Book Title: To Love Jason Thorn
Author: Ella Maise
Year published: December 2015 ( I thought it was released recently given it was listed in the new releases section in the WHSmith stores here in the UK)
Genre/s:
Contemporary romance, chick lit, romcom
Tropes (if applicable):
Brother's best friend, marriage of convenience, contract marriage
Probable Triggers:
N/A
Maturity rating (General audience/ teens/ Adult):
Adult
Your personal rating (out of 5):
3 Stars
Synopsis (a short spoiler-free blurb):
Jason Thorn… My brother’s childhood friend.
Oh, how stupidly in love with that boy I was. He was the first boy that made me blush, my first official crush. Sounds beautiful so far, right? That excitement that bubbles up inside you, those famous butterflies you feel for the very first time—he was the reason for them all. But, you only get to live in that fairytale world until they crush your hopes and dreams and then stomp on your heart for good measure. And boy did he crush my little heart into pieces.
After the stomping part he became the boy I did my best to stay away from—and let me tell you, it was pretty hard to do when he slept in the room right across from mine.
When tragedy struck his family and they moved away, I was ready to forget he ever existed.
Now he is a movie star, the one who makes women of all ages go into a screaming frenzy, the one who makes everyone swoon with that dimpled smile of his. Do you think that’s dreamy? I certainly don’t think so. How about me coming face to face with him? Nope still not dreamy. Not when I can’t even manage to look him in the eye.
Me? I’m Olive, a new writer. Actually, I’m THE writer of the book that inspired the movie he is about to star in on the big screen. As of late, I am also referred to as the oh-so-very-lucky girl who is about to become the wife of Jason Thorn.
Maybe you’re thinking yet again that this is all so dreamy? Nope, nothing dreamy going on here. Not even close.
Review
Rating: 3 🌟🌟🌟
Writing: 🌟🌟🌟
Hero: 🌟🌟
Heroine: 🌟🌟🌟
HEA ending.
I listened to the audiobook for this story whilst I baked a birthday cake, made a batch of oreo cheesecakes and a ferrero rocher bouquet 😂
Okay, so where do I start with this... I was conflicted with how I wanted to rate this. I settled for 3 😂 I think because I had listened to the audiobook for this, it made it a little easier to rate. If I were to sit and read this myself, I probably would've rated it a 2.5 and it would've taken me a week to finish it because I would have been bored possibly.
This is my second of Ella Maise, after reading her book 'Marriage for One' a couple of years ago, I did have high expectations because I did love that book. This one did not impress. The writing was simplistic and a little off. It was ok. Not the best or almost amazing which is what I wanted when I read her book.
I did like the beginning of starting with her childhood and the few scenes of her relationship between her brother and Jason. It shows the dynamic they shared which I enjoyed.
The blurb made it seem like a cute romantic story and I did think it was going to be like that but it was not. I know the trope is brother's best friend, but it is so cliche when every single sister of that brother has puppy eyes for that friend and follows them around. And the friend only seems to think you're cute. Not hot like the other girls he's eyeing and sleeping around with.
Olive had her heart broken and I really thought she'd remain detached following that heart break because she did develop feelings for him even if it seemed she was too young. But sometimes that childhood crush/first love sort of stays with you. Those first feelings of love and adoration, the sneaky side eyes, hot flustered cheeks trying to seem nonchalant. Even if it was one sided but they were friendly. Jason was great to her and doesn't seem to recall breaking her heart when they meet after so many years.
When they'd met, I thought she'd stay determined and stay out of his way by avoiding him. After the first one or two meets, she's got those puppy eyes for him and is willing to help him out with the issues he's facing and needs a wife. I just wish she'd made him work for it. Olive gave in rather quickly because each time they were close, she remembered the old flame of love she held in her heart for him.
The smutty scenes weren't great either. I did end up skipping because it was a little cringy and cheesy. The story I expected to be sweet romantic with a hot scene here or there but with the emotions of love or attraction etc but it lacked that. It was just all lust from Jason and from Olive, it was just her giving in to him so easily because she's held these feelings for him for so many bloody years. I wanted Jason to work for it, I wanted him to date her, even if it was some publicity stunt, I wanted him to date her and show a side to him that she did not know. But she did not get another side to him, she got the Jason Thorn that every other person sees.
Jason was not the dreamy boy Olive and others see him as. I did like his endearments for Olive and I think that's all I liked about him. And maybe the forehead kisses. I felt he lacked an actual personality, he was 2D for me rather than a fully fledged character. He did not have enough substance to his character. Even when it came to the chapters that were from his POV, I don't think I got anything besides that he likes Olive's ass and breasts and is always lusty for it. His love also seems shallow compared to Olive's. Actually his love is shallow for Olive and her entire family. I just remembered, her family had taken him in and were his support and showered him with the love, support and respected he needed but when he moved away, he did not keep in touch. I don't care that he did not keep in touch with Olive, but he should HAVE kept in touch with Dylan! That was his best friend. Also Dylan and Olive's parents. They'd loved him so yes that was something that disappointed me even more.
The twist or issue that makes him realise he loves her and wants her is cliche and again very simplistic so it was quite predictable when it came to the scenes.
The dreamy bit I think was the epilogue, the cute kinda romance I had wanted to see but got so little of it through the book.
So in conclusion, this was not it for me. But I will give Ella Maise another try because I loved her Marriage for One so I cannot write her off for a book that I did find okay.
My other current reads are:
It happened one summber by Tessa Bailey. On chapter 9 for that. Still trying to get my head around some stuff but it is cute and I am enjoying it a little. Some scenes I'm finding cringy and having the moments of second-hand embarassment 😂 but I'm pushing forward with it and hope it does impress.
Empress of Poisons by Bree Porter. On chapter 21 for that. LOVING THIS!!! There is not enough praise or words that I have at this moment for this story.
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