Read all the updates in 1 go! Amazing story! Keep going!
Read all the updates in 1 go! Amazing story! Keep going!
Awesome pawsome.. 👏
I'm loving this totally new and fresh story..
Loved the awkward but necessary phone conversation..
So Mr Rane aur honewali Mrs Rane are interacting so professionally.. Maza aa gaya..
Aww.. Toh Kalyani ka jeep ride aise shuru hua tha...
Kallu impressed him with her talk of her sense of duty towards the country..
Malhar got so impressed that he got distracted while driving and the poor camera gave up its life.. 🤣🤣🤣
And Kallu's snide remark about his driving.. 😆
Camera Khareedne keliye argument 🤣
Mujhe ye shopkeeper ladka bohot pasand aaya.. Mr aur Mrs wala jhagda😆 donon ko embarass kar diya.. And the last remark.. Police wala jo toh bhi madam hi jeetthi hai.. 🤣lucky for Malhar that Kallu didn't hear it.
Kallu wants him to call her Kalyani without the Ms..
And when he asks her to do tge same iss ladki ne use itna confuse kar diya.. 🤣
Finally their mission installing camera was accomplished.. 👍🏼
Jara baby.. I totally loved it.. The right amount of fun, awkwardness and duty...
Waiting for more of these two's nok jhoks before they catch the terrorists.
Thank you so much dear for taking time and reading as well as commenting! Hoping that you would like the upcoming chapters too🤗❤️
Maine aapka comment subha uthke hi padha tha aur padhke hi dil khush ho gaya tha di sacchi!! Subha subha mood set😘
This is actually a concept(which would come out in the upcoming chapters) which I had in my mind for a really long time. Structure dimaag mein tha toh likhna chahti thi but ab back story likhne mein halat kharab ho rahi hain meri😂 but seeing all our comments bohot accha lagta hain🤗
I am soooo glad that you loved it! Also, you love me toh aapko meri story pe bhi pyaar aaraha hain😋❤
Aur bohot zyada accha laga padhke ki you found the emotions right!!! Abhi initial days toh aise hi honge kalma ke because somewhere the love between them would be slow and deep. Not a "love at first sight" type.
Aur terrorists ko toh mj khud hi jaldi pakad lega di, iss beech kallu ka dil kaise pakadta hain ye dekhna hain😉
Oh yes.. Waiting to see Mallu kallu ke dil kaise pakadtha hai..
And I'm glad its not love at first sight. Let it develop slowly and steadily into a strong and beautiful relationship.
Waiting for next..
Soo excited and eager I am to write this! Don't know how things will go but letting it flow like always...
Thank you so much di for the encouraging words😚😚😚😚😚
Superb update jara 👏👏
Malharji to impress ho gayi kalyani ka desh prem dekhkar 👍🏼
Kalma ki cute si nok-jhok
Mr and Mrs 😆
Kalma’s first mission complete..
Loved it yaara..❤️❤️❤️
Keep going
Ohho Mr and Mrs . Kya baat hai jara madam kya phrases usse ho rahe hai wahh🤣
Kalyani aur malhar ki nok jhonk pyaar bhari 😳
Aur saath mission bhi with dedication ...
Bechare inn logo ko ek doosre pe impression jamane ke chakkar main camera ko apni jaan deji oadi 🤣
Aree malharji abhi aapko yahin role play karna jindagi bhar mr and mrs wala be ready dukaan Wale ne kya sahi kaha astrologer hai lagata hai aage ki tak bata deta hai ..⭐️
Thank you sooo much Priyu darling! I hope you keep finding this story interesting aur kabhi bhi tumhe boring na lage. Really excited to update further🤗😘😘😘
Yaar vanshu tera comment padhke mast hasi aagayi😂😂
Aur Malharji kot to abhi bohot kuch karna padega tum bas dekhti jao😌😉
Thank you so much for dropping meethe meethe comments😚😚😚
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