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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi guys im writing an update for first time in my life..so bear wid my mistakes if any....hope u like it...

well the episode starts.. wid anchal working on her laptop ...listening to songs in walkman...a guy cums walking in the rain....n knocks the window of anchals room....as she is listening to songs she cudnt hear..then she notices it thru mirror n opens it..he cums in he is her cousin manu..

in other room anchals mamiji gets up..thinking whether manu came back frm his frnds house who went for combined studies..or not as it is raining..mamaji tells her dat he might stayed in frnds place as it is raining...

in anchals room..manu freshes up n ask for some food n she asks whether he dint eat popcorn during interval..he says it is not sufficient...n he gives her chocolate and ask for the food...she tells it kept on the table..n suddenly mamiji knocks tne door and asks anchal whether manu returned or not she tells her dat he came n he is sleeping..mamiji tells her to sleep as she has to attend an interviw in mumbai next day....

jaya is doing aarthi..n siddharth is singing some bhajan on his musical instument..she goes to her childrens room..they r sleeping..she cums back n gives arthi to sidhart n gives prashad to him..n he asks her whether she did her packing as she is going to her mayaka aftr a long time..n he offers some help ..she tells dat she wil do it..no goes out n gives arthi to her dever..who is cleaning his bike...she keeps prashad in his mouth as his hands r not clean..her mother in law(mil) cums n shouts at her as distributing prashad is not so important n get sum tea for her....

jaya's dever goes to his father n ask him why mother always talks rudely..father tells him to ask her only...she cum der and he asks her..she says dat asking for tea also is something wrong?? he tells her dat bhabi is going to her mayaka aftr 4 yrs she must be busy in packing..she can ask tea frm her 2nd bahu who is sleepin still..but his mothers supports her other daugther in law....jaya brings tea for every one n her mil asks did i any time treat u as my sautela son's wife...she n others r shocked a bit n says no.... her fil asks her when is she leaving ..she tells at 9 o clock by bus n leaves

anchal is packing her things n suddenly realise dat her train ticket is missing...every one strts searching...n finally mamaji gets it....n someone rings door bell..manu opens it n it is their family doctor he is young n goodlooking ...he asks abt mamaji's health..anchal cums n tells him dat he is fine but nw she wil become sick as it wil be late...fr her train if u sit here for tea n chat with mmaji..he keeps staring at her..andhe says to her dat today trains are cancelled due to whether problms..she becomes tensed as it is important for her to go mumbai..he says her to take a bus as der r no.of buses frm pune to mumbai...

jaya gets ready n goes to her chidrens room..they r sleeping..she keeps looking at them...sidharth cums she tells him to take care of children..they talk somethng abt their children n abt to leave..she remembers dat she left something in her room to be taken to her mother...she takes it n asks for some paper to wrap it..he gives that days newspaper..n she reads daily fortune..n she reads her fortune dat she is going to meet someone who wil becum very imp.in her life...

at anchal's place...manu also reads the same thing...anchal takes the paper from him n reads..it..

episode ends...

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Posted: 16 years ago
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thank u very much for the effort 👏 👏 good update 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey coolgals13 if u want to write updates u can volunteer
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