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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1119976/taaj-ff-rnbdtkj-plz-close <<Here is part one of two parts final updates. No details or thoughts. Just a quick summary so the FF is not ended without explanations or whatnot. Sorry for mistakes and errors.
That night Tanya had trouble sleeping. She tossed and turned till she got sick. She was nauseous and in pain. Before she knew it she started to almost throw-up. She quickly got out of bed and ran to the bathroom. She hated throwing up it hurt like hell. To her it felt as if everything was being pulled 100x more than it usually did when she did. She was crying out in pain and tears started spilling. She heard someone call out Raj in pain and she realized it was no one but herself. Waking up from hearing his name being cried out he rushes out of bed to find Tanya crying in the pain, in pain. He held her and comforted her the whole time. After she felt better he walked her to the bed and called the doctor and made an appointment for that morning. He told her he cannot see her in pain anymore, he had told her last night that if it got worse the next time, he was going to take her to doctor and that's what he's planning to do. They get ready and get in the car to go to the hospital. But on the drive she went pale and screamed out holding her stomach, slurring something and then lost conscience. Worried Raj pulls over for a minute and checks her out, getting no response from her, he rushes them to the ER. There the doctors take charge and he waits in the waiting room.
Tanya find herself in her room though and wonders how she got there. Someone from behind her says he'll tell her where she is. She turns around to find her old best friend from high school Adi. She is shocked and she asks if she's dead. He laugh and she no and then his smile disappears and he tells her she's in the between land. Between life and death and where she chooses to go is up to her. She is confused and he explains further on. But he says that she cannot chose till he is done showing her what he has to and holds out his hand to follow him. She grabs it and they end up at mandir where they see Raj putting sindoor in her maang. He asks her if she remembers this and to this she replies of course how could she not? And asks him why here though? He explain to her that this is where her life began again, he gave her a life and without him she would have died. It was destiny that you end up with him. Fate, it was meant to be this way. She has trouble accepting and he convinces her further. She cries to him and says because of her he lost his love and I give him nothing but sorrows, I do wish to die and end it for him. He says that exactly why I'm here, so you don't make a mistake like that, I told you before you have to watch everything before you chose, but since you said you wish to die, I show you that. He takes her to a beach. He is puzzled and he turns her towards the rock. Raj is standing on top and he is crying. They hear him blame himself for Tanya's death, he calls himself a failure. Adi speaks again telling Tanya the whole story, after her death he first went in denial, no eating, sleeping, nothing. He cried for days and slowly he snapped out of it. He was angry, at everyone including god. His true love was taken and now he is angry. And all he wishes to do is die so he can go to Tanya and apologize. She turns around and runs to go comfort him. When she reaches out to touch him but he jumps. Tanya scream and suddenly they are in a apartment. Adi tells her, I told you don't want that option, look this is what could be if you live. She sees the same thing she saw in her dream, Tanya and Raj the happy couple a couple years later. Adi tells her not only did he gave you life but you wil give him life too. They come back to the her room and he asks her if she wishes to stay or come with him. He cries and chooses to stay and he smiles and says that's my girl and hugs her goodbye.
The doctor goes to Raj and clues him in. His wife had a complication in her pregnancy called Vasa praevia which makes a vessel near the umbical cord rupture. The baby is in constant movement and vein rubbing again makes the mother in deathly pain. It's rarely detected before going into labor, that's why they had no clue of this. And thanks to him bringing her in they have a chance to save the baby. Raj is relieved and ask about his wife. The doctor tells in at first it was hard to find her vital signs and she was in a coma -not-with-us- state but she is fine now and if he wishes to see her he may. The doctor takes him in to her bedside and the doctor leaves. Raj gets teary and touches her hand and Tanya opens her eyes. He cries to her and says he sorry, and she stops him and says don't ever blame yourself for me you are never at the fault. He tries to argue but Tanya stops him and she says you can't make me a promise, not only to me but our child and touches her stomach. It takes her a mere second to realizes her bulging stomach is no longer bulging she feels around and get worried and asks where is her child. Raj tells her to calm down and sugar coats what the doctor told him. She closes her eyes, tears slowly tipple down. He squeezes her hand and tells her it's going to be okay. He lays his head on the bed next to her and she moves her free hand on his head. They fall asleep like that and wake up to hear the doctor and nurse talking. Tanya asks what's going on and Raj gets up. The doctor says sit down. He starts off with an apology and they their hearts race. They tried their best saving the baby but it was close to impossible. They hate to say that but it was the case 99% of the time VP babies do not survive. He apologizes once more and than his he's beeped to an emergency so he leaves and the nurse too runs off. Tanya cries and shakes uncontrollably, the dream, the vision that Adi too all gone now. They will never be like that. Raj is sadden too but sucks it up to comfort her. She says she's sorry. He tells her don't, it's okay, everything will get better. Tanya breaks out in hysterics and the nurse comes in sedates her.
She wakes up when Raj carries and places her in the wheelchair, he takes her home. The family is sad for the loss but happy that at least she is fine. That night Tanya is sitting on the bed thinking of all the things she's seen with Adi, he lied to her. Raj comes in to see her depressed. He knelt on the ground and puts his hand on her knee. She cries seeing him and starts apologizing again. To that he too starts saying its okay. He hugs her by wrapping his hand around her stomach and she cries on his shoulder. He looks up and wipes her tears and then he slowly moves up, tired of all the troubles and devastation Tanya leans down and Raj looks up slowly the y pull close together and a kiss surpasses. They slowly continue kissing further on and they and up completely on the bed, both of them wanting to escape from this past and just get away. They keep going more and slowly it turns into something more, Raj is pursuing further but Tanya stops him at once. She tells him she can't. And they feel awkward.
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