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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: kiranjas

hey sneha... it's awesome yr... i really liked ur writings...

wowww mera prithvi agar serial mein asia dikhate to kitna cutee lagta... jst imagine...

maine abhi abhi yeh FF dekha aur dono chapters read kar liyee... loved it...

update it soon and pm me if possible... i m desperate to know wt will happen in the next chapter...


Thanx a lot kiru for ur lovely long comment...
Will try to update it soon n will pm u for sure
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: sanju_arsha

i just read all the updates in a go...n it was 'WOW'...
I loved Sanvi's first meeting..
N ur hindi is not so bad yaar...
Nxt time when u update... Plsss pm me...


Thanx a lot yaar...
I will pm u for sure πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: radzzz123

wow di..

its amazing
read both the parts together
amazing
update soon

waiting for ur next update


Thanx a lot ridzii πŸ˜ƒ ..
Glad that u liked it...
Will update the next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: sumimita

wah wah kya baat hai...

kya update hai... dil khus hogaya,,,, sanvi's first meeting...😊


Thanx a lot sweety for ur lovely comment...
Dil khus hogaya πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
hey sneha!!! πŸ˜›
Sorry I forgot to comment on this awesome chapter!!! 😳
Well, I really really loved it!!! It was terrific πŸ˜‰
I hope we all get to see sanvi in the next chapter!!! πŸ˜ƒ
the precap I didn't understand it really well...but I loved the chapter!!!!! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
your Hindi is good yaar...chinta kyun karte ho!!! Confident ke saath aage bado and hum sab aapke saath hai ⭐️ πŸ˜ƒ
Please update soon!!!! πŸ˜›πŸ˜› waiting for it eagerly!!! ⭐️
take care 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: Komal1004


hey sneha!!! πŸ˜›

Sorry I forgot to comment on this awesome chapter!!! 😳
Well, I really really loved it!!! It was terrific πŸ˜‰
I hope we all get to see sanvi in the next chapter!!! πŸ˜ƒ
the precap I didn't understand it really well...but I loved the chapter!!!!! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
your Hindi is good yaar...chinta kyun karte ho!!! Confident kesaath aagebado and humsabaapkesaath hai β­οΈπŸ˜ƒ
Please update soon!!!! πŸ˜›πŸ˜›waiting for it eagerly!!! ⭐️
take care 😊


Thanx a lot for ur lovely comment dear...it means a lot to me..
Happy to know that my hindi is not that bad...i wii update the next chapter soon..probably today.
U will get to c sanvi for sure...
Every one told that the precap was confusing...i think the confusion will be cleared after reading the update
Thanx once again
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67

Yup...i will update the next part soon dear...probably today
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Sneha.V.Arsha


Thanx a lot for ur lovely comment dear...it means a lot to me..
Happy to know that my hindi is not that bad...i wii update the next chapter soon..probably today.
U will get to c sanvi for sure...
Every one told that the precap was confusing...i think the confusion will be cleared after reading the update
Thanx once again

yaa Hindi ke baare mein chinta mat karo!! Tongue
Most welcome!!!! πŸ˜ƒYou deserve those comments yaar!!! Star
waiting for it then!!!!! Update real fast!!!! Embarrassed
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
WHEN WILL U UPDATE NEXT PART SWEETIE?? its awesomeπŸ‘πŸΌ
Edited by angel0900 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
i was planning to discontinue this ff...but i m continuing it for my sweet frnd.wrote it in 20 mts.
sorry in advance if it doesnt stand upto ue expectation.

Chapter 3

At clg.
everyone are sitting in the canteen except Ela,Sanju n Vinnie.they r chitchatting,joking,pulling each others leg n having fun.
varun : ye ela abi tak aya kyon nai?
ela : tumne pukara aur hum chale aye.
hearing the voice prithvi suddenly turned towards the entrance n seeing ela alone he felt a little disappointed but he dnt know why...
they again continued their fun section.suddenly ela noticed that.prithvi is not paying attention to their talk.he is looking at the entrance now n then as if he is expecting someone.
Ela : prithvi, r u here?tum kisi ka intazar kar rahe ho kya?
prithvi : nai yr...
Ela : then kyon baar baar darvaze ke or dekh rahe ho?
prithvi : vo..vo..nothing.
after some tym.
prithvi : where is sanju?
ela : oh...so u were waiting for sanjuπŸ˜‰...kya chakkar he?...kahin tumhe sanju se pyar to nai,,,love at first sightπŸ˜†
prithvi : stop it ela ..i was just asking...pyar or mein..nooo way..😳
but ela was not convinced.she felt something fishy.
ela : k..she went to meet the princi to complete her admission formalities...bus ate hi honge.
after some tym sanju entered the canteen.
sanju : Ela..
ela : sanju,everything ok..
sanju ; yup.
then sanju noticed prithvi.
sanju : hey prithvi,
but there was no reply from prithvi.he is lost in sanju . she is looking extremly beautiful today.

(sanju n elas dress)
ela pinched him n brought him back to the real world.
prithvi: hi sanju, hws the clg..liked it?
sanju : clg kaafi achi he.
then ela introduced sanju to her gang.sanju shook hands with everyone n its varuns turn now.
varun : hi , m varun...rockstar of the clg😎.πŸ˜‰.
.n he winked at her n foewarded his hand.
sanju smiled at it n she too forwarded her hand for a hand shake.but when her hand touched varuns, she felt something different.she felt as if she know him.she put aside all her thoughts n shook hands with him.
during the whole scene ela was in her deep thoughts.something is cooking in her mind.
sanju : ela,u have introduced all ur frnds,but apna boyfrnd ko nai...where is he?..i want to meet that poor fellowπŸ˜›
rohan : arree..vo to yaham par hi he...
sanju : yaham😲...kon???
RGB : va...
before he could complete

Ela : prithvi...prithvi is my boyfrnd,
all: prithvi????😲
prithvi : mein ??????😲
varun looked at ela n he got it.she is upto someting.so he also decided to act along with her plan.
varun : yaa..prithvi is her boyfrnd...such a cute pair na?πŸ˜›
sanju : prithvi is ur boyfrnd😊...pahle kyon nai bataya?...ya varun u r ryt...they look awesome together...m so happy for u guys.
prithvi wanted to kill ela at that moment.his facial expressions dekhne layak tha n ela was njoying it completely..he dont understand wats happening.he was so shoked to say something.by now even the gang understood ela is upto something.so they also decided to act along with it.
prithvi : ela, i want to talk to u come with me...
ela : no prithvi...ab nai ..baad me,
sanju : ela..jao na prithvi is so desperate to talk to u in privateπŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
she said it in a teasing tone.this added more fuel to prithvis anger.
prithvi : no...nothing like that😳...(then looking at ela)..leave it😑
ela is finding it hard to control her laughter.
ela : ok prithvi...lets meet at our secret place in the evening.
sanju : oh...secret place...secret baateinπŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
prithvi glared ela in utter shock n anger..ela was chukling inwardly at prithvis condition.
then ela signalled varun n they boh left from their giving excuse of clg work as varun is the GS(General Secretory) n Ela is the CS (Cultural secretory).
varun : ela wats in ur mind...kyon bechara prithvi ko ise fasa diyaπŸ˜›
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precap :ela expains her plan to varun ; vinnies entry ; sanju recognises varun as her childhood love



Edited by Sneha.V.Arsha - 11 years ago
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