Super update... Smart sid... Jwala devi was arrested... Jwala devi and rajveer got punishment... Finally roli and rajjo bua revenge poori hogayi... Rosid United scene was super... Finally you got the title to your ff... Eagerly waiting for your new ff...
First of all congratulations rosid plan was very smart jwala devi think she is smart waiting for your new work
Finally, finally!!! This story has got a title🥳 special congratulations for that🤣
Coming to the update, Sid has finally learnt to be smart after being with Roli all these days😆
Jwala devi shocked, RoSid rocked😎
And what a proposal😆 I was thinking while reading Roli would say something very emotional to propose him but... Her confession was so direct🤣
But, Sid's confession loved it❤️
Finally, congratulations for completing the story🥳 hoping to read more from you. Keep writing😉
PS : you have played colour coding here too🤣
Congratulations for completing your first ff!!!🥳Loved it❤️ Keep writing!!!
Uff finally I completed reading ...and a bigggggg sorryyyyy for being super duper late to reply... first congratulations for completing your first story successfully 🥳and second congratulations for getting a title to your titleless FF...🥳😆
I had to say alot from chapter 13 - 30 😵😰 but will say in short as you know I am a kind of lazy person 😁... Story was fab , you portrayed it very well and all those foolproof plans which Roli made was super , felt little bad when Sid got to know that it is Roli who stole evidences and Roli married to Sid because she loves her was something not expected... Rudy friendship with Sid and Amar was so beautiful ❤️ yarrrr I wanted some more moments between these three now I am thinking I might have forced you to change your plots if I would have active that time , I liked there friendship alot I wanted some more 😭... I thought that Roli is behind seeking revenge for her family and it's good that later Sid and Amar with shyam / Karthik helped Roli for her missions or in roli's word social services 🤣... one thing which I liked most was when Sid and Amar went to Roli asking for their lost friend and sister, that was so sweet and Roli to allowed them inside 💖.... and at last Sid's plan was also impressive but I liked roli's most 😆... and and there confession it was beautiful 😍 , you gave only one Rosid scene 😡 don't you know we want more manasa di was right you should write next chapter with only and only Rosid's scene...
Again congratulations for completing your story and to me too that finally I completed reading 😰 ... I was behind you to start your story and now I'm only the last one to read it 🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️
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