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Team Bhidur

Posted: 4 months ago

Originally posted by: asmitamohanty

Yes .. this show was on such a high point during that Rhea murder and Vidur arrest track...so much passion, rawness and intensity in the storyline... special NeiVika and most importantly Neil was shining and how!!

At such a high point...HM and Devyani came and ruined it ...it was never same againsmiley6

Yeah i lost hope that Neil would play an important role after Vidur's subplot

The show almost peaked again with Kabir track and even that was ruined

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Team Kabir

Posted: 4 months ago

Originally posted by: Pete15rogmourey

Yeah i lost hope that Neil would play an important role after Vidur's subplot

The show almost peaked again with Kabir track and even that was ruined

Yeah... I was sooo eagerly waiting for the episodes during Kabir track...

His character ,his relationship with Bhumi,his very very interesting chemistry with YUvika...every thing was soo exciting...

But the way that track concluded..it broke my trust foreversmiley36

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Posted: 4 months ago

Originally posted by: asmitamohanty

Yes .. this show was on such a high point during that Rhea murder and Vidur arrest track...so much passion, rawness and intensity in the storyline... special NeiVika and most importantly Neil was shining and how!!

At such a high point...HM and Devyani came and ruined it ...it was never same againsmiley6

After the 100th episode the show kept slipping from it's mark.. Neil used to be such an intriguing character unlike his current devdas-loverboy zone.. DJ was the negative character but uske upar bhi kabhi aise chid nahi aati thi..

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Posted: 4 months ago

I actually like Yuvika's character(that they wanted to show)

The writing dosent bring out her traits much.

And her repetition about her maqsad feels that way because it is so successively and excessively repeated in the same pattern( kinda like the storyline right now.)

They should have toned that down a bit and used those braincells to impart Yuvika some kind of awareness(self and surrounding)

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Team Neil

Posted: 4 months ago

Originally posted by: asmitamohanty

It is sad... YUvika is their protagonist..I wish writers had written a more nuanced and layered character for her..

She is not developing a proper character arc..is not learning much from her mistakes..has no idea about her enemies..

Bhumi understands the evilness behind Gargi's pretence first... YUvika actually started believing her act first...

Neil warned YUvika that mr Multani is not trustworthy...she never had a doubt on what might be his intention...

Yes... I think they could have done much better with YUvika...

Show's biggest mistake or flaw (whatever you want to call it) is there are not enough player in this battle. As i mentioned few days back that if there is only two players in the battlefield, that too clear cut black and white, than the story become stagnant. They have same pattern from the start- dj conspire against yuvika, yuvika falls into his trap, yuvika subjected to all the brutalities and harshness, but she will bear all the pain and stand tall and will once again bounce back to show how strong and resilient she is. Whether it's committee waala track, or yuvika's dying in fire or yuvika now going to jail. Only the stacks are getting higher, that too show how big monster dj is and how poor victim and strong yuvika is.

Instead of all this, they could've show apart from main battle of dj vs yuvika, there are small-small conflicts within the story such as db vs dhanraj, dhanraj vs neil, gargi vs subhadra...aise karke story badaate ....but inko aalas aati likhne mesmiley39

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Team Neil

Posted: 4 months ago

Originally posted by: asmitamohanty

Yes .. this show was on such a high point during that Rhea murder and Vidur arrest track...so much passion, rawness and intensity in the storyline... special NeiVika and most importantly Neil was shining and how!!

At such a high point...HM and Devyani came and ruined it ...it was never same againsmiley6

Us track ka popat us devyani and HM ke aane be baad hua. I was so invested in that scandal track...they maintained the suspense so well till that point. Hamaare saare theories ka band baja diyasmiley39. There were a world beyond digvikasmiley37

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Team Neil

Posted: 4 months ago

Originally posted by: HeirOfSlytherin

After the 100th episode the show kept slipping from it's mark.. Neil used to be such an intriguing character unlike his current devdas-loverboy zone.. DJ was the negative character but uske upar bhi kabhi aise chid nahi aati thi..

They turned neil from saarthi to a lover boy that too a devdas kind of lover. I used to thought that Neil will be hukum ka ikka for yuvika in this vanshaj battle...but kya se kya ho gaya...smiley6

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Posted: 4 months ago

Originally posted by: Pete15rogmourey

Rupita di posted in some thread thst the baby who plays UJ has been cast in another Swastik show....wait.....was this entire storyline about Yuvika Chinki swap executed so that they can bring back Ruhi and facilitate UJ's exit from to the show for thst baby to work in another show? This baby is pulling all the strings in the set and in the writers room I guesssmiley37

I think the shows name is Laxmi Narayan

Agar hai aisa to he bhagwan hame bacha le

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Team Kabir

Posted: 4 months ago

Originally posted by: rbpll

Show's biggest mistake or flaw (whatever you want to call it) is there are not enough player in this battle. As i mentioned few days back that if there is only two players in the battlefield, that too clear cut black and white, than the story become stagnant. They have same pattern from the start- dj conspire against yuvika, yuvika falls into his trap, yuvika subjected to all the brutalities and harshness, but she will bear all the pain and stand tall and will once again bounce back to show how strong and resilient she is. Whether it's committee waala track, or yuvika's dying in fire or yuvika now going to jail. Only the stacks are getting higher, that too show how big monster dj is and how poor victim and strong yuvika is.

Instead of all this, they could've show apart from main battle of dj vs yuvika, there are small-small conflicts within the story such as db vs dhanraj, dhanraj vs neil, gargi vs subhadra...aise karke story badaate ....but inko aalas aati likhne mesmiley39

I agree...story has become stagnant.. presence of only two players..i.e shown clearly as black and white they can only show so much....abb toh story loop me ghum Rahi hai...

Yes..I agree they could have shown small conflicts like Db vs DHANRAJ, DHANRAJ vs Neil..etc..and all these in the end affecting the main battle of DJ vs YUvika....but no..kisi bhi character ka koi aur motive hi nahin hai other than to support YUvika & DJ..

Also adding to your last post...,

Now this YUvika falling in the trap and struggling has become too repetitive..I felt really really bad for her in the last fire incident when DJ pushed her into the fire..& then she came as YUkti to take revenge with Saam daam dand bhed...a fresh concept..I was cheering for her..

But...then we realised..

Yukti had nothing to her.No plans. No back up. No prevention.She just talked big.,Made huge vows.I swear main yeh kardungi. But did nothing in that direction.

Whatever substantial she did was a reaction..like buying the left wing...it was not a part of her plan..Db asked her to go out..& she had to find a way to stay there.. again with the help of luck like always she found that way... changing eye colour is also something she did in the middle..toh uska plan tha kya???

But her mission ...went from Ruhi bhabhi, Db, to Nikhil-miraya wedding...she still doesn't know what DJ has done with Bhumi and why is Arjun his gulaam..This is a sign of being clueless and all over the place....

She knows her enemy less than what she claims to..They are always a step ahead of her...& She needed a defeat...a solid one to actually realise what DigVijay mahajan is actually made up of..and never makes the mistake of underestimating him as " kagazi Sher" again....

I do feel bad for her now...but I think DJ played better & deserved to win...

YUkti track had so much potential... I wish they could have done better...

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Team Kabir

Posted: 4 months ago

Originally posted by: rbpll

Us track ka popat us devyani and HM ke aane be baad hua. I was so invested in that scandal track...they maintained the suspense so well till that point. Hamaare saare theories ka band baja diyasmiley39. There were a world beyond digvikasmiley37

Ohhh that part of the show was sooo good...smiley42...

They had designed prominent characters with great care, cast solid actors in those roles, given them specific style, written them with definite background...there is a mystery and aura surrounding these characters and the show only..

Characters like DHANRAJ and Vidur were the trump card of this show...but they are yet to get their duesmiley38..

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