Incomplete - WH Season 2 (FF) Episode 1 - 50 - Page 26

Created

Last reply

Replies

373

Views

140.7k

Users

13

Likes

349

Frequent Posters

Imiya07 thumbnail
Anniversary 9 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Ahem!
Couldn't guess is it!? 😆
SidYali story in center. Ah ahem! Not for long...
You'll know 😳
Garima04 thumbnail
Anniversary 9 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Aisha-Haja

Ahem!

Couldn't guess is it!?😆
SidYali story in center. Ah ahem! Not for long...
You'll know😳

Bad news mat do aise 😕
v_sidyali thumbnail
Anniversary 9 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Update padhke siddharth ka dialogue yaad aa gaya
Really uske jitna pyaar pure dehradun me koi nahin kar sakta
Love ur update yarr
Uttu ka kya problem hai yarr
Plz sidyali ka aur bad news mat de
Imiya07 thumbnail
Anniversary 9 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Incomplete - A Warrior High Fan Fiction
Episode 34 : I'm so doomed

In the evening, There is another 'on the spot' competition - Show me your style. It was all bout ramp walk, fashion, etc. For this, Trishna and Krissan were participating.

L (mocking) - Kya baath hai? Tris aur Kris ek saath!

Both of them stare at lucky and then later stare at each other. They go on stage.

I - Don't worry bro! Stage pe aag laga denge!

The competition starts. All others are getting ready for the next event which is the musical.
--------------------------------------------------------------

<music starts - teri meri kahani (gabbar is back)>
Utkarsh and Krissan are seen in the studio with song being played in the speakers.

hum se ye jo bhi harqat hui hai
mohabbat mohabbat mohabbat hui hai
kuchh itne hain hum tum
kami kuch nahi hai
Utkarsh and Krissan practice for their dance duet in next day's competition. They dance with a lot of expressions in their face.

jitna bhi jeena hai
tujhko hi jeena hai
jeete rahein jis tarah
Faded lights, curtains flying. Utkarsh wearing white and Krissan both baby pink. Looked like a dream sequence. Krissan lips as she danced. Utkarsh lifted her up

shaamo subah tu mera
tere bina kya mera
do jism jaan ek hai
na hona kabhi tu juda
teri meri kahaani
hai baarishon ka paani
ban ke jo ishq barse
teri meri kahaani
He puts her down. He dances alone as she stands looking at him. They continue dancing together. They had perfect coordination and chemistry.

As the dance got over, they wear standing in their end pose. They were both close to each other. They looked into each others eyes. Krissan closed her eyes expecting Utkarsh to kiss her

(Claps)
They hear the sound of someone clapping. Utkarsh and Krissan come back to normality. There stood Ayaz who was watching them so far.

Az - Wow Krissan. I can't believe it. Tumne sid ko ISS ke liye chod diya. Tumhara standard kitna gir gaya hai.

Krissan gives an angry look at Ayaz. She tries to rebut but Utkarsh just holds her hand. Ayaz sees this and gives an evil look.

Az - Usse bhi zyada shocking baath ye hai ki Utkarsh is with Krissan. Jisne uski so called maa, pet frog ko maar diya.

Utkarsh looks confused as Krissan looks scared not wanting her truth to be let out like this.

U - Ayaz, aap kya bak rahe ho?
Az (mocking) - Krissan tumne bathaya nahi? To your boyfriend?
K - Shut up Ayaz. (Desparate) Utkarsh yeh kuch bhi bolta hai. You dont listen. Lets go.

Ayaz gives a smirk. He looks at Krissan trying to take Utkarsh away from there.

Az - Tumhe kya lagta hai. Tumhara jo dappa tha wo seedhe girls dorm se mere paas kaise aaya? (Evil smile)
U - Kya keh raha hai?
Az - Sach. (Villain style) Tumhare maa ki mauth ka sach. Krissan gusse mein thi. Tumse aur tumhare doston se. Tumhare maa ko maarne ka idea bhi uski ka tha. Kyun krissan?
U - main janta hun tu Jhoot bol raha hai.
Az - Dont believe me? Krissan se hi pooch lo.

Utkarsh takes a look at krissan who looks tensed and guilty.

K - Woh. Back then, Main tumhe like nahi karti thi Utkarsh.

As she spoke, Utkarsh left her hand. Krissan looked up at him.

K - Utkarsh. Please. Now it's different. Ab aisa nahi hai. Tab mujhe tum log pasand nahi teh. So.

U (angry) - So? So what krissan? Tumhe main pasand nahi tha. Toh kya? Tumne mere saath itni ghatiyaan harqath ki? Kaise? Koi tumhe pasand nahi ho toh bhi tum unke saath... Kaise?

Krissan starts crying. Ayaz gives a evil look happy to see both of them hurt. Krissan holds Utkarsh's hand.

K - Please.. Utkarsh... Don't leave me.
U - Krissan! Mujhe chodo!

He leaves and walks away. Krissan runs behind him crying. She comes back to the studio.

K - Now are you happy Ayaz? Tumne sab kuch bigaad diya.
Az (sarcastic) - I thought you will tell me thankss. Maine tumhari madath ki hai. Anyways he doesnt deserve you Krissan.
K (angry and crying) - Shut up Ayaz. I love him. And You've spoilt everything!

She runs away from there to convince Utkarsh and tell him she was sorry. Ayaz stood there silently. His task here was accomplished. He broke 2 people who betrayed him. How he wished he could break sid's heart too. And he was sure he would do that too.

--------------------------------------------------------------


Vidurshi gets ready for her performance. She is wearing a brown long gown and open hair. Siyali comes inside.

Si - Vi, Tujhe Parth bula raha hai.
Vi - Okay. Main jaati hoon.

Vidurshi leaves
Angela's PoV "Parth Vi ko bula raha hai? Hmmm.. Patha lagana toh padega" She follows Vidurshi.

Si - Angela, tum kahan jaa rahi ho?
A - Shush! You also come.

Siyali confused, follows her. Vidurshi reaches the ground where Parth is.

Vi - Parth! Tum ne bulaya mujhe?
P - Haan!
Vi - Tumhe toh Vibha maam ke saath hona chahiye na?
P - Bas Thanks aur Sorry bolne aaya tah. Thank You. And I'm very sorry. Maine tujhe bohat zyada hi daat liya tha.
Vi - It's ok. Pata nahi kyun, pichle 10 dino se tum mujhse theek se baat tak nahi kar rahe ho. Bhaiya ke gusse ki wajah se kya?
P - Shayad. Actually, Utkarsh ne kaha ki tum mujhe like karti ho. Par Main sirf...
Vi - Vibha ma'am se pyaar karte ho. Mujhe pata hai (with a sad tone)

Parth looks at her with a lot of questions in his head.

Vi - Well. It is true. Main tumhe like karti thi. Bohat dino se. Jab pehli baar dekhi thi tab se.

--------------------------------------------------------------

Precap :

As Vidurshi walks away, Siyali and Angela stand there shocked.

Si (lost in thoughts) - Pyaar sirf dard hi deta hai na?

---------------------------------------------------------------

This is what i meant by no centre role... Just for this... Till these 2 scenes get over!
Edited by Aisha-Haja - 9 years ago
Garima04 thumbnail
Anniversary 9 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Nevermind the update was still great.
Even i like the slow progress
No hush hush !!
Uttu-krissane are cute too..i like them.
So all in all lovely setup of scenes by you 😳

And thanks for an early update 😉
Shinning_AD thumbnail
Anniversary 10 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 9 years ago
Krissane Uttkarsh are a cute couple 😳
The progress is really good 😉

Waiting for your next update 😛

Amazing scenes as usual 😊
v_sidyali thumbnail
Anniversary 9 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Love kriarsh as couple too
Vidurshi is quite a soul
I really need to wait for wats going on sids mind
He want siyali or in dilemma
Love ur update yarr
Also one of unique
Imiya07 thumbnail
Anniversary 9 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
KriArsh is cute! But why now? Poor souls breakup! 😛
Vidurshi ka back story moro!
After this, SidYali will be back in the lead..

The reason i gave re*entry to Ayaz was to reveal this secret!
Garima04 thumbnail
Anniversary 9 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Aisha-Haja

KriArsh is cute! But why now? Poor souls breakup!😛

Vidurshi ka back story moro!
After this, SidYali will be back in the lead..

The reason i gave re*entry to Ayaz was to reveal this secret!

wow !!
Waiting for the next update
Exciting me more 😆
Imiya07 thumbnail
Anniversary 9 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Incomplete - A Warrior High Fan Fiction
Episode 35 : Pain in Love

She recites the whole incident

"Last semester. Train mein. Mujhe Rishab sir ko milna tah. So, Main aur Bhaiya Tagore house ki compartment mein aaye the.

[Flash Back - Starts ]
Few guys were teasing Utkarsh "Yeh dekho! Iska baap nahi hai!"
Vi (angrily) - How dare he?
Vd - Vi! Is chakkar mein nahi pado
Vi - Bhaiya.. I need to stop them

She goes near utkarsh when suddenly a boy walks in front of her and starts fighting with the other boys.
The boy was none other than Parth.
Once the fight was over, Parth comes back to his seat. Vidurshi looks at him.

Vd - Chalo. We'll come later.

He takes her hand and leaves. As she leaves, she turns and looks at him

<music starts - Hasi (Hamari adhuri kahani) >

Vidurshi comes dancing and running.

main jaan ye vaar doon
har jeet bhi haar doon
keemat ho koi tujhe
beintehaa pyaar doon
She sees Parth dreamily and dramatically faints. Few girls hold her, She gets up blushing.

saari hadein meri, ab maine tod di
dekar mujhe pataa awaargi ban gaye..
She walks behind him, step by step. Hopping happily while her hair bounces right and left

haan hansi ban gaye
haan nami ban gaye
tum mere aasmaan
meri zameen ban gaye
As Parth turns, She goes away in the other direction

<music>
Vidurshi becomes friends with Niti and Utkarsh.

kya khoob rab ne kiya
bin maange itna diya
warna hai milta kahaan
hum kaafiron ko khuda
She listens to Utkarsh in a dreamy as he talks about Parth.

hasratein ab meri tumse hain jaa mileen
tum duaa ab meri aakhiri ban gaye
She pretends like talking to her friend on the corridor but looking at Parth

haan hasi ban gaye
haan nami ban gaye
tum mere aasmaan
meri zameen ban gaye
She looks at the mirror and sings
[Flash Back - Ends]

Parth looks at her.

Vi - Phir ek din, Maine tumhe aur Vibha ma'am ko saath dekhi thi. Aur Utkarsh se pata chala ki tum unhe pyaar karte ho. (Looking sad)
That's all
(tries to fake a smile)
P - Agar tumne mujhe like kiya toh tumne.. yeh sab kyun kiya? I mean Vibha ma'am ko yahan??
Vi (in a funny way) - Paaarth? Main tujhe koi psycho type si nazar aati hoon kya? (Dramtically) Ki main apne pyaar ko paane ke liye kuch bhi karoongi..

Looks at a confused parth

Vi - Jab main jaanti hoon ki tum kisi aur se pyaar karte ho, toh Main tumhare peeche peeche nahi aa sakti na! And main jaanti hoon ki tum vibha ma'am ke ilava kisi aur se kabhi pyaar nahi kar sakte ho.

She tries to cheer herself up
Vi - Mera toh sirf crush tha tum pe. Ab toh tum mere dost ho. Apne friend ko help karna toh banta hai na... You know how much i love romance. Main kisi ke love story ki villian nahi banna chahti. Aur Tumhari love story mein bilkul nahi.
P - Am sorry Vidurshi. Woh mujhe bohat bura lag raha hai.
Vi - You don't have to feel bad Parth. Tumhari koi galti nahi hai. I'm not upset. Don't worry. Main theek hoon. Anyways Zaroori nahi hai ki har story ki happy ending ho. May be mere liye koi aur story likha hua hai.

Parth still looks sorry.

Vi - Parth, Tum feel math karo aur happily vibha ma'am ke saath kuch time spend karo... After all it's your birthday.

She smiles and leaves. As she turns, her facial expression turns from happy to sad. As she walks, She looks at Angela and Siyali standing there

Si (confused) - Vi, yeh kya tha?
A - Kya tum Parth se pyaar nahi karti?
Vi (smiles) - Apne pyaar ko apne pyaar ke liye chodna bhi pyaar hi hai. (a tear falls from her eye)
She wipes her tear and fakes a smile.

Vi - Apne First love ko bhool na thoda mushkil hai. But when u know it can never happen, chod na toh padega hi na.

Siyali understands her pain as her first love was also unsuccessful. She remembers the day she came to know that Sid had faked his love for her and how she felt. She had never been able to move on till now. She hugs Vidurshi. Seeing this Angela also hugs her.

Vidurshi gets out of the hug and wipes her tears. Angela and Siyali look at her with sorrow.

Vi - I need to go get ready. Performance start hojayega!

She walks fast towards the green room to get ready. Siyali looks really hurt from inside. She felt the pain of losing her first love.

A - Siyali? Tumhe kya ho gaya?
Si (lost in thoughts) - Pyaar sirf dard hi deta hai na?

Siyali's eyes are red. But she didn't cry. Angela keeps her hand on Siyali's shoulder trying to say that it will be alright. Angela and Siyali now had a new respect for vidurshi who had sacrificed her love.

--------------------------------------------------------------

On the other hand, Krissan runs behind Utkarsh. She blocks him by standing in front of him. She had tears in her eyes.

K - Utkarsh! Utkarsh! Please listen to me. Haan meri galti thi. I shouldn't have done like that. But I'm sorry. Please mujhe maaf kardo. Phir se aisa nahi hoga?
U (hurt) - Phir se? Matlab kya hai krissan. Ab meri maa tao wapas nahi aa sakti na. Tum logon ke liye woh sirf ek mndak ho sakta hai. Par mere liye, Maa. Tumne aisa kaise kiya?
K - Im sorry Utkarsh. Please mujhe chod kar math ja'o. I love you! Main ter bina nahi reh sakti. Please.
U (irritated) - Krissan tum kitni selfish ho sakti ho? Tumne bilkul nahi socha ki mujhe kaise lag raha hai aur sirf apne baare mein bol rahi ho. (Angry) Mujhe nahi rehna hai tumhare saath joh sirf apne baarey mein sochti hai. Mujhe nahi chahiye tumhara pyaar. Na maine tumse pyaar kiya hai na hi kabhi karoonga.
K - Utkarsh

She holds his hand. He takes his hand away from her in anger and walks away. Krissan sits down on the stairs and cries her hearts out as this pain was too much to bear than any physical pain.

--------------------------------------------------------------

Precap :

F - Sa Ni Re Sa Ga Re Sa Ni Dha Ni
Sa Ni Re Sa Ga Re Sa Ni Dha Ni
Sa Ga Ma...
Vidurshi sings like a classical singer with her eyes closed and trying to sing with proper swaram.


Siyali and Sid were also disturbed. Their relationship seemed have taken a twist. It seemed like they had forgotten about the breakup.
Top