Argument Contest: Vote!!
Hello Everyone!! Time to vote for the best submission in the Argument Contest! Members had to write a scene dialogue, of no more than two hundred words composing an argument between Armaan and Riddhima.
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Entry # 1:
Armaan to a beautiful patient-Hi beautiful,tum yaha?Agar tum jaise log is hospital mein aana shuru karoge toh mujh jaise doctors toh dil ke patients bani jayenge
Riddhima looks with a look of disgust
Riddhima to Armaan-Excuse me,armaan mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai
Armaan-Abhi isi waqt kya?Mein busy hoo..
Riddhima steps on his leg-Haa abhi isi waqt
Armaan goes with ridds to the corner-Kya hai?Tum humesha mera pecha kyun karti ho?Hamesha mujhe disturb karti ho..
Riddhs-Disturb??!Armaan Malik ya ek hospital hai hospital mein tum ek doctor ho!Sirf doctor!Hospital mein to behave karo..Bahar jo karna hai karo
Armaan-Tumhari problem kya hai?Tumhe kisne in charge bana diya hai..Actually mein samaj gaya..
Ridds-kya?
Armaan-Tum jal rahi ho..Bechari
Riddhs-Jal rahi hoo mein?Armaan plz mein kyun jalonngi?
Armaan-Kyunki tumhare saath koi bhi befkoof flirt nahi karta ya tumhe koi nahi dekhta
Ridhs-Tum tum..Chodo tumse baat karna bhi bewkoofi hai.Jo karna hai karo
Ridhs leaving armaan catches her hand and pulls her close to him-Actually maine galat kaha ek insaan hai jo tumhe pure din dekhta rehte hai
Riddhs(shy and embarassed thinking its armaan)-Kaun?Armaan koi dekh lega
Armaan-Dr.Keerti! tumhe kya laga
Riddhs pushes him and says-Ur sick..Main ja rahi hoo.
She goes and Armaan thinks Basket tumhe bhi woh insaan pata hai.He smiles
Entry #2:
A: main tak gaya hu
R: haa main bhi
A: copycat!
R: kya?
A: copycat!
R: armaan, main tumko copy nahi karehi hu!
A: COPYCAT!!
R: nahi armaan main seriously tired hu!
A: BIG FAT COPYCAT!!
R: jo sochnahe socho!
A: COPY COPY COPYCAT!!
R: ughh!!!
[atul walks in]
AJ: i am so tired!
A: haa main bhi!
R: copycat!
A: kya?
R: copycat tum atul ko copy karehe ho!
A: nahi main bhi thak gaya hu!
R: nahi! COPYCAT! BIG FAT COPYCAT!!
AJ: ha ha ha!!
A: NAHI! tum mujhe copy karehe ho kyunki main tumko copycat bola tha! COPYCAT!!
AJ: TUM DONO COPYCATS HO!!
Entry #3:
A:he he he he
[ridz looks at armaan]
A: ha ha ha ha
R:kya hai?!
A: kya?
R: tum haas kyun rahe ho?
A: ek aadmi kya haas nahi sakte?
R: haan likin..
A: likin kya? gussa agaya?
R: nahi mujhe gussa nahi aya!
A: tumhari gussa ki kiye ek reason ki zururot nahi lagti
R: armaan!
A: riddhima!
R: tum na!
A: haan main kya?
R: mujhe gussa aati hai kyunki..
A: kyunki saas bhi kabhi bahu thi...
Entry #4: Riddhima and Armaan clash
A: Dekhke nahi chal sakti kya
R: Tum dekhke nahi chal sakte
A: Oh Basket
R: meri puri dress pe coffee gira di
A: Chalega waise bhi itna kuch accha nahi tha
R: Kya matlab
A: I mean tumhara suit yeh coffee ke daag ke baad jaada sundar lag raha hai
R: Armaan tumhe toh main dekh lungi
A: Toh dekho nah
R: Arrrg bhad main jaao
A: Address baatao nah
R: Arrgh lo 15, Tulip Complex. Bandra, Bombay
A: Yeh toh suna hua hai ….. Oh yeh toh mera address hai . Yo basket
R: Kya hai
A: Tum toh mujhse bhi jaada smart nikli
R: Woh kaise
A: Tumne toh mera ghar ka address bhi pata kar liya toh kab aa rahi ho
A: I mean aapne papa ko lekar
R: Papa ko lekar?
A: Haan toh tum akeli thodi nah aaogi(trying to shy off) mera haath mangne meri mummy se
R: Armaan ur hopeless
A: Oh Im hopeless so ur wat lets see
R: Im perfect
A: Accha agar perfect hoti to abhi tumahri gardan pe yeh nahi hota(she looks down were Armaan is pointing)
Armaan moves his finger and punches Riddhima's nose.
Entry #5:
Party!!
'Hey Armaan!'
'Hey Ridhima! Tum arahi ho na?'
'Mein nayi aa sakti!' said Ridhima..
'Kyun?'
'Woh..Rahul ka birthday hai aur party..'
'Toh?'
'Toh tum bhi mere saath chalo na!'
'Nayi, mein kisi Rahul Wahul ki party mein nayi ja raha! Tum uske saath hi chali jao,' Armaan walked away.
'Teek hai chali jaongi uske saath!' Ridhima called after him.
He walked back to her and said, 'Haan phir jao na uske paas'
'Toh ja rahi hoon na!' said Ridhima, and this time she stormed away.
'Muskaan yahan aao!' said Ridhima, urgently.
'Kya hai?' said Muskaan.
'Tum Armaan ko iss waqt yahan lekar aao!' said Ridhima, handing her a slip of paper.
'Par kyun?'
'Uske liye surprise party hai kyunki usne IOTM award jeeta hai!'
'Hey Armaan! Chalo...mein tumhe aapne parivaar se milina chathi hoon!' said Muskaan.
'Par kyun?'
'Aise hi yaar!' and she pulled his arm to his car.
They stepped into a dark room.
'Itna andhara kyun hai, Rahul ki party mein aye hain kya?' said Armaan.
'Uss bhandhar ki party mein kaun ayega?' asked Muskaan. The lights turned and Ridhima stepped out with everyone. A congratulations banner fell down. Ridhima and Armaan cut the cake and then slow danced to a beautiful number, both smiling.
Entry #6:
Armaan and riddhima have re-opened dr malik's clinic which was first run by dr malik before the mishap happened. it was and ordinary place with beige and white coloured walls and mis-matched furniture..
r: Dun u thnk ki wall colours are a lil dull ??
a: ..ye tumhara bedroom nai hain.. for god's sake..!!
r: i thnk u have the most boring choice i've ever encountered before..!
a: no..!! i think i have the most practical choice which obviiiiousssslyyy u have never encountered before...!
r: yeah right...!! isiliye u dun want to replace that couch... look at the state!!! the couch might just break if more than one person sits on this..!
a: urghhh..!! what-evverrr... the couch stays... this is my office... and ur not changing a thing out here..!!
r:fine..!! then u run it urself...!! i quit...!!(and she goes..)
a: oh hell....!!!!
two days later...
ARRGHHHHHHH...!!!
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH....!! and then the sound of a door banging...!!!
armaan(to himself).... samajti kya hain apne aap ko...???!!purple...???!! great...!!! just great...!!now i have a purple cabin wid bright purple and white curtains!! this place does not even look clinic anymore..!! gold and red...that reception looks like a marriage hall or sumthng now...!!! WHAT was she thinking..???
rid cums out wid windchimes in her hands...
a: YEH TUM KYA KARR RAHI HO...????yu r not putting those THINGS anywhere here...!!this is supposed to be a workplace...!!!
r: iska matlab ye nahi hain ki it shud look dull..(and she hangs them over the window)ok neway i need ur car keys..i have to get the furniture catalogue from the car... mein bhool gayi...
a: BHOOL JAO..!! ur not changing ANYTHING more...!! (but she snatches the keys from him)
...................................
BANG ...!!!...........
Somethng crashed ... armaan looked thru the window.....
riddhima cums up....
woh... woh car.... im sorrrryyyyyy...
a: TUM KYA KARNE KI KOSHISH KAR RAHI THI???
r: woh.. i've never driven a car before... toh aaj mann----
a: mannn...???!!!! he looks at her ..and if looks cud kill... she wud have been dead by now...he lifts up his hands with exasperation....
and....THUD....!!!
r: armaan...!!!
that couch.... it managed to break itself.. guess armaan's weight did it..it was enough for the couch... wasnt it???!!
Entry #7:
Shashanks Office
Shashank-Padma, tumko nai lagta ab anjali ki shaadhi--
Padma-Huh..
Shashank-mein soch ra tah ek acha ladka dund ke uski shaadhi kar do.
In lockerroom
R-Armaan jodo
A-phele kiss
Sashank and Padma enter lockerroom
Ridz-pap--oof.. Dr. Shasank aap yaha?
Shasank-Kyon, mein yahan nahi aa sak ta
Armaan-Nahin...I mean bilquil aa sakte hai, yeh koi poochne vali baath hai..sirr
Shashank-Dr. Armaan mujhe kuch zaroori baath karni ti aapse
Armaan-Ji
Shashank-yeh baath joi mein tumhe kehne vala ho..tum dan se suna..
Armaan-ji sir
Shasank-tume anjali kaise lag...
Armaan-JI sir..i mean..what...hhmmm...kya?
Shasank-mein sochra ta ke tumari or anjali ki shaddhi kardo... agar tumari ejasat ho..
Ridz looks at armaan and he looks at her!
Shashank-koi jaldi nahin hai..tum soch samaj ke batana..mein jalta hoon
Shashank and Padma leave.
Armaan-Kuch to bolo Basket.
Ridz-Armaan tumko di se shadhi karni padegi..
Armaan-Nahin..
Ridz-Hah armaan tumhe hah kehna pardega..varna mein tumse kabhi baath nahin karongi
armaan-yeh saari tumari galiti hai..agar us din humne sabko batha diya--forget it
ridz-jo bhi ho..hum..ek dusre se sirf kam ki baathi garenge..
armaan-fine
slams locker and leaves
ridz-i am sri armaan..per main meri parivaar--or especially mere papa ki baath nahin dal sak ti hoon
Entry #8:
Ridhima comes angrily in the locker room
and says to herself so much anger in that age, all because
of her parents leniency and, she is just fifteen and she was
breathing down my neck, I was telling her to take the medicine
but tht girl Ridz pretend like her ,I will not eat it until my boyfriend
comes and will tell me to eat it, and I should go away because you
don't know anything about love, hunh, she only do what
she think is right, others are all stupid, during all this
Armaan is looking pointedly at Ridz, and Ridz also stares at him
angrily.
Armaan:I know a girl like tht too, she takes decision without
thinking.
Ridz:There is a reason behind every decision.
Armaan(Laughs sarcastically)some people called it a
decision, I will called it stupidity and foolishness,
because a foolish person is never aware of what he is
doing.
Ridz turns around angrily.
Ridz:Whats your problem Armaan?
Armaan:I have no problem, it is you, who has
problem with me all the time, I am just saying tht
little girl can be wrong in taking her decision.
Ridz:Yeah ofcourse girls are always wrong, just think
a little girl with tht problem has really a solid reason
behind this all, I am sure she has fallen for the wrong guy.
Armaan:Yeah yea put all the blame on us, you girls are really
fond of boys running after you, and you enjoy making them your
prey, they are always keep saying I love you but the girls never
believe them.
Ridz:How can I girl believe a boy who does'nt even know
how to say what is in his heart, actually they don't even
know the meaning of love, girls for them are just a toy to
play with ,when they gets bore of it , they thorw them away
and in order to break up with them they hurts them.They trap
girls just to use them for…..
Armaan:Just Shut up Ridima, one more word or will…
Ridz:Why are you getting so angry have you ever said I love you to me,
tell me have you every said tht to me, you wanted me to believe you but
you never say what is in your heart, and you always wanted me to
have faith in you.
Armaan gets speechless now, he gets in pain, seeing Ridz
like tht, who starts crying, Armaan drag her into the dressing
room, he tries to hold her face but she backs off, she cries
finally Armaan holds her face.
Ridz:How can you expect from a girl tht she will speak out
what's in her heart till you make her believe whats in your
heart.
Armaan:There is only you in my heart Ridima, I am sorry.
Ridz:You are sorry because I am in your heart.
Armaan(Smiles and holds her face and bring close to
himself)I am sorry on myself, I am sorry because
I fall In love with you basket.
Ridz laughs they both laughs, Ridz says I love you too Armaan.
Entry #9:
Ridz-Armaan jodo.. mujhe jaana hai
Armaan- kaha?
Ridz- Rahul ne mujhe dinner pe invite kiya hai
Armaan-kya?...tum nahin ja rahi.
Ridz-kyon..
Armaan-maine kaha is liye
Ridz- mujhe jalne ki badbu ay rahi hain
Armaan- oh to ab tumhe lagta hain ke mein jealous hu or vow bi rahul se… never
Ridz-tikhe to fir..bye
Armaan-basket..suno to… court pe dus baje
Ridz-tikhe
@ restaurant.. ridz comes in.
Rahul-arre riddhimaji
They both sit.
Rahul-to bolye kya order karvao
They order and eat
Ridz-to me jaloo..arma—papa mere intezaar kar re honge
Rahul-me jod to aap ko..
Ridz-nahin
Rahul-nahin mai drop---
Ridzz-tik hai.
rahul gets down opens door ridz slips into rahuls hands
rahul-aree sambal ke
ridz-sri
Ridz goes to room. realizes she was supposed to meet armaan at 10:00 and it's 11:30… turns bak
Armaan-basket….
Ridz -armaan tum yaha.. locks her door turns light on
Armaan- kyon mai yahan nahi aa sakta kya? me tumara kabse intezaar karah tah kahin ti tum
Ridz- vow me---
Armaan-vow me kya..me tumara intazaar karta raha or tum rahul ke saath gape mar re ti..
Ridz- armaan
Armaan-me kuch nahin suna jata. mujhse baath mat karna
Ridz-fine..agar tum sach nahin suna jati to fine..tumhari marzi
Armaan leaves.
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