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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Aisha-Haja



Thankss
Karishma will tell u a lot bout everyone. Twist in everyones storyπŸ˜›

fir isi baat pe aj ka update Thoda jaldi dedo πŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
Girl it was karismatic update
Really interesting fest in everyone's life
May dis bring sidyali closer
Love d way u forward each episode
It owns itself
I m telling u Plz plz send ur dis script right to lost boy n dey wil appoint u as cv
Really I mean it
U r worth it
Unkempt cvs to kuch kar nahi paye only uses sidyali for trp bt forgot dey r d lead one
Bt u make it turn around
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: v_sidyali

Girl it was karismatic update

Really interesting fest in everyone's life
May dis bring sidyali closer
Love d way u forward each episode
It owns itself
I m telling u Plz plz send ur dis script right to lost boy n dey wil appoint u as cv
Really I mean it
U r worth it
Unkempt cvs to kuch kar nahi paye only uses sidyali for trp bt forgot dey r d lead one
Bt u make it turn around

No doubt what she writes is simply amazing.
So realistic yet beautiful.
I know lesser Sidyali scenes for now but thats how the show also was like.
I am truely impressed with her work too.
She definitely should send this lostboys. They wil love it as well πŸ˜‰
Edited by Garima04 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Garima04

No doubt what she writes is simply amazing.
So realistic yet beautiful.
I know lesser Sidyali scenes for now but thats how the show also was like.
I am truely impressed with her work too.
She definitely should send this lostboys. They wil love it as well πŸ˜‰


Aww! Thankss guys! You're giving me the goose bumps! πŸ˜‰
Am So happie *agnes style*

I wud love to give the script πŸ˜†
RoFL. Like that will happen! I have this dance in my mind which will come later. I just want to see the same one in WH s2. ⭐️

Actually i liked the original WH script a lot. The way they kept us wrapped up in their little fingers. I even liked the last episode. It was heart breaking but was good. Coz happy endings give u no/ less scope to write more. Sad endings give u more scope foe more story!
Waiting for WH s2.
And i like writing these wh FFs.. Helps ur brain work better 🀣

Glad u guys like it! And hope you'll continue liking it! 😊
Garima04 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Aisha-Haja



Aww! Thankss guys! You're giving me the goose bumps!πŸ˜‰
Am So happie *agnes style*

I wud love to give the scriptπŸ˜†
RoFL. Like that will happen! I have this dance in my mind which will come later. I just want to see the same one in WH s2.⭐️

Actually i liked the original WH script a lot. The way they kept us wrapped up in their little fingers. I even liked the last episode. It was heart breaking but was good. Coz happy endings give u no/ less scope to write more. Sad endings give u more scope foe more story!
Waiting for WH s2.
And i like writing these wh FFs.. Helps ur brain work better🀣

Glad u guys like it! And hope you'll continue liking it!😊

glad to know what you feel!
Keep writing and m sure we will also keep liking 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
So true girl
Bt u rocks
Garima04 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: v_sidyali

So true girl

Bt u rocks

No second thoughts! 😎
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Garima04

No second thoughts! 😎


That's so sweet of you guyss! 😊
SidYali rock πŸ‘
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Aisha-Haja



That's so sweet of you guyss!😊
SidYali rockπŸ‘

ahaaan!!
Sidyalians Rock tooo πŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
Incomplete - A Warrior High Fan Fiction
Episode 20 : Wheels of the Bus go Round & Round

Day 10
They had to leave for Manali. But they still had to wear their uniforms till they reached their destination. All students had packed and were loading their luggage in the bus. Siyali, Utkarsh, Parth and Angela say their bye to Niti while Simmi promised to take care of Niti while they're gone. One by one, The students get into the bus.

Most of the seats were occupied leaving few. Utkarsh entered the bus. As he was walking, a hand pulled him and made him sit next to her. Obviously, the one who pulled him was krissan.

K - Tum mere saath betho.

Parth enters and sees Utkarsh gives him a fake smile signifying that he's stuck with Krissan. Parth smiles and looks at the empty seat which is 2 places behind Utkarsh. But sitting next to that is Vidyut staring at Parth.

A - Parth! Yahan aa'jao

Parth walks front towards Angela. She stares at Vidyut and lets Parth sit next to her.

Sid and Siyali enter together. They both stare at each other. Siyali expected him to allow her inside first. Instead he moved her aside and went inside. Siyali gave an angry look. Sid goes inside and sits next to Vidyut. They look at each other and smile.

Seeing Siyali enter, Rohan turns behind and looks at the students sitting opposite to Sid and Vidyut. They get up and move ahead. So siyali sits there. Rohan gets up from his place to move back and sit with Siyali. As he gets up, somebody dashes him. Closing her eyes, hands raised and smiling, Vidurshi says "Sorry!" She goes inside and stands next to the place near siyali.

Meanwhile in the front seat, Rohan sits with his hand on his head.

I - Bro?
Ro - Yeh Vidurshi ki problem kya hai? Har plan mein taang ada deti hai. Siyali ko store room mein bandh karne ki plan karoon toh ye wahan chali jaati hai. Mere liye Siyali ke paas place reserve karoon toh, wahan bhi jaake beit jaati hai.
L - Haan yaar! Bilkul Kabab mein haddi.

Trishna smiles hearing this. Rohan stares. Ishaan holds her hand and gives a look telling to stop laughing. Rohan stares at Vidurshi who is asking siyali if she can sit there.

Vi - Siyali, Main yahan beit sakti hoon?
Si - Sure.
Vi - (childishly) Mujhe window seat chahiye.. (Back to senses) I mean if it's ok with you.

Siyali smiles and lets Vidurshi sit near the window. Now Sid and Siyali are sitting opposite to each other. As they don't want to see each others face, they turn the other side.

Finally they are got places. And the arrangement looked somewhat this way
___________________________
[ Driver]
[ ____________________]
[ ]
[ D'm - E E - Adi ]
[_________________________]
[ * - * * - * ]
[_________________________]
[ T - I Ro - L ]
[_________________________]
[ * - * Ut - K ]
[_________________________]
[ A - P * - * ]
[_________________________]
[ * - * * - * ]
[_________________________]
[ Vi - Si S - Vd ]
[_________________________]

* - Other students
E - Empty

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In the clinic, Niti starts coughing. Water is kept far from the bed and she couldn't reach it. She tries to get down when somebody's offers her water.

Back in the bus, Sid keeps his bag up on the place for luggage. Aditya sir comes in

Adi - Sid, Charlie kahan hai?
S - Sir, He's not coming.

Clinic,
Niti looks at the person who offered water. It was none other than Charlie.

N - Charlie, Tu yahan kya kar raha hai? Ab tak gaya nahi?
C - Nahi Niti. Main yahi rehunga. Tumhari paas.
N - Pagal hogaya Charlie. Tumhe patha hai na? Karishma kitni important hai.
C - Tumse zyaada important nahi.

Niti gives a look not knowing if she had to smile or give him an angry look to shoo him away. Either way she was impressed that Charlie had chosen her against going to the Fest. She looks at Charlie and slowly drinks the water.

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In the bus,

DMaam - Everyone is here? Check if your friends are there? Yes??
Adi - So guys, We're leaving Warrior High. And we're gonna come back with the Trophy! (Filmy style) Jaan dey denge par
All Students & Adi - Haar ke nahi aa'nge.

All students hoot and scream. The bus starts.

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As they travel, all students are engaged in their own activities. Some of them talking, some spending some, i.e., Utkarsh-Krissan and Ishaan-Trishna, romantic time together and some just sitting silently. The bus was so quiet. Didn't seem as if it was a school bus going on a trip. Suddenly, Vidurshi who was looking outside the window and listening to songs in her ipod, not realising that her voice was heard to all.

(Sings)

Just gonna stand there and watch me burn
But that's alright because I like the way it hurts
Just gonna stand there and hear me cry
But that's alright because I love the way you lie
I love the way you lie
She sings it out loud. As she ends, Siyali taps Vidurshi on her shoulder. She takes off her earphones and realises that she was singing it loud. The whole bus was looking at her. She gets up and

Vi - Sorry. Sorry guys.

Then she sits down. Vidyut gives her a smile saying its Okay. Sid looks at Vidyut

S (raps) - I can't tell you what it really is
Vd (raps) - I can only tell you what it feels like
Both (raps) - And right now there's a steel knife in my windpipe
I can't breathe but I still fight while I can fight

All the guys join them and rap through the whole song. Vidurshi and the other girls start shaking to the music.

Boys (continue rapping) - Who's that dude?
"I don't even know his name."
I laid hands on her, I'll never stoop so low again
I guess I don't know my own strength

Girls (sing) - [Chorus]
I love the way you lie
I love the way you lie

After they finish the whole song, they all clap and hoot.

A - You know guys, it is kinda getting boring.

<music - lose control (rang de basanti)>
The driver plays the song. All the students hoot. Few students get out of the seats. They stand as they sing and dance. While other just sit and enjoy or take clicks and videos.
After this they have a lot of fun singing and dancing.

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Precap :

Vidurshi, Utkarsh and Angela are seen walking

Vi - Ahem.. (Fastly) Yeh Sid aur Siyali ke beech mein kya chakkar chal rahi hai?

Utkarsh stops and stares at Vidurshi. They stop for a while.


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