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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
i've heard of this adi/jatin guy is is hot? people on this forum are crazy about him!!!!!!!!!!!! but anyways that was cute!!!!!!!!! i loved the friends reunion!!!!! loved the update!!!!!!! this is brillant!!!! cont soon!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52

Part 7

it's a short part - sorry


Trishna is walking and bumps into Tanya.

Trishna : sorry sorry sorry

Tanya : galti meri hai di, I wasn't looking, sorry di

Trishna smiles and walks away cause she has to bring file to rajdeep. Tanya is going to the kitchen.

In Rajdeep & Trishna's room


Trishna : rajdeep?

Rajdeep turns around and looks at Tanya

Trishna : yeh rahi aap ki file

Rajdeep : thanks trishna, usse bed par rakho, I will take it when I leave

Trishna puts it on the bed and smiles at rajdeep

Rajdeep : what's wrong? Tum aise kyun muskura rehe ho?

Trishna : bas aisi hi, I love looking at you

Rajdeep : I love looking at you to

Trishna smiles and walks towards him. she looks at him and gives him a hug. They keep hugging

In the kitchen

In the mean time Tanya is busy cooking..she is cutting the vegetables when two hands come from behind her and hug her. She turns around and sees raj.

Tanya: tum?

Raj : tum? Kya matlab? Tum kisi aur ko expect kar rahi ho

Tanya: haan

Raj looks at her surprised

Tanya : do you want to know who it is?

She looks at him and with her finger calls him closer. He comes closer. She goes to whisper something in his ear. She smiles and screams in his ear. He get's shocked and she runs away. He runs behind her.

Raj : Tanya? Ruk jao..i mean it

Tanya just laughs and keeps running, they get to the garden. She tries to hide from him but he sees her and slowly sneaks up behind her..she doesn't notice it and he puts his hand on her mouth. She tries to scream but can't.

Raj: pakar liya..ap kya karoge?

Tanya tries to get away but raj won't let her..he takes his hand away from her mouth and holds her hands so that she doesn't get away.

Tanya : raj, mujhe chodo, abhi isi waqt

Raj : kyun? Tum masti kar sakte ho par jab mein karo to kelna nahi chahti ho.

Tanya is still trying to get away. Raj leaves her hands and she is free

Raj: fine leave, your free

She walks away and he stands there..a minute later Tanya is standing in front of him with a garden hose..she presses it and the water gets on raj, he is completely soaking..he get's the hose from Tanya after a lot of struggling and hoses her down, both of them are wet..they look at each other and laugh. Tanya gets another hose and the keep hosing eachother. After a while they are both lying on the grass looking at the sky. Tanya's head on raj's shoulder and his arm is around her. He turns around and looks at her, she does the same. He gives her a kiss on the forehead and the continue to look at the sky


Hope you guys like...sorry that it's so short

Edited by Candylover - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
awe i loved the part where she screams in his ear soooo cute [:
i was laughing and smiling there soo much because i can picture that haha awe.
the last scene was really adorable too, with the laying in the grass [:
write a long update soon, whenever you can [:
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
great update!!!!!!!! plz continue!!! loved the water hose part!!!! soo cute!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
really cool!MAZA AGYA..👏..please more,more...continue😃 yaar we never get to see it on the screen ...so atleast can read ur lovely FF.please add me on ur PM list
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks for the comments everyone...will start working on part 8 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
Part 8

Raj & Tanya are still lying on the grass when they hear a voice calling Tanya. They get up and see aditya standing there
Adi : tum dono yahaan ho, i have been searching everywhere, i asked everyone
Tanya : tum yahan kaise?
Adi : woh auntiji ne mujhe tumhari ghar ka pata diya aur mein chali ayi
Raj : well it's good that your here now you can keep an eye on tanya cause i have to go to work and i can't go in these wet clothes
Raj & Aditya laugh, They all go inside and see Rajdeep & Trishna sitting on the couch
Trishna : look he found them
Rajdeep : finally
Rajdeep notices Raj and looks at him, he keeps looking up and down
Raj : kya hua rajdeep?
rajdeep : raj? tum office aise ja rahi ho?
raj : oh no mein abhi change kar ke aathi hoon
tanya : mujhe bhi change karna hai. Adi, tum yahan tehro mein abhi aayi
Raj & Tanya leaves

In Raj & Tanya's room


tanya is comes out of the bathroom, raj has changed already and is fixing his hair. tanya is busy drying her hair, she turns around and some of the water from her hair get on raj. he looks at her and is completely lost in her. he keeps looking at her how she is drying her hair. she notices that raj is looking at her and stops

tanya : aise kya dekh rahe ho?
raj : your looking beautiful, but something is missing
tanya : kya?
he brings her infront of the mirror, he takes some sindoor and fills her maang

raj : now it's complete
tanya smiles at him lovingly and gives him a kiss on his cheek

raj : yeh kya? sirf cheek par? aaj nahi
tanya smiles and knows where this is going if she doesn't listen to him
she hugs him and kisses him very passionatly. from the living room they hear rajdeep calling for raj

rajdeep : raj?? agar tum ek minute mein yahan nahi aaya toh mein upar araha hoon
just then raj & tanya come down

raj : relax, iss ghar mein koi behra nahi hai
Trishna & Tanya laugh
raj hugs tanya and rajdeep gives trishna a kiss. he holds her hand.
raj : ap chale
rajdeep : arahi hoon na, biwi ko bye kar rahi ho
raj : rajdeep? tum to aise bye kar rahi ho jaise ke tum phir ghar nahi arahe ho, trishna se baath mein baath karna, let's go
rajdeep makes a face and walks away with raj
aditya : ok girls, what's on the menu?
tanya : menu?
adi : yah, aaj hum kya kar rahe hain? dekho tanya mein yahan chuti par hoon, aur yeh waqt mein sirf tumhare saath ghusarna chaathi hoon, we have to catch up on a lot stuff.
tanya : adi aaj nahi, mujhe kitchen mein kaam hai
adi : kaunsa kaam? tanya please
he makes a sad face, trishna smiles and tanya just looks at him

trishna : tanya...tum jao i will take care of the kitchen
tanya : di, how can i let you work alone?
trishna : alone? i have the workers with me...you just go
tanya : lekin di....
trishna : tanya mujhe kuch nahi suni, dekho aditya sirf kuch hi din ke aayi hai, uske saath tora sa time to spend karo.
adi : tumhari di ki baath maan lo
tanya sighs and says ok
adi & tanya leave and trishna goes to the kitchen


In the car

tanya : adi? hum kahan ja rahi hai?
adi : just wait and see
tanya : it's been years since you came here, how do you know where to go?
adi : your right it's been years but the image of this place has been in my heart forever, it doesn't feel like years it feels like yesterday
they both smile. after a while of driving, aditya stops the car
adi : ok were here
tanya looks around and sees a place where there selling pani puri

adi : bachpan mein hum yahi aate te, yaad aya
tanya : mujhe yakeen nahi ho raha hai ke yeh jaga abhi wahan hai
adi : come let's go
they get out of the car and sit on a bench near a tree
adi leaves and gets some paani puris.

adi : ok i'm back, here you go
he gives her a plate of paani puris
tanya looks at the tree and smiles

tanya : yeh wohi tree hai na, jahan pe hum apna naam lika tha?
flashback : little aditya & little tanya are standing by the same tree, adi picks up a sharp stone and carves his name in the tree. tanya also carves her name under his name, adi then carves the date in it, and they smile. flashback over
adi : yeah it's the same tree.
adi gets up and searches for the names. he finds it and looks at it for a while
tanya gets up and stands next to him, both of them look at the tree and remember the time they carved it in the tree. after a while aditya turns to tanya and looks at her

aditya : tanya...mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai
tanya looks at him and he looks at tanya

hope you guys like this part
Edited by Candylover - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
wow an awsome update cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
awe cute update. the passionate kiss awe! i wish i can make tanay kiss raj in mine ]: at least i can imagine it here [: great update cont soon [:
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
that is so cute...i love adi !I hope raj isnt jealous😳
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