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Posted: 9 years ago
@Moni
yeh kya maha paap karne ke liye keh rahi hai aap apne iss shishya ko ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
khoon se likhwa loon ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
aap bas apne ungliyoon ko kasht kar hume type karke likh de hume itna hi kaafi hai ๐Ÿ˜†

abb mujhe ye gaana sunna padega , jiska link aapne apne anmol ungliyoon ๐Ÿคชko kasht kar yahan type kiya hua hai ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hahaa Nahi ji hum kyon paap karwaane lage aapse . Hum itne bhi beraham nahi hai ๐Ÿ˜† .

Haan Dekh le aur Sun bhi le . I toh loved it as it's Arijit ..Infact loved the Video also . Hopefully shayad tujhe aur Di ko bhi aacha lage .
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Posted: 9 years ago
Moni , r u sure Ki yeh dekhne laayak hai , I mean aapke uss ' aaj phir tum pe pyaar aaya ' Ki tarah toh nahi hai .
iPhone se type kiya - so no emoticons.
Waise bhi aapko emoticons Ki kya zaroorat hai , aapne toh usme maharath haasil Ki hai
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mittalanu1

Moni , r u sure Ki yeh dekhne laayak hai , I mean aapke uss ' aaj phir tum pe pyaar aaya ' Ki tarah toh nahi hai .
iPhone se type kiya - so no emoticons.
Waise bhi aapko emoticons Ki kya zaroorat hai , aapne toh usme maharath haasil Ki hai



No No ..Apne Guruji pe bharosa karke U can watch the Video eventhough it has Emraan Hashmi ๐Ÿ˜† . The Video is very Emotional one & very heart touching . Isiye I loved it . Kuch bhi aisa waisa nahi hai ..trust me .. ๐Ÿ˜†
Edited by moniluvskinshuk - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mittalanu1

if my memory serves me right , u asked me to " criticise "ur next VM right ๐Ÿ˜‰

Aapki memory ki daat dete hain๐Ÿ‘
hum aapki baat kaise taal sakte hai๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Of course!!!!! Teacher ki baat ko koi sweet student kaise taal sakta hai?????? More so agar teacher HUM hon toh๐Ÿ˜ณ
i must say , i am very disappointed in u Shanti ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Pehli baar you made me really smile...even in your disappointment๐Ÿ˜†

The only thing which i liked in this VM was the sync , unfortunately that too was short lived
@2.33
"maa ne khat mein kya likha tha , jeeye tu jug jug ye kaha tha, chaar pal bhi jee na paaya tu"
kya sahi wale expressions the Dev ke , perfect sync with the line ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘
once again aapke Sync ke kaayal hai hum

Shukriya๐Ÿ˜ณ

Now it starts๐Ÿ˜ณ
but aapke grammar ka pata nahi " uth jaa saale "๐Ÿ˜ฒ really aap ladki ko " saale" bolti hai "saali" nahi ๐Ÿ˜†

Kaash main lyricist hoti๐Ÿ˜›

waise toh humesha se hi hume aapke choice of song pe garv raha hai
par aaj aapne hume niraash kar diya๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Aapko niraash isliye kiya taaki aap humare agle gaane ko aur bhi enjoy kar saken โ˜บ๏ธ

--what a poor choice of song
--aur aapne ismein yeh third person kahan se ghussa diya inn do premiyoon ke beech ๐Ÿ˜ก

agar koi gaana yahaan fit baithta toh wo tha๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Tera mujhse Hai Pehle Ka Naata Koi
Yoonhi Nahin Dil Lubhaata Koi
Mera Tujhse Hai Pehle Ka Naata Koi
Yoonhi Nahin Dil Lubhaata Koi

Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na
Maane Tu Ya Maane Na

Tu Bhi Rahi Mere Liye, Main Bhi Raha Tere Liye
Pehle Bhi Main Tujhe Baahon Mein Leke, Jhooma Kiya Aur Jhooma Kiya

Dekho Abhi Khona Nahin, Kabhi Juda Hona Nahin
Ab Ke Yoohin Mile Rahenge Dono, Vaada Raha Ye Is Shaam Ka

Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na
Maane Tu Ya Maane Na...โค๏ธ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Yeh gaana toh main kisi ke liye gaana chahti hoon abb woh kaun hai yeh main nahi bata sakti

poocho kyun๐Ÿ˜ณ
uff main bhi kya bol rahi hoon lagta hai aapke VM ne grammar bhi kharaab kardi ๐Ÿ˜ˆ
what i meant was -socho kyun ๐Ÿ˜ณ

iska answer aapko neeche milega ๐Ÿ˜‰

PS -Guruji , yeh sab humne aapke bharose likha hai ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
abb humari izzat aapke haath mein hai , pls ise khone na dena ๐Ÿ˜’


Hope you are happy with my long response this time๐Ÿ˜†

I will continue in my next๐Ÿ˜›

Love you for your constructive criticism...waise perfection ko improve kaise kiya jaata hai...uss par research kar rahi hoon๐Ÿ˜†...sorry just just kidding.๐Ÿ˜ณ..will keep trying to get better as I love to try out new stuff

๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 9 years ago
@Shanti
apke itne "looong "comment ๐Ÿ˜†ko dekh kar mera chota sa comment sharmaa gaya hai , infact sharmaa ke kahin chup gaya hai ๐Ÿคช
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello friends, ๐Ÿค—
Thank you so much Moni dear for loving that VM on Dev...I enjoyed making it...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Thanks dear for that song too...I love Arijit..I mean his voice ๐Ÿ˜† and will definitely make one on that song...๐Ÿ˜Š

@ Anu ...now coming to my reply which will be short๐Ÿ˜›...well that was my "serious whatever"๐Ÿ˜ณ...

My NivRen VM has got accepted๐Ÿ˜ณ but I am wondering ki main share karun ya nahi????๐Ÿ˜†
Edited by kmfan_2 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
getting bit busy lately n coming 3 wks are no different.
so pls forgive me if i am not able to give my teeny tiny comment ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
but iska matlab yeh kabhi nahi hai ki aap neki karna chod de ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Bas neki karte rahiye aur dariyaa mein daalte rahe ๐Ÿ˜ณ
so i am waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mittalanu1

getting bit busy lately n coming 3 wks are no different.

so pls forgive me if i am not able to give my teeny tiny comment ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
but iska matlab yeh kabhi nahi hai ki aap neki karna chod de ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Bas neki karte rahiye aur dariyaa mein daalte rahe ๐Ÿ˜ณ
so i am waiting


Naa naa...comment ke laalach mein maine yeh nahi likha...๐Ÿ˜›...

Now you've got to think ki maine yeh kyun lika๐Ÿ˜†

Will post dear after sometime๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kmfan_2


Naa naa...comment ke laalach mein maine yeh nahi likha...๐Ÿ˜›...

Now you've got to think ki maine yeh kyun lika๐Ÿ˜†

Will post dear after sometime๐Ÿค—


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