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Posted: 5 years ago
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Very interesting

Haha that's a bomb on SR indeed.

Great

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Dear friend its becoming interesting pleaseeeeeee update soon๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hey everyone, I'm so sorry for not updating regularly, from now I will try to update whenever possible. From now I will be updating it on wattpad too :)

Here's the link

https://my.w.tt/cZB5eFDIW0

Part 3:

She bent on her knees saying "Will u marry me Mr. Suraj Rajvanshi " Leaving everyone amused

Flashback

Suraj's pov

She ran to me in a filmy style and hugged me tightly, I wasn't expecting this...I felt so out of the place, I wouldn't be surprised if I'm day dreaming then she gently Wishpered in my ears

"Hero banne ka bahut shouk hai na..Don't you dare utter a word... Just go on with the flow else u will face the worst consequences....I swear I'm so good in playing women card.....bekar me villain kyu banna"

My brain was desperately scrambling to make sense of it all when I felt her lips brushed over mine... every part of me goes on a pause but I immediately took a step backward......I regretted being there I just wanted to run away from there,before I could utter a word she was on her knees proposing me!!! What the hell is going on??? Am I in an alternate universe or is it my horrible nightmare !!!

Present :

She narrowed her eyes to him and warned him to act accordingly,He glanced around the people nervously.....his heart slammed against his chest unable to comprehend what had just happened, feeling trapped and having no other option he accepted her proposal faking a smile,She quickly got up and hugged him back

Meanwhile suraj's colleagues were taken aback and equaly hurt with this revelation as he never shared anything of such sort with them,they left from there felling disgusted at him.

The news of Sukor relationship spread like a wildfire as it was telecasted live

In no time it reached suraj's parents.....they are more than happy instead of being shocked or angry.... Honestly it's expected from them....Being Rajvanshi's they always wanted DIL from a very rich family ....they even hated when suraj declared to work based on his calliber......suraj always dreamt on making his own name rather than relying on his father's family business....so he left Azaadgunj for pursuing his career against his parents wish.

"Tejeswini ji zara ye dekiye hamare ullu ke patte ne ek amir ladki ko pataya, ye tho headlines hai aaj ki"

"sachii kamal ji? Kam se kam ek tho dang ka kaam kiya ye ladka.... Warna mai ye sochkar pareshaan ho rahi thi ki ye ladka koyi middle class ladki ko lakar hamare gale me na baand le"

"Beshak"

" Dekiye hamari bahu kitni Sundar aur susheel lag rahi hai....mujhe bahut pasand ayi ye ladki" ๐Ÿ˜

" Jaldi se Samaan pack kijiye tejeswini ji hum abhi jaakar rista pakka karwate hai"

"Ji, subh kaam me dher nahi karni chahiye"

Branch 2:

Soon everyone left leaving both of them alone, chakor dragged a chair for herself and sat infront of suraj crossing her legs over the other while he was still trying to figure out what was happening with him.....where has he landed himself into

"So When are we tying the knot hubby oops would be"

"ARE U SERIOUSLY OUT OF UR MIND" He said with blood shot eyes

"U shouldn't have messed up with me" She said playing with her fingers

"Why are you doing this?.....u could have just thrown me out instead"

"Throwing you out isn't a big deal...I could have done it on the day U INSULTED ME IN MY CABIN, I remember from that very day u never left a chance degrading me infront of the whole world...did you? They think I'm cold,heartless and cruel.....I just returned your favours by framing you a cunning, crooked double faced person infront of the same people and ya your trusted ones"

"U are so sick Ms. Lal, I have never come across a pathetic person like you in my whole life and I today proudly declare that I don't have any regret for almost exposing your true face to the society... u deserve it for firing an innocent and of course as you wished I'm proved crooked,cunning and a cheap liar.....u won๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ Now kindly stop this baseless drama of marriage.....this isn't a joke....atleast for me!!!"

"I'm serious Mr. Rajvanshi.....afterall I found my prince Charming"

" U are unbelievable Ms. Lal!! Marriage is a sacred relation.....U have no right to make fun of it"

"I don't care"

"Fine then I'm resigning from this company.... I can no longer stay here.... GOOD BYE and STAY AWAY FROM ME" He said outraged

"Not in this life baby"

" I would rather prefer to die instead of marrying you "

"We are getting married and that's final"

"Mai bhi dekta hu ye kaise hoti hai"

"See you soon baby"

He gave her a disgusted look and left from there

Next day

Vivaan:"I never expected this from him ragini"

Ragini"Such a liar..." ๐Ÿ˜ก

Adi:"I thought he is one of us, he lost my respect "

Vivaan:" I will not spare him for playing with our trust"

Ragini:" Leave it vivaan... Otherwise his fiance will make our life worser than hell"

Adi:"exactly... Com on let's get back our work "

It didn't go unnoticed by suraj who came to handover his resignation to chagan... He felt wretched and left from there without a second thought

He rushed to his home to find peace....little did he expect that he would be getting the shock of his life!!


Edited by Night_dreamer - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#14

Awesome Pleaseeeeeee update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: nemo316

Gripping update ๏ฟผ๐Ÿ‘

Thank you ๐Ÿค—

The employees remind me of the villagers, they turned against the good guy at the first hurdle.

๏ฟผ ๐Ÿ˜†

These people atlast took a stand for chagan though ... Our Azaadgunj villagers are a big time disappointment

The spy camera was a good plan, too bad Imli was a traitor. The slap came as a shock but can't blame Suraj, Chakor was playing dirty, I cheered on when he slapped her.

Why did Chakor get Imli arrested? was she really harming the company or did she frame her because she back-stabbed her colleagues?.

Imli was playing along with chakor's plan, little did she knew that chakor will outsmart her for her own safety๐Ÿคฃ

Chakor pretending that she and Suraj are a couple ๐Ÿ˜ฎ and the wedding proposal ๐Ÿ˜ฎ, I wonder what's her plan. Loved that scene and Suraj's shock at the kiss ๐Ÿ˜‚.

@bold U will know it soon ;) and poor him :(

I understand your studies are taking most of your time, so no worries as long as you eventually update it and good luck with your studies ๐Ÿ˜Š.

Thank you so much for the wishes๐Ÿ˜Š I will try to update as early as possible from now on, I already kept you waiting for months

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumsukor

Very interesting

Haha that's a bomb on SR indeed.

Great

Thank you ๏ฟผ๐Ÿค—

Let's see how SR will deal with it ;)

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shar456

Awesome Pleaseeeeeee update soon

Thank you๐Ÿค—

I will try to update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Part 4 :

His house is being decorated grandly, his parents were busy in making some arrangements....he could see his relatives helping them.....Shiku was arranging things here and there, everyone was looking very exited

He reached his mother and asked "Mom what's going on here"

"Suraj....I'm very happy for you" She said hugging him

"MOM!! " He said breaking the hug and glared at her

KN broke the ice saying "What else could it be after your world famous confession, ur marriage preparations"

"WTF....ye sab karne ko kis ne kaha aapko! " He shouted gaining everyone's attention

KN and teju pulled him aside avoiding further embrasment

"My life is already messed up and why are u people hell bent on creating more complications? "

Teju: "Look beta I understand what you are trying to say but it's no secret that you love this bengalan....and we never stood by u when u needed us the most, give us a chance to remorse it atleast by being with you in this descion.... If ur happiness lies in this girl then we don't want to become an obstacle" She said dramatically

KN:"so without a second thought we landed in Lal's house early this morning.....luckily samdan ji and bahurani were present, we respectfully asked her hand for you and they happily accepted"

Suraj was now getting irritated and mad at his parents, he shut his eyes trying to control the anger flowing up in his veins

Teju:"considering subh muhurat we fixed ur engagement today ... Within 3 days u will get married "

"WHAT!!! "

KN:" Nothing else matters for us more than your happiness" He said trying to be emotional

Unable to control his rage anymore he literally shouted on his parents

" Happiness my foot........ That women trapped me... I will explain everything ....first pack our things, we are heading back to Azaadgunj... I don't want to stay here.....not even for a second"

Teju:"Suraj it's better u stop being aggressive, chakor already warned us that u are angry with her for her sudden confession infront of the world and u will be upto something like this"

Suraj :" Holy shit.....Mom, dad I am serious.... I don't love her, she is one pathetic women.....I swear on... "

He got interrupted by chakor,He's awestruck seeing her there. .... She is wearing a creamy yellow Lehenga which is enhancing her beauty...she is alluring......when
reality hit his head he turned away

"OMG......U swear on God!!.....that I trapped you in my love.....mom, dad look as I said he started his melodrama.....stop being mean " She pouted looking at them while she slightly smriked at suraj... He gave her a death glare

Teju:"Jo Hua sho Hua, it's time to start afresh...aur aisi suljhi Hui ladki sab ke nasseb me nahi hoti.....ye bilkul heer hai heer"

Suraj murmured "ye heer hai tho mujhe kya sadak se utakar laye the"

Meanwhile pandit announced :" KN ji aap log yaha ho....jaldi kijiye muhurat nikal rahi hai"

Suraj:"so it be Pandit ji.... there's nothing sort of engagement is gonna happen here " He said feeling suffocated and left from there

Teju:"What's wrong with him"

Chakor:"mom let me handle this " She smiled at them and went searching for him, she saw him packing his stuff

Suraj pov

Anger boiled deep in my system,I have to get out from everyone's way before they destroy my life, they are not even in a state to understand me.

" Hello Maya this is suraj"

[Aalisha panwar will be essaying role of maya, she is one of his closest friend ]

" I hate you...and I mean it"

"Now what's wrong with you women"

"Kamine did you even care to inform me about your relationship with The Chakor Lal moreover you are getting married in 3 days yet never bothered to invite me, Mai Kya itni parayi hogayi ki ye sab mai headlines se jaanu"๐Ÿ˜’

"Trust me even I got to know about my relationship status yesterday and marriage....don't get started with it Maya.....its not happening"

"Really.....do I look like a dumbass"๐Ÿ™„

"Listen I'm eloping........ Get my visa updated and book me a ticket for U.K tonight"

"Are you out of your mind, what about that girl? "

"Maya I don't love her,she is trapping me...... I will explain everything once reach your home"

"But... "

"Maya please do me this one favor"

"Fine.... But I need to know what's happening"

"Love you janeman.....i promise I will explain everything....Bye" He splilled the beans totally unaware of chakor's presence

"Woah !! what a master plan, my fiance is very sharp..... But poor you...I caught you red handed... That hurts isn't it?

" It doesn't matter anymore....Mai tho chala... Tumhari shadi tume hi Mubarak ho " he said her waving a good bye

"Let me guess tomorrow's headlines"

"I don't give a shit" he said opening the window

"Famous business women Chakor Lal is brutally dumped by her fiance.... Courtesy his shameless affair with a bi**h named Maya"

"Don't you dare... " He said enraged turning back

"I'm not saying this.....I MEAN IT.....this is gonna be tomorrow's headlines if you back out.....Look I have a proof as well" She said showing him a recording which she recorded a while ago "well I know your intention sadly not the media.......Now it's upto you to protect your so called friend's respect"

Suraj left the his bag approaching her and held her shoulders

"Why are you doing this? U got your revenge right ? "

"What about the slap?...no one ever dared to slap me"

"If you wish I will apologize infront of everyone"

"Usse kya hoga, u also hurt my big fat ego by going against me....jab dard diya.... Malham bhi tumhi lagauge......that's possible only if...."

" If I marry you by sticking to the rumors you spread about us.....so that my people can hate me from bottom of their hearts and never forgive me"

"Na Na ur mistaken....there's something more to it" ๐Ÿ˜ˆ

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