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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
hey another amazing long update i am happy that i got some sanvi scenes super happy radzz u r really an innovative girl
ur dialogues n way of writing is impressive n im not trying to flatter u its a genuine comment ur writing skill is just getting better n better with each chapter
n ishq wala love is d perfect song for rigvi n sanvi ela aur varun ka pata nahi woh dono main koi chemistry hi nahin hai
par sanvi r mad for each other bilkul rab ne bana di jodi
waiting for ch 4 update asap
lastly thanks for the pm radzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: dhaakshu

Prithvi came near her , gave her a small kiss and whispered in her ears : don't worry just trust me'
aww.. so cute😳

Ela: come on mac , lets dance
It's the correct time to become a popular couple'..
We want to become popular na..Lets go we are getting late
lol.. END kamal k hai n ela...🤣

Afterall u only said that u are a respected professor of the college..
And dancing don't suit's a professor..
Right na????
Rigved: Vinnie , come on yaar..
I was just joking..
haaye, rigvi ..

Host: hey!! Couples.. the song has stopped , u can continue your romance somewhere else..
for some unknown reason, muje aisa laga jaise host ne mujse ye keh diya, n i ws blushing☺️

He was murdered friends'.
And was murdered by..

o god! i mixd up the 2 lines n i read it as he ws murdered by friends😲

I know what had happened on Mumbai highway 3 years back'.
oh! so here is the start of mystery
kya clue hai

sanju n varun's poems were my favorite🥱
sanju's ws so intriguing n varun's ws so meaningful

muje laga shayad ye post lamba ho jayega
phir maine pada tht u wnt long coments so...😆
i hope itna lamba comment acchha laga

waiting for new year [that is, chapter 4]



ohh!!
i really liked ur comment...

u read it as - he was murdered by friends...

no not by friends ..
but sort of , due too a friendly mistake...
no .. no ... no..
i can't reveal it now...
you need to wait for it...

and yes..
for chapter 4
u need to wait till new year
new year will bring chapter 4 along with a little surprise..

the surprise can be a good clue for u all to solve the mystery yourselfs
or it can even be a small and sweet os
on one of our couples..

so keep guessing
what's the surprise..

love ur comment
muaahh!!😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: muzzy_sk

Dude, the clues man!!. M hooked to the story now... Do update ASAP!. Till then we will try to sunderstand those clues!. N yea plz PM. :)

-Shreya and Kanishtha



be hooked up to the story
and scratch ur mind..

will PM u
the next time i update..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: SHARVANI

hey another amazing long update i am happy that i got some sanvi scenes super happy radzz u r really an innovative girl

ur dialogues n way of writing is impressive n im not trying to flatter u its a genuine comment ur writing skill is just getting better n better with each chapter
n ishq wala love is d perfect song for rigvi n sanvi ela aur varun ka pata nahi woh dono main koi chemistry hi nahin hai
par sanvi r mad for each other bilkul rab ne bana di jodi
waiting for ch 4 update asap
lastly thanks for the pm radzz


oh!! thanx a lot..
i am glad u liked it..
i tried my best for adding good romantic scenes..
thanx for the compliment , that my writing skills are improving..
i am happy about that..

and the next chapter will reveal some of the mysteries...
and will give u all the first lead..
for solving the case..

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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
this was so coool

suspence thriller w8ng 4 the nxt update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: chaichil

this was so coool

suspence thriller w8ng 4 the nxt update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


will update soon..
and i am waiting for ur story..
pls. update ur story soon..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
😊hey !! read all d chaps. dey r awsm!!!!!!!!!!!
do cntinue!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: harika04angel

😊hey !! read all d chaps. dey r awsm!!!!!!!!!!!

do cntinue!😊



will continue soon..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Sorry for not commenting all these days. I was busy in my final project! Read all the parts. they were amazing. Loved them. Plz cont soon. Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
hii.. nice story... read all parts... continue soon & pm me 😊
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