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Posted: 15 years ago
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😲 WOW!! This is really and amazing FF indianchaklii!!! Seriously really good!
Tanya walks up the mirror and hold on the edge of the counter for balance; looking in the mirror she thinks to herself Raj saw me with goosebumps, did he feel it too? Was I the only one to feel that electric current? Why am I always feeling different around him now? What's going on? Why am I-- her stomach twists in that same way as earlier. She takes in a sharp breath and holds her stomach the way a pregnant woman does. She looks down at an makes a face--not in a bad way but not in a smiling way either. She moans and pain look Is it kicking me? What's going on? Her nausea back again. Meanwhile Raj is on the outside looking at his hand; his hand was tingling and it was trembling a bit also. His shoulder where Tanya brushed by was tingling too; slowly and tremblingly he touches his shoulder and thinks to himself I am feeling something, and it close to love I know, but I can't put a name to it, I'm not in love, I can't be, can I? I need to talk to Tanya, tell her what's going, but would it bother her? Is she feeling it too?
---AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ahem!! OMG!!! lOOl!
Very detailed..very well written!
Great job!
Continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome update dear😊 YAY!! raj has admitted that he loves tanyaso good to know!! now it is tanya's turnπŸ˜‰ thanks once again for the wonderful update yaar, looking forward to the next update
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
so cute...Im excited to know what will happen next.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
Thank you so much guys!
Update coming soon [:
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Dhruvi - what an excellent update! You have so clearly captured Raj and Tanya. πŸ‘πŸΌ
The way you described their emotions. It's so obvious how much they love each other - only they can't seem to trust their own feelings. πŸ˜”
You wrote the movie sequence so well. The mirroring of their feelings as they sat in the dark theater. The way their hands touched and they both froze. It was just wonderful! 😊
I love this part - his reaction made me grin & laugh I could see Raj's face as he said so perfectly. Poor Raj is caught between not wanting to upset Tanya and not being able to see her suffer .....
Thinking Pssssh relax! How the hell can I relax? You screaming in pain dammit! What am I suppose to do? Just sit here and watch?
And this ... it is sooo Raj - needing to take care of Tanya ... loved it!
You have been in so much pain for far too long and it's over. I'm about to change that. Kasamh se!
But what about poor Tanya - will she be all right? And the baby? What will happen to Raj now that he knows he loves Tanya - if something happens to her!
It is terrific Dhruvi! I just loved reading how you portrayed their emotions and thoughts - it is so well written! πŸ‘πŸΌ
More Please - Soon! Can't wait for the next update!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Dhruvi dear!! πŸ€— How are you?
Thanks for the PM! This was a fantastic part!!
I love the whole movie sequence and their eye locks! I never watched RNBDJ yet but I know the concept and its so cool how you made them relate to it. I love your descriptions of their emotions. I can;t believe they finally realize their love.. well Raj more than Tanya but still.. Now I await an awesome confession at some point. I hope the baby is ok!! PM me when you update again.

I read that you posted that you Aced your exams!! Congrats dear.. I knew you could do it!! πŸ‘

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sonia && GG thanks guys [:
I glad you guys enjoyed and it's nice to know I was able to protrey thier feeling right, I wasn't sure if I was doing it right... Thanks!
GG: I'm glad you pointed out the baby; just watch what I do [;
Sonia: I have not seen the movie either, but my friend spilled the beans for me anyways so I thought I would just use that... Again the baby ahaha I'm loving this... Plus thanks (for congratz-ing me on exams) thanks so much [:
Edited by indianchaklii - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88
Check announcement bellow. FF is closing.
Read details...Sorry ]:
-Dhruvi
Edited by indianchaklii - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Guys, I am so sorry to announce but this FF is stoping I can't finish it. I got SAT/ACTs to take &+ I have all these extra classes to focus on. Plus there is something else && the fact that TAAJ no longer appeal to me. Ashu or Minu:: Please close topic.
Will post my dream "summary" ending on another post. It will be up on Monday. Not very detailed but better off then cliffhanged. -Dhruvi
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