The Problem with Vivaah::
Well.. there are lots of problems but for now it's the script. Vivaah doesn't have a boring story at least it is not THAT boring. There are many other shows where the story sucks 10 times more. It's the script. The script is down right horrible. HORRIBLE. It makes the characters look brainless, and the story appears so uninteresting.
Finally it's friday!! yay! I don't mind Tanya staying kidnapped. I just hope they show us something new everyday. So far it hasn't been entirely bad. I am not complaining.
Today's update
Raj is holding kanaiyah by the collar. Kanaiyah looks really scared. Even Rajdeep has his fist ready. Kanaiyah looks to their side and screams no tanyaji don't come here. Both Rajdeep and Raj look to the side. and Kanaiyah frees himself from Raj and runs. They run after him and he hides behind a car. They lose him. (kanaiyah really is one step ahead..tsk tsk shame on them)
Tanya wakes up. He hands and feet are tied. She struggles but it's no use. She sees the window. Tanya sits on the floor and unties her feet. She tries to do the same with her hand but can't. She goes to the wondow. Trishna gets out of the car. Tanya moves her tied hand to get her attention. (you can see her being happy as she hopes to get trish to notice her) but Trish passes by. Tanya breaksdown and cries helplessly again.
Trish, Raj and Rajdeep are discussing once again. Rajdeep say kanaiyah is one step ahead of them. No matter what they do he knows their moves. He must be living somewhere close where he can watch them. Raj remembers the night he heard the noise. He shares that info. Trishna also chips in remember that day mausi saw a girl. Rajdeep looks confused and asks if she mean mausi saw tanya. Trish nodds. They decide to go check it out. (ok here comes my script problem. 1. it was too obvious. 2. change the lines. reword it or something. It makes the characters look like airheads. Rajdeep for the second time repeated the same lines and it doesn't even match his actions. A lot of times it's hard to empathize with Trish and Raj. Because they are not the best actors in tellywood so they can't really dazzle us and explain everything without proper lines. The way Raj said that night I heard a noise and as I was going to the outhouse Kanaiyah called and I got distracted. He should've shown some sense of urgency. But it looked like Rajdeep was the leader and you know when the teacher asks a question and no one knows the answers. And everyone throws something to see which one sticks? That's what it looked like. As for Trishna's line. It was a really obvious one. I believe she should've ran toward the outhouse. But she did the same thing again. Her lines meant she knows now the girl is tanya. If your sister was kidnapped and you knew she was in the outhouse would you really wait till your husband says " hmm you might be right. We should check out the outhouse" )
Kanaiyah is back in the mean time. He gets scared when he sees Tanya is not ont he bed. But he finds her by the window. He gets really harsh with her. Then he says they have to leave. he drags her on the floor.
Trish, Raj and Rajdeep come and look around. They see dirty plates Rajdeep say " look there are dirty plates here!! it means someone must've been here" ( again the line could've been better. When character talks not only do you talk to your screen partner but in a way you are talking tot he audience. And we really are not that stupid. He could've said "they were here!! look dirty plates") They go outside and see kanaiyah in his jeep as tanya is striggling with him. They spend full few minutes staring at that.
Everyone is by a cliff now. Kanaiyah is holding Tanya tightly. (one thing I have noticed and quite pleased with that he really does hold her tightly where she can't do anything. You know in other movies when people are tied I can say oh please you can get out any second. Or if the gundas are holding agirl I can oh you can just run. But not in this case. Kanaiyah really keeps a strong hold of tanya. She can't even breath right) Raj says kanaiyah let her go. Rajdeep say the same thing. Kanaiyah says what's their problem. Why can't they let two lovers unite. (lol) He says Tanya is only his. He screams Tanya was only created for kanaiyah. He goes on about the baby she is carrying. He tells Raj you can't become someone's husband by putting ek chukti sindoor on their maang. As they are saying this he is backing up toward the edge. Kanaiyah tells them not to come any farther or tanya will be hurt. Tanya cries out saying Raj don't worry about me but finish him. (it's repeated or echoed few times) Kanaiyah is shocked. he lets her go right when Tanya is about to run he grabs her again. (wow this guy is good) He keeps backing up more and it's the edge. He is falling, Tanya is falling. We see Raj standing (I pulled my video back 3 times to see if Raj caight her, he is holding her hand), trish crying and also Tanya scream. ---The end
Precap: NONE
Episode rating:: a 7. Overall it was good. My only problem was all the things I complained about
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