Poetries [vanshaj]

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Posted: 2 years ago
#1

NeiVika❤️



Woh nahi tha mera phir bhi uska mai banta raha,

Kya pata kya jaadu tha usmein ki uski aur chalta hi raha,

Bohot dur thi woh mujhse yeh jaanta tha,

Par use bhi toh iss dil mein dhadkana aata tha,

Paas bhale hi woh na rahe iska gham nahi,

Par Dur jaana usse hume yeh manzur nahi,

Uske liye khud se kiya har waada bhi maine toda tha,

Joh rishta hamara kabhi tha hi nahi woh bhi toh joda tha!!

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Posted: 2 years ago
#2

Ruhi


Kisine suni hi nahi jo kahani thi meri,

Kisine pucha hi kahan ki kya marzi hai Teri,

Nayi pehchan milegi kehkar chhin liya astitva mera,

Aur fir bhi jhutha hi raha wajood mera,

Kisi ki jhuthi Shaan ke liye khud ko khoya tha maine,

Woh sab bhi manzur kiya jo nagawaar tha mujhe,

Naa jaane kyun uss jhuth ko jeeti rahi main,

Aur khud ki nazron mein hi girti rahi mai!!


Posted: 2 years ago
#3

Both these poems are beautiful in their own way , the first one was heartwarming whereas the second one was melancholic....do write more these poems were so good ❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago
#4

Both these poems are really beautiful and describe the feelings of these characters well

SherDilNetaji thumbnail
Posted: 2 years ago
#5

Glad that you loved them🤗

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Posted: 2 years ago
#6

Such beautiful stuff🥺😭

SherDilNetaji thumbnail
Posted: 2 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: oh_nakhrewaali

Such beautiful stuff🥺😭

🤗
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Posted: 2 years ago
#8

No tags for me😒 anyways beautifully written👏esp the 1st one wow the feeling u described amazing

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Posted: 2 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: SoniRita

No tags for me😒 anyways beautifully written👏esp the 1st one wow the feeling u described amazing

I tagged you before, but you did not respond so I thought you are not interested😒 sorry, will always tag you from now on🤗
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Posted: 2 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: Moonks

I tagged you before, but you did not respond so I thought you are not interested😒 sorry, will always tag you from now on🤗

Plz keep tagging me, life is busy that is all but I will read it eventually or over weekends😳 be patient.

I am not ignoring anyone's tags😒

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