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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Aisha-Haja


Keep thinking..
Let's see if Sid guesses or not! 😆

"Ek chuti sindoor ki kimat tum kaa jaano" This was the first guess that same to my mind when I read 1st few sentences only😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

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"Ek chuti sindoor ki kimat tum kaa jaano" This was the first guess that same to my mind when I read 1st few sentences only😆


Naah! Wait for it! 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Girl Wat r u doing to me,
Bas khich rahi hain yarr tu muze
Kya update tha
I m telling u don't waste ur talent go n send dis awesome episodes to lostboy I ll tell u woh baki cvs ko nikal denge
Seriously yarr
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: v_sidyali

Girl Wat r u doing to me,

Bas khich rahi hain yarr tu muze
Kya update tha
I m telling u don't waste ur talent go n send dis awesome episodes to lostboy I ll tell u woh baki cvs ko nikal denge
Seriously yarr


Aww! ThanQ thanQ 😉
Lol.. Script 🤣 that wud be hilarious. This is just my passion. Been writing since..hmm.. I donno when.. But i never finish any of my stories.. I hope i atleast finish this fan fiction! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
This curiosity is killing me.
Wow update
Can't wait for next!!
Update soonish
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Garima04

This curiosity is killing me.
Wow update
Can't wait for next!!
Update soonish



Tommorow 2'o clock.. Pakka 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Aisha-Haja




Tommorow 2'o clock.. Pakka😉

waiting for it darling 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Incomplete - A Warrior High Fan Fiction
Episode 33 : A Foot In The Door

As Siyali finishes acting out, Audience turn their heads towards sid who has a smile on his face. As they take away the blind folds and head sets from Siyali. Sid smiles at Siyali and walks towards her. He keeps looking at her. As he walks he takes the mike from the host's hand. Siyali looks confused.

S (filmy tone) - Ek ladki thi dewani si, Ek ladke pe woh marti thi, nazren jhuka ke, sharma ke, galion se guzarti thi, chori chori chupke chupke chitthiyan likha karti thi, kuch kehna tha shayad us ko, jane kis se darti thi, jab bhi milti thi mujh se, mujh se poocha karti thi, yeh pyar kaise hota hai, yeh pyar kaise hota hai.
Aur Maein, Yehi Kehta Tha

The audience were all in silence looking at Sid telling the dialogue to Siyali. It felt like Shah Rukh khan himself told it. Siyali smiles as Sid had guessed correctly

S - (sings)
Aankhen khuli ho ya ho band
Deedar unka hota hai
Kaise kahoon main o yaara yeh pyaar kaise hota hai

Audience - Tududu dudu dududu tu dudu dudu - 2

Host - Wow! Right guess! Give them a big hand of applause. Afterall Warriors High students are Warrior High students.

The audience start hooting and screaming. Sid comes to hug Siyali who just extends her hands. They hold each others hands and look into each others eyes. At audience, Aditya sir and the students looks happy and relieved.

Host - (Looks at Sid and Siyali) Must say! You guys make a cute couple.

Audience (naughty tone) - Oohhh

Siyali nods her head trying to show her disapproval while sid just says "shu shushu". Siyali stares at him. Down, Utkarsh also gives an annoyed look

U (in a funny tone) - Patha nahi kyun sab ko lagta hai ki Sid aur Siyali cute couple hain.
A (naughty) - Tujhe bhi toh yahi lagta hai.

She keeps her elbow on Vidurshi's shoulder. Both of them give naughty looks. Utkarsh also accepts it!

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Sid and Siyali are seen coming from the stage into the corridor. Siyali looks angry.

S - Its so great! We won! We make a good team don't u think?

Siyali stares at him with all anger.

S (scared) - Ab maine kya kiya?
Si (angry) - Woh log samajh te hain ki hum couple hain. Woh bhi cute couple. Aur tumne kuch nahi kaha. Aur na mujhe kuch kehne diya.
S (funny tone) - Tu stage mein jhagadne waali thi kya?

Siyali stares. All the others reach there.

Vd - Wow bro! You guys won.
S - Jeetna toh tha. SIDDHARTH RAJPUT jo tha stage par.
A (mocking) - Hello. Hum Siyali ke wajah se jeete hain.
S - Really? Kya Tum guess kar paayi? What siyali acted!

Angela looks embarrassed. Others laugh.

Adi - I'm so glad you guys won.

Aditya sir and Sid do something that resembled a hifi.

Adi - But stage mein bhi 5 baar fight karli tum dhono ne.
S (mocking) - Kya karoon Sir! Yeh Saddu amma Siyali se aur kuch kaise expect kar sakte hain?
Si (angry) - Sir isne shuru kiya tha.
S - Maine?
Adi - You guys continue your fight. Main lunch ke liye jaa raha hoon.
U - Haan sir. Main bhi aata hoon. Bhook se mar raa ja rahi hai.

All of them walk with Aditya Sir to have lunch. Siyali and Sid also starts walking. As she walks, she keeps staring at Sid who gives an irritated look.
Sid's PoV "Humesha chilati rehti hai. Patha nahi mujhe iske saath pyaar kaise hua tha?"

Sid stops thinking about love and looks down.

<kabira (yeh jawaani hai dewaani) - last para>

Re Kabeera maan jaa
Re Fakeera maan jaa
Aa jaa tujh ko pukaaray teri parchhaaiyaan
Re Kabira maan jaa
Re Fakeera maan jaa
Kaisa tu hai nirmohee kaisaa harjaaiyaa
He slowly looks up at Siyali who is now walking with the others with a small smile on her face.

<music>
He remembers the time they had spent together in the last week of the previous semester where sid was trying to impress siyali and she also had a smile on her face. As she walks away, Sid stands on the corridor all alone thinking why all of it had changed making his love story incomplete.

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They walk to the cafeteria. There they see Parth and Vibha Ma'am sitting. She is feeding parth and vice versa. They all join the table. Vibha ma'am smiles. She gets up and leaves to pick up more food. Aditya sir follows her.

Parth looks at Vidurshi who sits in his opposite side.
Parth's PoV "Mujhe Vidurshi se sorry aur thanks bolna chahiye"

He looks at Vibha ma'am who seems to be talking to Aditya Sir. On the other hand, Vidurshi is eating her kheer.

S - Teddy! Kaaju!

He shows a cashew nut in his hand. Vidurshi sees it and comes running. Sid feeds her the cashew nut. Siyali gives a jealous look seeing this new unseen relationship of Sid and Vidurshi. Vidurshi searches for cashew nuts in sid's cup and eats it. Siyali feels weird seeing all this. She wasn't sure if it was jealousy bcoz she had never seen sid behave like this to any other girl. There was something special between the two of them. And she wanted to know what it was even though she tried to ignore and convince herself that it didn't matter.

Aditya sir and Vibha maam come back. Utkarsh looks at Vibha maam who looks tensed.

U (to Adi) - Sir, kya baath kar rahe the?
Adi - Bas Vibha se kehra tha ki Deepa maam ke nazar se bachi rehna.
A - Why sir?
Adi - Well.. If she comes to know that Vibha had come to meet Parth, woh jaake Urmila ma'am se kehenge. Aur unhe patha chalega toh problem ho jayegi.

All of them look at each other and hope there won't be any problem.

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Precap :

U - main janta hun tu Jhoot bol raha hai.
Az - Dont believe me? Krissan se hi pooch lo.

Utkarsh takes a look at krissan who looks tensed and guilty.

Edited by Aisha-Haja - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow I could never guess that😆
Enjoying the track so much

Keep going😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sid is Sid

Even I couldn't guess it.
After vry long time Sidyali's story is centred
Loving it more nmore❤️
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