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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sorry Megha 😭. I was a bit busy with my job. Sorry for the late update.
Anyways here the chapter don't know if it's good cause I wrote it in hurry. Sorry for all grammatical errors.
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Chapter 5:-

In Pava household:-

Lakhan came to his room, completely worn out. Waking up at 4 in the morning for wrestling practice, College, going to auction for a mall with Manu and Jagan and dealing with the Bajwa who always waited for an opportunity to fight with the them or to try to degrade them was really tiring. On Neha insistence Lakhan agreed to help his father with his daily duties and to learn wrestling. Despite he made it clear that he is not interested in wrestling or any sport, Neha still pleaded with him to give it a try at least for their parents' happiness. After an argument Lakhan finally gave in to his sister wishes. The moment he agreed Balvinder burden him with so much work now, he didn't even have time to even sleep properly. Looked like his father was trying to make sure that he won't go back to play music. So he filled his schedule with unnecessary and tiring tasks so that he won't get any time to play his music. And it night.ork till now... But not today

Lakhan went towards his desk where he had kept his flute. He unlocked the drawer and slowly opened it. Lightly, he touched the woodwind instrument with his fingers. The flute was plain yet beautiful. The flute always reminded him of her. She was the other main reason for his passion for music. Besides Preet she was the only one who understood him. But even if he told his parents about it they wouldn't understand. From his room he could hear, the chattering sound of his brother and his friends from downstairs. Lakhan sighed and took the flute from the drawer, put it inside his jacket and went towards the window. He took a deep breath and jumped from the window, grasped and swung at the branch of the tree that was conveniently in there at the back of his house and gracefully landed on the ground. Lakhan was not interested in sports, but that didn't mean he was unfit or unathletic In fact, he was quite good at sports. On the first few days when he first started to learn wrestling everyone was astounded seeing Lakhan skills. None of them had thought that Lakhan will exel at sports, they always thought that he would lack in agility and muscular strength, cause of his slender built and his disinterest in sports and wrestling, this irked Lakhan. Tej was amazed and Balvindar was shell shocked seeing his son talent Lakhan was a quick learner and it didn't take him much time to learn the basics of wrestling.

Lakhan started to walk aimlessly around the fields. Finally, he reached the woods; away from his house and pavaniya clan. He looked around to make to see if anyone was around. If one of his clansmen found him in here with his flute then... And worst, if a bajwa found him, then he was a goner as it will create a chaos in his house. After inspecting the area seeing that he was alone, Lakhan sat down under a tree tried to relax. Today was a really peaceful night the weather was very pleasant and comfortable. Lakhan took out the flute from his jacket held it horizontally and let out a deep sigh and brought the opening end of the flute closer to his mouth. He slowly blew at the opening, placing his finger in the finger holes of the flute and slowly moving his fingers in a rhythmic motion playing the flute. At first he melody was sad and depressing as if he was lamenting his sorrow. But moments later it turned into a joyful and beautiful melody, and Lakhan completely lost himself in playing the music, into the beautiful melody along with the memory it played and reminded him off, completely unaware of his surroundings.

"Veerji!" suddenly a male voice cried out. Lakhan came back to his senses and swiftly turned around to find Rajveer standing behind him. The boy was completely battered, his head was bandaged and eyes were bruised and was practically limping.

"Rajveer, what happened to you? Who did this to you?" Lakhan asked, suddenly a bit concerned at Rajveers' condition. Rajveer looked down, dejectedly and murmured something with Lakhan couldn't understand.

Rajveer was silent for a moment still looking down at his feet when he finally said, with venom in his voice" My friend did this to me"

" What kind of a friend does this" Lakhan thought out loud.

"Ek dhoke bas dost" Rajveer said, clenching his fist forgetting about his injury and suddenly winced in pain.

"Are you ok?" Lakhan asked raj cautiously, moving closer to him.

"Yes, I'm fine." Raj said with a sad smile on his face.

Suddenly Lakhan remembered and thought 'Wait, wasn't he...' "Rajveer, What are you doing in here in the first place? I thought you went back to city?"

" Oh, I missed my bus so..." Raj said hastily rubbing the back of his neck.

'He is really bad at lying ' Lakhan thought " Wait, let me see... where are you going exactly... Amba Aunty said you are from Delhi, am I right?" Lakhan asked.

" Yes, that's where I was going" Raj said dumbfounded.

" There is still a bus going to Delhi and it will leave to Delhi in about 15 minutes. So you still have 15 minutes time and the bus stop is also not far." Lakhan said looking at his wrist watch.

"oh..."

"Look, don't get me wrong. I know your condition is bad and I wouldn't have insisted you to leave. But after what you did, its dangerous for you to stay in here any longer. Our clansmen won't leave you alive. So the sooner you leave the better. I'm saying this for your own safety."

"I know, I know" Rajveer said laughing nervously "Well then I'll get going. Don't wanna miss this bus" With that Rajveer turned around was about to leave when Lakhan called out to him

"Raj!" he called out . At that Rajveer turned around startled, a worried expression spread on his features.

" Raj, if you want I will accompany you to the bus stop..."

"No ,no its ok you don't need to. I'll manage on my own" Rajveer said hastly and briskly walked away ,disappearing into the woods.

'What was all that about?' Lakhan wondered ' I was just trying to help him...And why did he called me veerji when I'm much younger than him...'

To be continued...

Edited by rani7131 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#32
Bravo 👏
Your vocabulary and writing style have improved drastically. Keep going?
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Posted: 6 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: QueenKordeilia

Bravo 👏

Your vocabulary and writing style have improved drastically. Keep going?

thank you Deila😳.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Keep rocking!!!! This is your best ff... I like this much better than the other one... I do like the other one but this one is my favourite... Sorry that I wasn't able to comment for a couple of days... My mother had confiscated my phone as a result of procrastinating 🤣!!!! The update is awesome... I got your pm now only... Don't know why you think your writing style is bad😕. So Raj was suddenly reminded of Raman when he heard Lakhan playing the flute... If you don't mind can you please give a scene in the future when after the Gunjan scandal when Raj wants to get married to Preet, Preet's father saying "Tum jaise ko main apni beti nahi doonga!!!" Preet father loves his daughter right??? He is not another Jagan, is he??? By the way I want more Mannu scenes...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Meghateresa

Keep rocking!!!! This is your best ff... I like this much better than the other one... I do like the other one but this one is my favourite... Sorry that I wasn't able to comment for a couple of days... My mother had confiscated my phone as a result of procrastinating 🤣!!!! The update is awesome... I got your pm now only... Don't know why you think your writing style is bad😕. So Raj was suddenly reminded of Raman when he heard Lakhan playing the flute... If you don't mind can you please give a scene in the future when after the Gunjan scandal when Raj wants to get married to Preet, Preet's father saying "Tum jaise ko main apni beti nahi doonga!!!" Preet father loves his daughter right??? He is not another Jagan, is he??? By the way I want more Mannu scenes...

@italic Lol! 🤣 Sorry it was funny 😆. I thought my writing style is bad ad I wrote this chapter in a hurry😳.
And yes, Raj suddenly reminded of raman when he heard Lakhan playing the flute. In preleap episode when twee leads were kids Lakhan used to play flute and harjeet didn't like it and scolded him for it
Preet father is not like Jagan, he loves his daughter. And here is very loyal to the pavania And I'll show more mannu scene.
@Bold Sure, I'll show you this scene, but it will take time as gunjan scandal is yet to come. 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Meghateresa

Arrey yaar... Jaldi karo!!!!

Sorry Dear I had a lot of work today at the office just came home. I'll try to update tomorrow.Ok? 😳
Edited by rani7131 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Fast... Fast... I'm having a writer's block regarding my ff... So it's better if you upload yours...
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Originally posted by: Meghateresa

Fast... Fast... I'm having a writer's block regarding my ff... So it's better if you upload yours...

What?? But how?
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Chapter 5 (Part II)
It was really cold. Everything thing felt cold. Despite the blazing heat from the sun. Her tiny legs were now starting to ache after running barefoot for long. "Ma I can't run anymore," she cried, panting hard, and collapsed on the ground.

Her mother quickly knelt beside her "Just a bit longer beta we are almost there," she urged her daughter trying to help her up. At this word the girl again forced herself up and started running, trying to run as fast as her tiny legs could.

"Catch them. Don't leave that Pawania woman" The men's voice echoed through the woods. Hearing the voice the girls' mother started to sprint, faster. The girl also tried to match her mother's pace,but couldn't. She was getting out of breath and her vision was now starting to get blurry. She stumbled upon a random stone and nearly ran over a tree. Yet the girl managed to keep an upright position and kept running. She couldn't hear them now. Their voices. The girls' mother slowed down, the girl also stopped running. Her hands on her knees. The girl tried to catch her breath. She looked at her mother. Her mother was completely battered and was heaving heavily, her clothes were soiled, sleeves were torn. Her hands and her beautiful face were bruised, her hair was in disarray and her head was bleeding. The girl slightly recovered and was about to ask her mother if she was ok, when suddenly out of nowhere two men jumped in front of them holding to stick. The men's lunged towards them, but the girls' mother was really quick. She quickly ducked down, avoiding the stick and grabbed the scythe that was tied around -one of the- men's waist. She stuck one of the men with the scythe, in the arm with a great deal of force. Then she swung a punch at the other man's jaw in an uppercut, knocking him down unconscious while the other man held his wounded arm and fled away.

The girl watched all this, amazed. Suddenly she heard the sounds of heavy footsteps approaching towards them. The girls' mother, frightened looked at the direction of the voice and then glanced at her daughter. She knelt beside, her daughter and handed her a small pouch. Gently, caressing her daughter's face, she said "Beta run straight from here and don't look back or stop. Within a few minutes you will reach your father field, there you will be safe."

"But Ma, what about you?" the girl asked. She was half scared and worried. She didn't like the idea of leaving her mother behind.

"Don't worry sweetie.Mommy will be fine," her mother cooed and kissed her daughter on the forehead "Just go and get your Papa Ji. I'll handle this.". With that, she then got up picked up the stick holding it in one hand and the scythe in the other, she looked at the direction of the sound and said " Now go"

But the girl stood there panic-struck. She shook her head negatively, at that her mother yelled at her, "Go Preet! Run! NOW!!" At this Preet came out of her shock and started to run. She started screaming for her father calling him to help her and her mother.

"Preet...Preet...Preet" Preet heard a voice calling out to her. She looked around, but she didn't see anyone. Scared she started to run faster and screamed louder. The ground started to shake and the voice called out to her again a bit louder this time. "Preet...Preet...Preet...WAKE UP PREET!!!"

Preet jolted up awake in the bed, sweating and panting loudly. She turned around and saw Tej standing beside her looking worried, his hands on her shoulder. "Preet you ok? You alright?"
Tej asked softly, handing her a towel. Preet quickly grabbed the towel and buried her face in the fabric.

Tej sat beside his cousin and gently stroked her head as she sobbed."It's okay baby. Relax. Everything is fine, it was just a dream. A nightmare." Tej said, trying to console her. Preet quietly nodded and tried to calm down.

Preet took a few deep breath and relaxed. She then looked up and saw Tej still sitting beside her. Confused, she asked "Veerji, When did you come back? How long was I asleep? And What's the time?"

"I have been back home for quite some time now. You have been asleep for half an hour. And about the time" Tej quickly glanced at his wrist watch and said "It's half past 10 now..."

"What!" Preet quickly jumped up. As soon as she did that, a sharp pain shot through her right arm. Preet hissed and held her arm.

"Preet, relax! Didn't the doctor say you are not supposed to move to much." Tej scolded his cousin. He then inspected her hand. The blood had seeped through the bandages, again."See I told you." Tej, then opened the bedside table drawer, took out the first aid box and started to tend Preet.

"Where is Lakhan Veerji? Didn't he come with you?"

Tej shrugged and said "I don't know, even I'm looking for that idiot. It's past bedtime and he still didn't have his dinner. He was with me when he came in the house, I saw him heading to his room, but when I went to call him for dinner he wasn't there. I was about to search for him, but I stopped when I heard you screaming for Chacha Ji, in sleep" Tej removed Preet bandage and suddenly growled.

Preet flinched at that, "Veerji is everything ok" Preet asked cautiously.

Tej didn't replied for some time, which scared Preet. Tej kept glaring at Preets wounds. There was a huge, deep cut from her forearms to her wrist, which was stitched up. The wound was so deep that the doctor had to perform a small operation and stitch her wound.

"I won't spare him." Tej eyes darkened a devilish and almost a murderous look spread acrossed his features that it frightened Preet ."Rajveer, that bas***d. Bas ek bar mere hath lag jaye, I'll rip of his arm or his head."

*At the Pavania House.*

Manu was pacing in the room anxiously waiting for Jagan. Manu stopped in his tracks when he heard trampling sound echoing through the hallway. The door opened and Jagan came inside the room with his henchmen on tow. "Did you caught him!" Manu asked his uncle, who shook his head negatively in response. Mannu gritted his teeth. He went towards the table and angrily pounded his fist on the wooden furniture "Sala kamina ajj bhi hath nahi aya."

Jagan leaned against the door frame, quietly looking at his nephew. Both were silent for a few moments when finally Jahan spoke"Don't worry manu saait, for how long will he run? Ek din toh sala hath aa hi jayega" Jagan said, though he sounded unsure.

As promised to Preet, Manu stared to plot against that Wedding Planner with the help of Sukhi and his friends; Lakhan,Tej. After many failed attempts Manu finally managed to throw him out of the pind only to have him return and try to kill his beeji. Not only that, that a***ole almost killed his best friend.

Jagan went towards Manu, he patted on his shoulder and said "You don't worry we will find him. Ab tu aram kar." Jagan said in a comforting way. He took a packet of cigarette from his pocket and offered one to Manu who tiredly took it. He then lit one for himself and said "That Rajveer did a grave mistake, trying to kill my mother. Patal mein bhi chupa hoga na toh vaha se bhi ghaset ke launga" with he stormed out of the room, with his men quietly following him.

Manu rubbed his brows. He still couldn't get that scene out of his mind. His grandma screaming and crying out his name, begging for help , and his friend lying in a pool of blood. Manu brought the cigarette close to his mouth and deeply inhaled the tobacco content from the cigarette. After Rajveer left , Amba bought a new planner for planning Gunjans engagement. Gunjan was furious at Manu for that, which confused upset him. She was annoyed that Manu was more focused on throwing out the Wedding Planner than stopping the wedding.

Manu tried to stop the engagement, but in vain. After the egagement, Mrs Pahuja insisted Amba that they should go to Gurudwar and seek Wahe Gurus' blessing as the Pandit said that it's good for the newly couple. Amba readily agreed and left for the Gurudwar leaving Manu and Deena behind as Deena was unwell. Tej and Preet decided to give him company and help him take care of Deena. Manu and Tej were chatting and joking, when they both heard screams from upstairs from Deena room. Both ran upstairs and witness the horrific sight. Preet was lying in a pool of blood and Rajveer was standing beside her holding a blood stained knife, frozen in shock. Manu went livid, snatching the knife away from Rajveer he hit Raj with blows and insults, while Tej carried his cousin in his arms and ushered Deena out of the room and both ran to the hospital. Rajveer somehow managed to get out of manu grasp. He jumped out of the balcony and sprinted towards the woods
The news about this incident spread in the entire village like wildfire and made Jagan furious and left Amba bewilder. Jagan Amba and Manu set out to find the planner. They searched every nook and corner of the village, inspected each and every house not only of their Clan but even the Bajwa Clan. But they still couldn't find him. He had escaped, vanished, disappeared sorry. The Pahuja shaken up by this incident and Mohini tried to take advantage of the situation and tried to instigate there fear and poison there mind even further so that they would call of the marriage but Amba and Manu told her off much to Gunjans disappointment. Gunjan and Manu both had heated argument in which Manu ended up calling Gunjan selfish. Gunjan was taken a back and was deeply hurt cause of Manu harsh words. A whole month has passed after this fiasco and things had cool down a bit until one day one of the clansmen informed Amba that the spotted Rajveer in a dhaba. Manu crushed the remains of the cigarette with his foot and walked out of his room. He can't relax. He can never relax. Not until he finds that Planner



I'm really sorry for the late update and for all the grammatical errors



Edited by rani7131 - 6 years ago
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What the bloody f????? Raj tried to rape Preet????? Off with his head!!!! Saala kameena... By the way how is he going to woo Gunjan if he tries to misbehave with Preet???? Hope he doesn't marry Gunjan and fail in his attempt to disgrace her!!!! That is how they will know his true colors!!!! I thought his feelings for Preet was genuine... I was hoping he'll get a heartbreak as punishment...
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