My One Kind Lovestory-Mansha(os)

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My one kind love story-Mansha(os)


Abhi:Manan she shouted looking at her cute baby boy dressed in a cute baby grl dress playing happily in her hubby's arm

Looking up he saw his beautiful wife glaring at him knowing that she might kill him at any instant he got up gave her a light peck on the forehead & made the most pleasant smile that he could hoping to melt her anger

Ma:hey abhi aj jaldi uthgayi

Abhi:haan Manan aur aapne phir se manas ko ladkiyon keh kapde kyun pehnaye

Ma:dekho maine pehle hi kaha tha mujhe ek ladka aur ek ladki chahiye ab tum mujhe ladki dena nahi chahthi toh I decided ki manas ek mahina mere liye mera baby boy hain aur uske dusre mahine yeh mera baby grl banega

Abhi:Manan manas is a baby boy & only 4 months

Ma(pouting):pata hain par aaj yeh papa ki baby grl hain owww abhi you spoilt our baby & papa time

Abhi(shaking her head):arggg sometime I wonder hw I felt in love with such a mad person like u

Ma:socho socho mein chala "chale papa ki princess taking his baby grl oh sorry baby boy in his arms"

Abhi:arggg kya pati hain mere opps sorry introduction dena bhool gayi main mrs.Abhilasha Manan Sharma hoon aur woh psycho haina mere pyara hubby hain mr.Manan sharma I cant believe ki I actually felt in love with him at frst sight itslf

Flashback

2years ago

It was the frst day of the university & by coincidence the first person I saw was Manan

hayye he was soo handsome actually he still is that handsome wd those well toned muscles dekhte hi mujhe pyar hogaya bt soon I felt my lil heart breaking in tiny tiny pieces when I came to knw that he was the biggest Casanova of our university roz woh kisi nayi ladki keh saat hote hain from then I decided to keep safe distance bt kambhakh ishq the more I tried to distance myslf the more I felt for him

Then came the cupid of my story my bst frnd Sammy actually She was madly in love with deep Manan's bst frnd and so he was bt as we say in every love story there has to be a villain here the villain was sammy's dad actually he was against sammy n deep marriage & planned her marriage with one of the biggest business tycoon

Sa(crying): Abhilasha mujhe deep keh paas abhi jaana hain I dnt wnt to marry someone else

Abhi:relax Sammy main hoon na(ha ha srk dialogue )

Sa:but tum kya karogi tum toh deep seh kabhi baat nahi karti

Abhi:actually main baat nahi karti par tum toh karti ho na tum sabkuch ek letter mein likhdo mein deep ko dehdungi

Sa(smilling);oww Abhilasha u r grt yeh theek rahega

So She gave me the letter to give to deep

The nxt day I searched for deep in the whole uni but found him nowhere suddenly my eyes felt on Manan I was like kya karun Manan koh letter dun deep koh dene keh liye nahi I cnt do that par phir Sammy ka kya hoga but no I had to do it for my best friend hence dil par patthar rak ke I went to gve the letter to Manan & as usual he was surrounded by the butterflies such despos I tell you humesha mere Manan keh saat chipki hui rehthi hain

Abhi(nervously):excuse me

Ma(looking the letter in my hand):yes love letter

Abhi(smilling):haan

Ma:actually iss hafte keh liye mein book hoon so better luck next week u see

Abhi(puzzled):WHAT?????? aap galat samajrahe ho main

Ma(nt allowing her to complete her sentence):main sahi samajraha hoon actually let me think Monday koh tina tues ko I thnk Sheena

Seeing his reaction I was irritated as hell kyun nah ho yaar ek taraf mein bichari apni feelings ko lock karke mein yahan apne saheli keh liye isse baat karne aayi aur yeh janab hain keh mujhe apna schedule suna raha hain

Abhi(Shouting angrily):SHUT UP main yahan apko love letter dene nahi ayi actually yeh deep kah letter hain Sammy neh bheja hain par maybe aaj deep uni nahi aya toh I thought to gve it to you so that u can pass it to him par yahan toh aap bina baat suneh bakeh jah rahe ho lo deep koh dedena handeling him the letter I turned over my heels leaving a puzzled Manan behind his expression tld me that actually no grls had the ability to talk to him lke that

After two days

Seeing Abhilasha alone in the corridors

Ma(Shouting):excuse me miss seeing no response from her yo miss hitler

Abhi(seeing Manan behind me I knw he was calling me bt why):kya tum mujhse baat kar rahe ho


Ma:yes miss hitler

Abhi:my name is Abhilasha not miss Hitler

Ma:glad to knw mine is Manan ……….Manan sharma

Abhi:pata hain why are you here(scared to get lost in his eyes I preferred to avoid any eye contact)

Ma:actually I wanted to apologize for my previous behavior I really acted lke a jerk

Abhi(smilling):its ok

Ma:So frnds (Shaking my hand wiz him I felt lke I gt a high volt current his hand was so warm)

Abhi:ya frnd

So lke this days passed together with Manan I help Sammy n deep with their luv story & eventually uncle agreed for their marriage with mre days my frndship with Manan grew up one day Manan cme to me & ask me to be his partner for the annual ball I had mixed feeling one part of me was doing bhangra while the other part the puzzled as why out of all the grl in the uni he asked me pushing all my thoughts aside I agreed as he was my frnd so wats the big deal

At the ball he came by my side & went on his knees & said:Abhilasha I know it's a bit strange from my side but im seriously in love wd you haan Abhilasha im madly hopelessly in love with you from the day you yelled at me & u becme my frnd I cnt remove u frm my heart &mind do you love me too will you marry me

Ok im nt absolutely wrong if I say I didn't knw hw to react at zat tme all I knew was that the Manan Sharma the ultimate playboy was on his kness & proposing me & that I was madly in luv wiz him bt agar yeh past time luv hain toh

Abhi(mustering courage):no Manan im jst another past time for you I cnt with this I tried to ran awy when I felt a warm hand holding my wrist & stopping me I knw it was Manan

Ma:no Abhi believe me you are not a past time for me from the time I knew I was falling for you I stoped dating the other grls trust me bt if still u dnt luv me its ok tumhaari yaad mein I'll spend all my lfe & die not allowing him to complete his sentence I captured his lips with mine & said:dnt u ever say that I love u I really do pehli nazar seh hi I felt in luv wiz u & yes mr.Manan Sharma m al ready to b mrs.Manan Sharma I'll marry u bt khabardaar aapne un butterflies keh taraf dekha bhi

Ma:never I promise ab seh only one butterfly zats you

So after one year we got married & after 2 years of that I got my baby boy and Manan's partly baby boy & partly baby grl

Flashback ends

Aur kya hona tha unable to see my baby boy dressed in grls' clothes I finally surrendered befre Manan & after 1 year we got our cute Manasi who became her papa's princess along with manas who was already papa's tiger they drve me mad bt even though I luv my happy family bt not mre than they luv me.

Pic of Manas



Pic of Manasi



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hey guys here is d os written by me it is a conversion of Arsh(os) in Mansha i will soon write on Mansha too after getting some proper concept til dat tym enjoy dis one.

luv

Bipin


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Aww cute os and I'm also in the process in writing mine just need to finish it when I get the time lol and stop being lazy but yeh it was cute and the concept was hatke from the original 😊
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really nice OS, Keep it up do write more πŸ‘
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Awesome!! A unique concept... Do write more!!
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Originally posted by: -shamima-

Aww cute os and I'm also in the process in writing mine just need to finish it when I get the time lol and stop being lazy but yeh it was cute and the concept was hatke from the original 😊

hey shamima

thnx for likin d os

dats d same problem wd me i also get lazy while writing ff's n al

i'l wait for ur story to come

m glad u found d concept hatke it ws originally arsh converted it into Mansha

thnx

Bipin

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Originally posted by: sparkjule

really nice OS, Keep it up do write more πŸ‘

hey sparks

thnx for likin d os

m glad u found it nice

yeah wil surely keep writing

luv

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Originally posted by: jasminedayal

Awesome!! A unique concept... Do write more!!

hey jasmine

thnx for likin d os

πŸ˜† yeah d concept ws bit mad

thnx

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hehehehehhehe this is sho cute...
love the cute story
mansha are really cute...
hey pls pm me whenever you write something
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Originally posted by: Prachi..

hehehehehhehe this is sho cute...

love the cute story
mansha are really cute...
hey pls pm me whenever you write something

thnx dat u liked d story

seriously Mansha r cuteπŸ˜ƒ

yeah wil surely pm wenever i write smthin

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Originally posted by: arsh4life

thnx dat u liked d story

seriously Mansha r cuteπŸ˜ƒ

yeah wil surely pm wenever i write smthin

thanks alotπŸ˜ƒ
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