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1It is nice in this form.
Since you asked for feedback, I'd say you can restructure some lines to make them rhyme, not all the lines but maybe the even ones or odd ones.
You may also look into metres and try to fit the poetry into them.
Originally posted by: Satrangi_Curls
It is nice in this form.
Since you asked for feedback, I'd say you can restructure some lines to make them rhyme, not all the lines but maybe the even ones or odd ones.
You may also look into metres and try to fit the poetry into them.
I will do that 🤍 thank you for taking out time to read and give feedback 
Sneha, such an assertive declaration regarding male dominance! 
This kind of questioning of established norms should occur periodically in order to define our power of descent, which is essential to the survival of humanity on Earth! 
Originally posted by: Viswasruti
Sneha, such an assertive declaration regarding male dominance!
This kind of questioning of established norms should occur periodically in order to define our power of descent, which is essential to the survival of humanity on Earth!
Thank you so much 
I am happy you liked it. Your reply got lost in notifications, just saw now :(
Your comment made my day. Thank you The book will be releasing soon
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