hamara kanha tha,

Bankar aaya tha wo Kans ka kaal,

Karne dur is dharti ka har malal,

jagpaalak aaya tha bann baalak,

Putra Yashoda ka wo kehlaya tha gopalak,

Kali raat me janam liya tha mitaane ko andhkaar,

Uske janam lete hi khul gaye the kaaraagaar ke sabhi dwaar,

Leeladhar ki hi ye leela thi,

Jo khuli Vasu-Devaki ki bediyaan thi,

Dhaar ke bhagwaan ko sar pe,

Pahunche Vasudev Yamuna ke teere,

Jaan gai thi Yamuna maai,

Hari ne yeh adbhut leela hai dikhaai,

Phir Chhune Hari charan ko,

Yamuna maa thi uchhal padi,

Chuye jab charan banwari ke tab thi Yamuna ghati,

De Vasudev ko Gokul ka raasta,

Tha nibhaya Yamuna ne farz apna,

Paakar maarg Vasudev Gokul ko aaye,

Devakinandan fir Laal Yashoda ke kehlaaye,

Putra ko chhod Yashoda dware, nandsuta ko le Vasudev the kaaragaar padhare,

Devi ne phir Kans ko batlaya,

Teri maut bann swayam ishwar Gokul hai aaya,

Yahi katha thi Krishna janam ki,

Shuru ho gayi thi phir leelaaen bhagwan ki,

Bann gopala Jagdeeshwar hai aaye,

Kaise mahima hum unki gaaye!!



I wrote this in November but posting it now on the occasion of janmashtami [ yeah I am late] but do read it😂

Wow such a beautiful poetry👍🏼. Loved it.

Jai shree krishna🤗.

One request ,my birthday is coming so can you pls write one poetry on me 😒Image

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Posted: 2 years ago
#6

Waah!! 👏🥳 ati sundar 😳🤗

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Posted: 2 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: SunqianFan

Wow such a beautiful poetry👍🏼. Loved it.

Jai shree krishna🤗.

One request ,my birthday is coming so can you pls write one poetry on me 😒Image


Thank you❤️


Kab hai?? Feb mein na??


Zarur likhenge😂😂

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Posted: 2 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: Rani_Sahiba


Thank you❤️


Kab hai?? Feb mein na??


Zarur likhenge😂😂

🤗.

😡 no , on 6 September. You forget it😭😭Image.

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Posted: 2 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: SunqianFan

🤗.

😡 no , on 6 September. You forget it😭😭Image.


Tune mujhe feb mein bataya tha😤

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Posted: 2 years ago
#10

This was so nice to read! ❤️

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