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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanx for the wonderful response!! Keep giving reviews!!
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sorry i would not be able to post a new chapter today. but tomorrow pakka.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww... my naughty prithvi... kabhi nahi sudhrega yeh...;)
its nicee anisha... well done..
love it... keep updating...

Edited by kiranjas - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome yaar...
Prithvi is already attracted towards sanju...nice 😛
Do continue soon
Thanx for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww... son nice dear... continue soon
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Ch-4

At the party.
Ela asked Vinnie- Sab kahan hain? abhi tak nahi aaye.I jus hope ki sanju se pehle aa jaye! Vinnie- Aa jaayenge...{suddenly door bell rings} Aa gaye!!
Ela says-stupid,sanju bhi toh ho sakti hain.
Vinnie-ya,maine toh socha hi nahi hain!
When they open the door sumone clicks their pic and they get shocked. They shout together-RGV!!!
Rgv- sorry girls but main natural photos click karne ki practice kar raha hu! no harm.
Ela- Btw cake kahan hain??
Sahil comes n says and locks the door-Aa raha hain.. par tum log door close toh karo. atleast sanju shudnt see all this..even if she comes.
Suddenly Someone knocks the door. Ela says-How stupid! didnt the person see the bell?
She opens it - oh how cud ive not guessed it, Guyz, Mak is here!Huh.
Mak- Ela why so rude welcome??ela- its specially for u!
Ela on seein prithvi- Hey do i know u?still, Nice. {chekin him out}
Mak- well he's prithvi,my friend. He'll too be joining our college.I dont think u'll mind if he's in our grp. Right?
Ela - Ya, why not.
Sahil,rgv and vinnie nod too.
Happy, prithvi says- thanku guys now i think my cllg life wud be better! well why this party n all?
ela- actually a special frnd of ours has achievd sumthin really awesum. So jus a celebrtion!
Prithvi- ok, am excited too to meet ur frind.
Bell rings.
Vinnie- maybe its him with the cake !
She goes and sees through pin hole. She says- O gosh, its her!! Kya kare!! ela- woh abhi tak cake lekar nahi aaya ! n shes already here!
Prithvi suggests- maybe we should call her in, u open the door without making noise n switch off lights.
Vinnie does the same.
sanju realises the door is open but every where ther's dark. She sees all other houses havin elec. She thinks that it might be a fuse prob in her house.
She enters and calls out - ela,vinnie. kahan ho??
Shes about to slip when a boy catches her.{he's prithvi} But shes not able to see him. She gets up. suddenly lights come n everyone says-SURPRISE!!
she's sooo happy!! She hugs ela n vinnie n thanx everyone.
she notices prithvi n shouts wid disgust- Tum! yaha kya kar rahe ho? mak, tum ise yahan kyu laaye?
Prithvi is in thoughts realising that sanju is the same girl. Ela says- leave na babes lets enjoy .
sanju- par ela...
suddenly a guy says- par mere bina kaise enjoy karoge??
everyone smiles.Prithvi confused. rgv goes n says softly to him- bhai accha hua tu aa gaya nahi toh yeh dono ladkiyan tujhe kaccha chaba jaati!
Guy- Varun mittal ko koi chhu bhi nahi sakta!
Ela goes to him- Theek hain, magar cake??
varun- maine sab intezaam kar diya hain. jus chill!
Sanju- oh hello, kya khusur phusur {murmuring} ho rahi hain?
Varun- sanju, main toh khusur phusur bhi tumhare baare mein karta hu!
sanju- ha ha, how funny! Vaise guys tumhara surprise bas yahi tha? ya fir...{looking at varun}
Varun- of course, aur bhi hain tum bas aayo.
Sanju smiles. He closes her eyes with his hands and takes her to her room
Vinnie to ela- yeh kahan le jaa raha hain? Room mein kya hain?
Ela- pata nahi, humne to wahan kuchh nahi kia!

they all go there. Varun removes his hands and says in sanju's ears- three, two, one n OPEN!
She's totally surprised! Her room is well decorated and there is a big german choco heart shaped cake- her favourite!
She's soo happy she hugs him and he too happily!
Varun- tumhe achha laga na! sanju- nahi... {all shocked} BAHut achha laga! thanku soo much. after all mera bff itna creative hain kuchh achha toh karta hi! Varun feels sad at hearing only 'BFF'!{ not sumthin more spcl }
Prithvi notices this. They go and cut the cake. All enjoy.
Varun to prithvi- heyy i've never seen u befor!
prithvi- Ya, i'm mak's friend. my name's prithvi, prithvi sanyal and you are varun, right?
Varun- right!
Prithvi- vaise kaafi close frnship lagti hain tumhari n sanjana ki.
Varun- yeah we're ''BFF's'', only{he says this word softly but comes in prithvi's notice}
Prithvi- well i can understand, when u do so much for the girl u lik n she says just friend, it hurts!
V- how do u know?
p- dikhta hain
V- toh phir use kyu nahi dikha?{sadly} actually its not her fault, maine use kabhi kuchh kaha hi nahi!
P- koi baat nahi, keep tryin but rem, say only when time is right!
V- i'll rem. well nice talkin to u. ill b happy if ull b in our grp.see ya!
Vinnie n ela ask varun- yeh sab kab hua??
varun- jab u were busy with da hall! Vaise bhi main bahut fast hu. Chhodo na, LETS PARTY GUYZ!!!!
sanjana finally agrees to let prithvi be in the party on her bff's request.

Precap- Sarun sancing suddenly sanjana falls in prithvi's arms.




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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanx for the PM...
its awesome dear...
party and party... prithvi advice bhi deta hian well n gud...

khud ko sanju pasand hai aur varun ko usse propose karni ki advice di jaa rahi hai... bade dil bada prithvi...

precap seems interesting...
sanju in prithvi's arms...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow.. nice one dear...
update it soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kiranjas

thanx for the PM...
its awesome dear...
party and party... prithvi advice bhi deta hian well n gud...

khud ko sanju pasand hai aur varun ko usse propose karni ki advice di jaa rahi hai... bade dil bada prithvi...

precap seems interesting...
sanju in prithvi's arms...


exactly... prithvi likes sanju.. but givng advice to varun... 😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aww!!
amazing updates..
really loved it
prithvi's entry.. awesome..😊

he made sanju her enemy..
lets see how they become frnds

varun likes sanju
n prithvi giving him advice ..
not bad..

eagerly waiting for the next part
sorry for the late reply
thanx for the pm😊
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