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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
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too good
plz continue
Posted: 15 years ago
#22

kk..here's the next part...

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im skipping the kumkum part rite now and will add it sum other tym

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agn we go to the virani parivaar and now it's anjie and atuls turn to get harrassed by them

 

AT&AN at the nurse station

AT:aaj ka din kitna accha tha na anjie

AN:yeah but not for very long.......😭

AT:kya hua anjali..

 

anjali points 2wards the virani family and atul says.."arre ye morcha wale andar kaise aa gaye sanjeevani mein to allowed nahi hai"

AN:ye morcha wale nahi VIRAANI parivaar hai shanti niketan wale jinke ghar mein aaj tak shanti nahi aayi hai...ek aayi thi[mandira of shanti fame] uska bhi plastic surgery karwa ke badal liye...

AT:oh no......

AN:oh yeah

suddenly dey see tulsi coming 2wards dem

tulsi to anjie and atul

TU:beta dekho na mere pati ko kya ho gaya???

AT:arre aap ke pati ko kya ho sakta hai........unhono ne hi to dusron ke patiyon ko sikhaya hai mar kar kaise wapas aaya jata hai....

TU:haan beta bas mere pati ko bacha lo

AT:arre aapke pati to jalane ke baad bhi zinda wapas aa gaye the toh abhi to wo bas behosh hue hai..chinta mat kariye aunty unhe kuch nahi hoga....bas apne backgroud music aur mantro ko strong rakhiye ga

TU:wipes her tears lyk a 1960's heroine ,......and den says beta bhagwaan tumhe lambi umar de

AT:[to anjie]ye mujhe baar baar beta beta kyun keh rahi hai........abhi mera future start bhi nahi hua mera ek past bana ke rakh degi..kya pata yehi na keh baithe ki main iska beta hoon aur hospital mein badal gaya tha

mihir ko hosh aane lagta hai

TU:mihir......mihir....mihir...tum aa gaye mihir

MI:haan tulsi tumhe kya laga tha main itni jaldi mar jaunga ...abhi to baa ka hi number nahi aaya to humari to baat hi kuch aur hai

TU:mihir.....[tere bin starts to play]

 

suddenly prerna cumes in and says..."mr bajaj ye kya hua aapko"

MI:kuch nahi wo bas.....

PR:kuch nahi...agar aap ko kuch ho jaata toh...aapne socha hai mera kya hota ./..kaise jeeti main....aur aap ke bachon ka kya hota?????

MI:relax prerna.....im f9..aur waise bhi agar mujhe kuch ho bhi jata to anurag hai na second option....waise bhi itne saalon se kuwara baitha hai ab mujhse uska ye sukh aur nahi dekha jata

tabhi premlata also cumes[she is prachi's mother of kayamath]

PRE:prachi ke papa ye kya hua aapko???

MI:kuch nahi wo bas thodi si weakness ho gayi thi...

PRE:kya thodi si...maine kitni baar kaha hai aap jyada der tak virani parivaar mein mat raha kariye......shantiniketan ka hawapani theek nahi hai...yaha to zyada der rukne se insaan ki tabiyat kharab ho jaati hai....

 

TU:ei premlata zyada bak bak mat kar...dekh humne pehle hi deal final kar li thi ki 2din tere saath rehenge 2 din prerna ke saath aur do din mere saath aur 1 din rest karenge phir ye faltu ka drama kyun kar rahi hai...waise bhi tum dono ki jodi kuch khas jamti nahi hai

PRE:to kya hua??ye mere pati hai..mera farz banta hai inka dhyaan rakhna

TU: tumhare pati hai aur humare kya bhai hai...humare bhi pati utne hi hai jitne ki tumhare

PR:haan tulsi ji bilkul theek keh rahi hai

PRE:dekhiye ye mere saath hamesha rahe hai..kabhi mujhe nahi chora lekin aap logo ko to 20-20 saal ke liye chora bhi hai aur balaji ki kripa rahi to phir 20 saal ke liye chor denge

 

TU:premlata...[thakthak.......hare ram hare ram mantra starts to play]

PRE:chilao mat

TU:kyun na chilao..mujhe chillane ke paise milte hai

PRE:to chillao mera kya jata hai log tumhe hi pagal samjhenge......!!!!!!ðŸ˜ģ

 

in the meanwhile dr.shashank came in and says "ye sab kya ho raha hai yahan"

PRE:arre replacement se pehle wale prachi ke papa aap yahan kya kar rahe hai.....aap ka payment bhi to abhi baaki hai....

 

SH:excuse me!!!!!!

Edited by coolgal04 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
yar plz cont soon...yea ofcouse yar plzz ap hi cont karain na....ap ke dialogues its faboulous... 😛
Posted: 15 years ago
#24
i tried it but donno whether it's gud or nt... 😊 hope u all lyk it
Posted: 15 years ago
#25

next part


SH:excuse me!!!!

PRE:arre kya excuse me....aap bhi na jane dijiye aapse to baat hi karna bekaar hai....kaha mujhe pehle kaha gaya tha ki ek lambe[loooking at shash] ...chaude handsome aadmi ki patni banna hai lekin phir kuch hi dino baad pakda diya ek thignu....hey bhagwaaan

TU:ei premlata khabardar jo mere devta saman pati ki beijjati ki to ðŸ˜Ą

PRE:kahe ka devta...devta hota to desh ki unnati ke bvaare mein sochta???

TU:ab mihir ne desh ke saath kya kia??

PRE:itne saare bache paida karke desh ki waatt lagadali aur tum kehti ho ki kiya hai issne????

AT&AN:kya???
PRE:arre haan...iske 4-5 bacche tulsi se hai..2-4 mujhse aur 9-10 prerna se........isse zyada bhi ho sakte hai agar balaji ki kripa humpar toh........

aur do char to najayaz bacche bhi hai...mujhe to shak hai kahi har sehar mein inke 2-4 bacche to hinge hi zaroor

shashank who is listening to all dis says ki "thnk god main mihir bajaj ya prachi ka papa nahi hoon"

 

to mihir very confidently says.."mihir bajaj prachi ke papa hone ke liye u need a lot of stamina.........confidence and smartness to handle these kekta ladies....."

MI:[to shash]...tera to accha hai kiya sanjeevani mein smriti ke saath romance kiya ab padma pe line maar raha hai....

SH:shnnnn...kya kar raha hai bacho ke samne poll mat khol

 

MI:abe chod na inhe kaha kuch samajh aata hai....accha ye bata teri padma ke saath setting hui kya

SH:nahi yaar wo to mujhe ghaas hi nahi deti

 

MI:arre maine to socha tha ki tu usse shaadi karna chahta hai.....mujhe nahi pata tha ki tu usse ghaas kareedne ke liye use itna bhaav de raha hai

 



Edited by coolgal04 - 15 years ago
Posted: 15 years ago
#26
hey guys do reply and i hav edited the 8th part actually i hav extended it a bit more...now i'll cont sum other tym whenever im freeEdited by coolgal04 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27
OMG
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has has ke thak gai

wow really nice

😆

mihir , bajaj, prachi ke papa 😆 😆

ðŸĪŠ ðŸĪŠ

plz cont soon 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
hey coolgal04
(sorry don't know ur real name)


aaj mera mood bohot kharab hai 😭 😭



plz plz update super soon
😃



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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
😆 yar kia fanfic hai yehh...itss osummmmmmmmm yar....do cont sooon yar...and yea ap kia khati ho k itne ache parts likh dale...its osum parts yar...and yea wo premlata prerna aur tulsi wala cene that was completelly hilarious yar... 😆 meri to hasi hi nai rukh rahi 😆 😆 😆 ....gud workk and keep it upp...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
Awesome fanfic!!! Superb! Plzz continue soon.