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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Shinning_AD

Wow👏👏👏 What an amazing updates

Read the last 3 episodes in one go😳

It was so real and love that karima event❤️

While reAding was hoping that the chapter will never end😉
loved the whole bus journey and SidYali & the trio conversation about them.⭐️

Update next update soon😊

Can't wait to read it...


Thanksss a lot 😳
Today's update... Coming soon! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thanksss 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Aisha-Haja



Thanksss a lot😳
Today's update... Coming soon!😊

Waiting Waiting Waiting 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Incomplete - A Warrior High Fan Fiction
Episode 22 : Love is in the Air

After lunch, everyone was tired. They slowly fell asleep. After 2 hour of travel, they reached the snowy parts of Himachal pradesh on the way to Manali. The competition took place in a place in the outskirts of Manali. Vidurshi was the only one awake. As they were passing through the snowy parts of Manali,,

Vi (shouts) - Stop the bus.

The bus driver puts a sudden brake due to which most of them are awaken from their sleep.

Siyali opens her eyes and realises that she was lying on someone's shoulder. Whose? Is that even a question to ask? Sid ofcourse. She looks towards him who is already looking at her. Then she raises her head off his shoulder and adjusts her hair in embarrassment.

Vd (sleepy) - Vi, Kya hua?
Vi - Guys! Bahar dekho (excited)

Everyone looks outside and see thick snow covered in the sides of the road.

Vi - What about a snow fight?

Everyone hoots..

Si - Nahi. Time waste ho jaye ga. Hume pohanch na hai. Aur yeh sab middle mein break lena ...

All students "Rules ke against hai"

Aditya Sir laughs. He looks at Deepa ma'am sitting opposite to him.

Adi - Actually, Siyali is right. Time waste to hoga hi. But but but, Ab rules nahi thodenge toh kab thodenge? So,,
All students - Sooo
Adi - Snow fight it is.

All students run outside. Siyali sits inside the bus.

A - Come on Siyali. Chalte hai.
Si - Nahi. Main nahi aa rahi hoon.
Vi - Siyali.. Don't be so boring. It'll be fun. Come on..

Siyali still doesn't come. They give a sad face and go out. Sid who is sitting next to her stares at her. She moves so that sid can go out.

S - Tum nahi aa rahe ho?
Si - bhere ho? Sunayi nahi di? Nahi aa rahi hoon
S - Siyali. Bahar ayeghi toh, it'll be fun. Mmories bana sakte ho. After all tumhari friends tumhe bula rahe hai. Unhe achey lagega. Aise yahan betke tujhe kya milega? All alone. Kuch nahi. Don't be a spoil sport. (Mocks) shayad yeh snow tumhari chehre pe woh waali smile le sakti. (Imitates her) The smile that can melt even the hardest of hearts. Who knows?

Siyali gives an embarrassed smile about the line somebody wrote for her. But deep inside, she still had a feeling that Sid was the one to write her description. But she wasn't sure if what her heart told was true. She'll never know. Or may be she would. If she could just check the handwriting on that paper and Sid's handwriting.

She was lost. Sid snaps his fingers in front of siyali's eyes. Siyali looks at him.

S - Chale?

Siyali doesn't move at all..

S - Toh teek hai. Main bhi tumhari saath yaheen bet jaata hoon.

Siyali stares

S (in a funny tone) - Sochlo! Ek akhela ladka ek akheli ladki. Log kya sochenge?

He smiles and looks at Siyali who looks very doubtful. Sid asked for her hand.

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<music - ilahi (yeh jawani hai dewani)>
All students run into the snow. They throw snow balls at each other. Utkarsh is seen running behind Krissan.

Shaamein malang see
Raatein surang see
Baaghi udaan pe hi naa jaane kyun
Ilahi mera jee aaye aaye
Ilaahi mera jee aaye aaye
Vidurshi and Angela are seen throwing slow balls at each other. Parth is standing all alone. Utkarsh and Angela throw multiple snowballs at him

DaDa dang dang dung dung dang...
Vidurshi taps Angela in her shoulder and points at something. Sid and Siyali get out of the bus holding their hands. They both give each other a naughty look

Kal pe sawaal hai
jeena filhaal hai
Khaanaabadoshiyon pe hi jaane kyoon
Ilahi meraa jee aaye aaye
Ilaahi mera jee aaye aaye
Angela drags Siyali into the snow with others. Vidurshi keeps her elbow on Sid's shoulder and gives a naughty look suggesting Sid likes Siyali. Sid stares and Vidurshi runs away playfully. As she runs away, Sid smiles to himself. Rohan and the gang are also seen playing with snow.

[Last one] Ilahii.. Ilahi.. Ilahi...
Vidurshi, Vidyut, Angela, Sid, Siyali, Utkarsh, Krissan and Parth all play together. In between, Siyali and Sid confront. [camera roll - circles] Siyali smiles and so does Sid. After a very long time, Sid was able to see that smile on their face. They are taking a selfie. Where Sid and Siyali are looking at each other with a big smile.
(Click)

They all finish playing. Now students are seen eating or taking selfies. Our group goes to a local tea shop.

Vd - Uncle! 8 Chai denna.
K - Like really?. Yahan pe chai!
U - Krissan. Kitne bhi 5 star hotel mein chai pee lo na, local chai ki taste nahi aayegi.
K - But it's so unhygienic.
Vi - Krissan. Utkarsh teek bolraha hai. You should seriously try it.
Vd - Waise bhi, Yahan ki chai bohat different hai. Himachal Pradesh ki chai thodi lag hoti hai.

All others are seen sipping their tea while krissan gives a weird look seeing them drink. She sees Angela and Utkarsh standing together. She gets angry and stands alone. Utkarsh gives a 'phas gaya' look seeing Angela and goes near Krissan.

He makes krissan drink some of his tea. He literally feeds her so krissan couldn't deny. Angela joins Vidurshi and Vidyut while Siyali, Sid and Parth are sitting together in a bench. Siyali smiles seeing the way Sid drink his tea. Sid deliberately leaves his mouth unwiped. Siyali signs that there is something there. He deliberately wipes the wrong side. She wipes with her handki. They look at each other while doing so while parth just keeps looking at his tea wondering about something.

There was something in the air, Romance and Love, which bought everyone together. Sid had decided to bury his feeling for siyali which had started to raise again. Utkarsh, who was confused about his feelings for Krissan had finally convinced himself that being Krissan's boyfriend wasn't that bad an idea afterall.

Angela and Vidurshi seeing SidYali romance on one side and KriArsh romace on other side,

A - Sab ki romance chal rahi hai
Vi - Sirf hum rehgaye

They both make a sad look on their faces with their lips curved downwards. They keep their heads together and look at the couples around.

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Precap :

The students are seen sitting around a table with Aditya sir and Deepa ma'am

Adi - It's not important just to defeat your opponent. It's more important to earn their respect. Kya Kar pa'enge tum log?
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Posted: 9 years ago
It actually love is in d air
Love
Romance
U r so unique
D way u described na
Agar aisa ho to
Yarr
Lovely lovely
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb job done 👏
Love is everywhere😆

Love the way you explain things😉

Waiting for the next😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: v_sidyali

It actually love is in d air

Love
Romance
U r so unique
D way u described na
Agar aisa ho to
Yarr
Lovely lovely


Well,
the episode names are given according to story using phrases and usual lines used in our day to day! That's why "love is in the air"

Thanksss a lot for the compliment 😳
So sweet of u! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Shinning_AD

Superb job done 👏

Love is everywhere😆

Love the way you explain things😉

Waiting for the next😳


Thankss yaar! 😳
Moro, i guess I'll update early morning itself [coz busy in evening] 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Aisha-Haja



Thankss yaar!😳
Moro, i guess I'll update early morning itself [coz busy in evening]😉

LOVE n ROMANCE in the air
Awww..shooo cute 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Incomplete - A Warrior High Fan Fiction
Episode 23 : Feud at First Sight

Rohan was looking at Siyali's direction.

I - Bro, Siyali ko dekh raha hai?
Ro (back to senses) - Haan? (Confused) Haan ussi ko dekh raha tah.

Ishaan sensed as though it was lie and tries to figure out where exactly was Rohan seeing or who exactly he has seeing.

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They finally reach the location. It was a grand place. The location for Karishma was set up near a resort. The resort was booked for this purpose and allocated in such a way that each school got a separate block. There were 15 - 18 blocks around the place. Stalls were set up temporarily. But the main attraction was the party hall which was used as the auditorium. The Cafeteria was inside a huge hall with a lot of tables and a big line of food items kept in the buffet.

Adi - You guys have your dinner now. Tum logon ka luggage room tak pohanch jayega.

They reach the cafeteria. All other 11 schools were already there. As they reached that day, they were still in their uniforms and it was easy to identify the schools accordingly.

All the warriors walk towards the tables reserved for them as Deepa ma'am had instructed that they sit together for dinner to avoid any conflicts.

As they walk, Vidyut dashes into a girl.

Girl - Ouch
Vd - Sorry
Boy - Aate aate hi ladkiyon pe zor apnane lage?.

A group of students wearing the same uniform are seen sitting together. The guy who told gets up in a filmy way. The others get up from their tables and stand opposite to the warriors. All the old students of Warrior High stare at the other group.

Ro - Har saal harne ke baad bhi tum logon ki yeh attitude nahi jaati hai na?

The boys of the other group come to a fight. The boy who seems to be their leader stops them.

Boy - Har saal ki baath alag hai. Aur iss saal ki baath alag hai. Dekhte hai! Iss saal Karishma Koi choti moti competition nahi. I'll be us who win the trophy.
S (sarcastic) - Oh ya! They win every Karishma right?

Sid turns towards the warriors who laugh

S (mocking) - Bhool gaya toh yaad dila doon. Pechla Karishma bhi humne hi jeeta tha. (Hifi's to Vidyut)

Girl - Woh toh tum logon ke seniors thae. Just because your seniors won our Seniors doesn't mean you'll win us.

K - Like really? You guys think you can actually win over us! In your dreams

The feud gets more severe and severe.

DMaam (shouts) - Stop it! Yeh kya ho raha hai yahan? Apne apne jagah pe jaayiye. Aur tum log (looks at warriors) Come with me.

They go to their table. It was a huge table allowing the whole gang to sit around it. Few minutes later, They are seen having their plates and angrily looking at their food.

Si - Yeh sab kya tha?
U - Haan! Yeh log kaun hain?
S - Xavier High from Kolkata. (Glare) Every year we meet in competitions aur ladaai ho jaati hai.
A - Aisa kyun?
K - Because they're such big losers.
Ro - They don't stand a chance against us. Har saal yahi baath yahi jhagda.
Vi - (playing with a spoon on noodles in her hand) I guess you're forgetting something. Never underestimate your opponent.
Adi - Well said Vi.
T - But sir, They always lose. Patha nahi when was the last time they ever won?
Vd - I think. It was Karishma!

Everybody looks at Vidyut shocked.

Vd - Pichle Karishma mein they were runners up. And Warrior High was the winner.
I - Ek baar jeetne ke paas aaye toh aisa nahi hai ki iss baar jeet jayenge.
L - Humare seniors jeet sakte tho hum bhi jeet sakte hain.
Vi - Exactly! Par bathana padhega na. Our seniors 5 years ago rocked. Unhon ne aisa final performance dhey diya that all others dekhte dekhte reh gaye.

Aditya Sir smiles.

DMaam - Aditya. 5 saal pehle toh, aapki batch thi na?

Everyone looks at Aditya sir excited.

Adi - Yes ma'am.
L - Lo. Apne Adi sir ka batch? Yeh log win karsakte toh hum nahi?
Adi - Lucky. Humari jeet itni aasan nahi thi. There is a reason that this is the biggest fest in India. Har competition mein sirf talent ko nahi, bohat kuch aur bhi dekhte hain. 5 days itne saarey competition, bohat stress aur bohat saarey conflicts. The reason we won was because of one girl. Jasmine. Humare group mein ek ladki ne hum sab ko baandh ke rakha tha. She motivated us. She was our tie. Aise competition mein apni unity ko baandh ke rakhna bohath zaroori hai. We learnt an important lesson in our time here. It's not important just to defeat your opponent. It's more important to earn their respect. Kya Kar pa'enge tum log?

All of them have big smiles on their face. What aditya sir made a lot of sense. But earning respect from your enemy was a very difficult task to accomplish.

Vi (smiles) - Of course sir. Why not? All we have to do is
1. Not fight
2. Don't create tamaashas
3. Everyday practice
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Everyone had their eye balls widened hearing Vidurshi give a big list of Do's and Don't.

Adi - Woov wov. Vidurshi, Tumne toh sab ko dara diya. (Laughs)

Vidurshi giggles.

Adi - Anyways. Remember you guys have to practice for the final performance. We have studio for that. Kal subah theek 6 baje, all of you have to assemble there. And.. One important thing. Patha nahi, Main aa pa'onga ya nahi. So i want one of you to have the pendrive of our rehearsals. Usse use karke hi dance karenge. There is also a projector in that studio. So you guys can keep track of the steps from our rehearsal video. So who'll have the pen drive?
DMaam - Give it some responsible student. Ghum hogaya toh problem ho jayegi. Siyali? Tum rakhlo. And bring it to practice all the time.
Si - Yes ma'am

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Precap :

The first day of Karishma. The warriors got up early in the morning. Aditya Sir took them for a small round of jogging as a warm up.
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