Amanat..(Rajeev n Amna)*updatd prt7 pg 7*

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                Amanat

Well em here wid my New story..Inteqaam ki aag lol..heheh no no dont worryy...is story ka naam itna bhi khatarnaaq nahi hai ..lol well i know my rest ov da stories r pending...but dont orry is k saath aisa kuch nahi hoga...coz finallyy em freee..lol n got rid ov those ridiculous examz lol...hope u guyz will like it...!!

 

Sujal Garewal (Rajeev Khandelwal) : Well excuse me ..!! i dont hav time for such interviews ...( lol well this is our very own arrogant Sujal Garewal..he is a busy person ..very ambitious...n n much more lol.n yeah dont forget hez damn handsome!! )

 

Veena Garewal : maaf kijiyeh ga ye mera beta na thoda pagal hai ..hehe ...han to mein hun Veena...Sujal ki ma...meray liyeh mera parivaar ..aur mera ghar hi sab kuch hai ...(yeah yeah shez veena...da old typical wali lol)

 

Rishab Garewal : aur mere liyeh mera business hi sab kuch hai ..haan lekin meri family sab se pehlay aati hai ..lekin bas intezar mujhay apni bahu ka hai ...jo mere betay ko pura kade ( well Rishab Garewal..is one ov da finest business man...n loves his family a lot..!! )

 

Kavya Garewal : Oh dad thanku aap ko meri itni fiker hai ...per aap fiker mat kerein ..mein larki jald hi dhund lun ga..abhi jo recent gurl friend hai ..nahi nahi woh bahu nahi ban sakhti hehe ..( Well hez Kavya..on of da biggest flirt that hav ever born..lol..but knows his limit..n loves his family a lot..!! )

 

Sneha Garewal : idiot..dad tumhare bare mein nahi Sujal bhaiya k baare mein baat ker rahe the...yeh bhi na ...oho i forgot to introduce my self..mein Sneha hun..da youngest n da prettiest person ov this family...i think yeh prettiest zyada ho gaya hehehe ..( well she is Sneha...da youngest Garewal...n is adore by both ov his Broz ...Speciallly Sujal)

 

Prerna Sinha : aap log mujhse to mile hi nahi ..mein Prerna hun...waisay aap log mujhay jaantay hi honge...(well shez our very own Prerna..shez loves her family a lot..)

Mr Sinha is dead ..so letz not talk about him..heheh

 

Kashish Sinha(Amna Shariff) : oooppzz em late..abhi mein chalti hun phir miltay hain ...warna aaj to mein jaun gi hehe bubye..( ji haan ..yahi hain hamari Kashish..beautiful..simple n smart)

 

Anjali Sinha : Soryy Di to hamesha jaldi mein hi rehti hain ...per u log dont worry mein hun na interview denay k liyeh..hehe ..mein hun Anjali is ghar ki sab se choti..aur may be sab se khotii hehe...(shez Anjali..an ambitious n pretty gurll....loves her family a lot..!! )

 

Akshat Raheja : han han mein hun Sujal ka dost...koi shaq hai kya ..?? (lol this is Akshat..Sujal's best friend..he is very friendly..)

well my story is based on all these characters...some new characters will be introduced afterwards..!!

 

Hope u all will like da intro..

 

*ImAn

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Posted: 15 years ago
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great charachter sketch
sounds intresting
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wonderful character intro...do continue soon...looking forward to this ff 👏 👏 👏
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iman yaar first of all i'am so happy that you are back with a bang...welcome back dear...aur mujhko behad khushi hai kii you have started a new fanfic..i always loved your writing..🤗 iman yaar intro achcha tha..kaafi dilchasp.. i like the title Amanat... nice.. a good start...coolll... 👏 do post the first part soon..me waiting for it eagerly... 😊 😛 😃 Edited by sun_423 - 15 years ago
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very good intro......looking forward to read a beautiful love story about sujal and kashish.....as everyone here know that how much i crazy for them......they make my day and night......so i am really glad that you started a new story with sujal and kashish........bcoz i dont want them to disapper from fictions.......i am so thank ful to you for this ff bcoz i am getting very impation to read something new on them.......good luck for starting new story........i will be waiting for the first part........thanks

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Nice intro....Continue soon ! 😳
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gr8 intro iman 👏 👏 the concept sounds interesting...plz post the first part 😊
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Well thank u all for these wonderful Comments..m glad that u all liked da intro...well letz start da first part...


Veena : Sujal...
Sujal : Nahii
Veena : Sujall
Sujal : Nahi nahi nahi ..
Veena : Sujal ek baardekh to lo
Sujal : huh..Mom meine aap se kitni martaba kaha hai..mujhay aap ki dikhai hui larkion mein koi interest nahi hai ...
Veena : to kis ki dikhai hui larkion mein hai ..tum yahi bata do..
Sujal : mama aap bhi na ..mein jaa raha hun..mujhay office k liyeh bohat late ho raha hai...aap aisa kerein yeh photos..Kavya ko dikha dein...
Veena : yeh sari larkian us se barii hain...
Sujal : koi baat nahi usse koi farq nahi pare ga ..
Veena : woh to sab se hi shaadi kernay k liye tayaar ho jaye ga..
Sujal : to achi baat hai na ..uski shaadi kerwa dein ...per abih mera peecha chorein...mein jaaa raha hunnn
Veena : SUJALLLL...
Sujal : Bye mama...
Aur sujal chala jaata hai ..(yahoo jeet gaya lol)

Kavya : Sujal bhaiyaaaaaa ...Sujal bhaiyaaaaaa...
Veeena : kyun chilla rahe ho ...Sujal chala gaya hai ...
Kavya : kya chale gaye..aisa kaisay ker sakhte hain wo mere saath..
Veena : kya ho gaya ??
Kavya : unhun ne mujhse kaha tha ...k..
Veena : kya kaha tha ...?
Kavya : kuch nahi ...dekh lun ga unhe to mein ..waisay..Mom yeh sexy larkian kaun hain..??
Veena : tumhari hone wali...
Kavya : ohh thanku mama ...mujhay pata tha is pure ghar mein sirf aap hi mujhay samajhti hainn...
Veena : mujhay apni baat to puri kernay...
Kavya : mein samajh gaya hun mom ..thanku so muchhh...
Vena : YEH TUMHARII HONE WALI BHABHI HAIN...
Kavya : kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa? (aww dil toot gaya becharay ka hehe )
Veena : haan...
Kavya : matlab aap bhi baqi sab ki jaisi nikleen...
Veena : chal badmaash...hehe naashta kerlo...
Kavya : han wo to mein ker lun...per kheriyat to hai aaj churail nahi nazar aa rahi ...
Veena : Kavya...aapni behan ko koi aisa kehta hai ...
Kavya : wow mom aap to intelligent ho gayi hain ...aap ko kaisay pata mein Sneha churail k baare mein puch raha hun...
Veena hitz lightly on his head...
Veena : usse tang mat kia kero...
Kavya : kyun ..woh churail hai is liyeh ..?
Veena : Kavyaaa ...
Kavya : ok ok ...meri pyaari so choti si..Churail kahan hai ...?? hahaha
Sneha : ohh acha to yeh football uth gaya ..?
Kavya : FOOTBALL...kya mien tumhe football dikhta hun...
Sneha : Dikhtay nahi ho ...tum ho FOOTBALL...
Kavya : mom isse samjha dein..mujhay ulti seedhi cheezein mat kaha kere ..
Veeena : ab mein kyun samjhaun..?
Kavya : wahh..MOM party change....
Veena n Sneha hans rahe hote hain ...: hehehe
k wahan Head of da family atay hain ...yeah yeah Rishab Garewal...
Rishab : yeh sab kya ho raha hai ...
Veena : kuch nahi ..yeh bachay bhi na...
Rishab : kya kia bachon ne ...
Kavya : miene Sneha ko churail to nahi kaha..
Sneha : meine kavya ko football to nahi kaha...
Rishab starts laughing...
Rishab : Veena...yeh sab tumhari wajah se hua hai ..
Veena : meine kya kia..
Rishab : tumne hi inhein bigara hai..
Veena : acha ab saara ilzaam mere sar per...
Rishab : aur nahi to kya ...
Kavya : ok aap log ik dusre per ilzaam lagayein mein chalta hun..college mujhay bula raha hia ...
Sneha : mujhay bhi drop kerdo..
Kavya : tum koi catch ho jo drop kerdun..
Veena : KAVYA..
Kavya : okay okay..chalo....


aur idher ...prerna..Kashish aur Anjali kya ker rahe hain dekhta hain ...

Prerna : KAshISH.....
Kashish : ji mama..
Prerna : Anjali uthi...
Kashish : kaun Anjali..??
Prerna : Kashish ...tumharii behan Anjali..
Kashish : meri behan..?? kaun ??
Prerna : Kashish kya ho gaya hai tumhe ?
Kashish : mujhay kya ho ga ..waisay aap ko mera naam kaisay pata ...?
Prerna : Kashish hosh mein aao kya ho gaya hai tumhe?
Kashish : aap hain kaun ...?
Prerna chillati hai : ANJALIIIIIIIII
Anjali bhagti hui aati hai ..
Anjali : kya hua mama ...chilla kyun rahi hain ..
Prerna : dekho na Kashish ko kya hogaya hai ...
Anjali : kya hua di aap ko..?
Kashish starts laughing : HAHAHHA
Kashish : wow kya tareeqa hai Anjali ko uthane ka...
Prerna : huh Kashish merii jaan nikaal di tum ne..
Kashish : mama aap mein jaan kahan hai .. ehehe
Anjali : Di bohat hi ghatiya mazaq tha...
Kashish : bhayi mazaq to mazaq hota hai ...kher chal ab ready ho jao...humein jaana hai ...
Anjali : kahan..
Kashish : shopping tumhare liyeh ek larka khareedna hai na ...
Anjali : DIII....
Kashish : duffer college aur kahan hehe..chalo jaldi tayar ho jao...
Anjali : okay mein bas abhi aayi ..
Kashish : kahan jaa rahi hun ..
Anjali : tayar hone ..
Kashish : oh ok..!!
Prerna : sambhal ker jaana aur...
Kashish : apna khayal rakhna... aur koi ulti seedhi harkat mat kerna...humein pata hai mama..waisay aap rozana ek hi lines bol bol k thaqti nahi ..?
Prerna : Kashish ...
Kashish : ok ok sorryy hhehe ..(n kisses her mother )
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Veena : to kis ki dikhai hui larkion mein hai ..tum yahi bata do..

Sujal : mama aap bhi na ..mein jaa raha hun..mujhay office k liyeh bohat late ho raha hai...aap aisa kerein yeh photos..Kavya ko dikha dein...

Veena : yeh sari larkian us se barii hain...

Sujal : koi baat nahi usse koi farq nahi pare ga ..


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Lol....The part was soo funny !!! 😆 😆 😆 Continue Soon !!😆Edited by togepe30 - 15 years ago
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nice one please continue it soon