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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Rejected

that was a great part continue soon i realy like it how for once kripa is the one makeing angad jelouse..oh ya i have to say all you fan fic are so good...lol you have so many of them it is almost impossable to keep up...i find my self read the fan fic more then updateing them...but your a great fan fic writer and i like reading your fan fic πŸ˜›

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amazing both are trying to make each other jealous πŸ˜† loved it

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that was so good
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Posted: 17 years ago
Part 22
Ronak drops kripa home safely. She walks into the apartment finding Angad sitting on the couch looking slightly irritated

Kripa just ignore this and is about to walk in to her room when Angad say something

A- Where do you think your going?

K- Umm to bed where else

He was about to say something but just left and went to his room leaving kripa saying to herself, "weirdo"

Next morning kripa woke up thinking that both mishti and Angad went to work, but she was only half right, mishti went to work but Angad didn't.

She decided to take a shower, but for some odd reason the shower in her room didn't work so she went o mishti's room but unfortunately her door was locked. There was only on option left, Angad's room.

She hesitated at first but made her way to his room, as she entered his bathroom , she filled up the tub until it was done, she is about to take her clothes off when Angad opens the door that scares her that she nearly slips on the mat , but to make it worst she tried to grab Angad for support but they ended up in the tub.

Kripa opens her eyes to find a grinning Angad

K- ufff get off you bull

A- Hey who you calling a bull you're the that pulled me in chipkali

K – Get off now

A- Jeeze women I'm getting off

He gets out and gives a hand to kripa , she is about to grab it when he moves it back combing it through his wet her smirking at her

Kripa just rolled her eyes at this, she then takes a shower after telling Angad what happened and he left

She comes out in a towel forgetting her clothes in the room, luckily for her Angad wasn't in the room, she quickly ran into her room and changed.


The day went on, kripa packed her bag for the weekend(it was 4 day weekend), all four of them had planed to go to Beach world(lol soory couldn't think of anything else) which was a hotel/beach/party/pool/restaurant/ place, kripa was really looking forward to going, when the phone rings.

Kripa picks it up, it was mishti,

M- Hey kripa got bad news, my boss wants me to work on the weekend

K- Oh its okay we will go next weekend

M- No, no, no you can go with Angad he can show sentosa

K- But and she was interrupted

M- No!! I won't take any buts, I don't want you to get bored you are going and that's final

K- okay" great the weekend" with that idiot, she thought

M- bye g2g

K- Cya

M- enjoy yourself and take care luv ya

K- you 2 bye

It was 5:30 pm and it was time to leave

Kripa and got headed to the car and before you knew it they had left.

Car ride

A (grinning)- so kripa excited to spend a weekend with me

K- Please who said I'd actually hang out with you, when we get there we are strangers get it

A- Fine miss stranger

Angad just puts on a random cd which happened to play a love song, and they drove of with that song playing in the background ,

Movie- tar a rum pum song- hey shona

hey hey ey ey ey ey hey hey hey hey......
tumhe pata toh hoga, tumhi pe main fida hoon
tumhe hai jabse chaaha, hawaaon mein udata hoon
tumhi mere har pal mein, tum aaj mein, tum kal mein
hey shona, hey shona, hey shona, hey shona....
tumhe pata toh hoga ke mere dil mein kya hai
chalo kahe deti hoon, kabhi nahi jo kahaan hai
tumhi mere har pal mein, tum aaj mein, tum kal mein
hey shona, hey shona, hey shona, hey shona....

tum jo ghussa bhi karo toh mujhe pyaar lagata hai jaane kyun
main toh jo bhi kahu tumhe ikraar lagata hai jaane kyun
chhodo bhi ye ada, paas aake jara, baat dil ki koi keh do na
hey shona, hey shona, hey shona, hey shona....

saari duniya ko chhodake maine chaaha hai ik tumhe
maine jindagi se maanga hai toh sirf maanga hai ik tumhe
abb isi chaah mein, abb isi raah mein, jindagibhar mere tum ho na
hey shona, hey shona, hey shona, hey shona....
tumhe pata toh hoga, tumhi pe main fida hoon
tumhe hai jabse chaaha, hawaaon mein udata hoon
tumhi mere har pal mein, tum aaj mein, tum kal mein
hey shona, hey shona, hey shona, hey shona....
shona, hey shona, hey shona, hey shona.......
hey hey ey ey ey ey hey hey hey hey......


And within few hours they had reached beach world.




okay heres the next part might post another later on...please comment!!! hope ya like it!! 😊
Edited by Chocolate_luver - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

*reserved* 😊

alrighty i read the ff.

i love ur ff- its so light and airy and fun! πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜† haha. Amazing parts! I just love the teacher track and then the current track. Really nice job.

And, you seem to be liking quidos (hair spiked, ear studs, baggy jeans).πŸ˜† my town is filled with them;; my bf is actually one too. && i so agree with you- they're smkng hot- esp the italian onesπŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

if you dont mind me asking, how old are you?

&& there was something else i wanted to say, but da*n, i forgot...gah i hate when that happens. πŸ˜† im gonna edit the post if i remember.

^ i remember!πŸ˜†

Step up- love that movie, love that song, and love, love, LOVE Channing Tatum. β˜ΊοΈπŸ˜† {this has to do with the part prior to the last one}

anywho, amazing job, amazing ff and cont soon!

x3 Prakriti

Edited by prakriti - 17 years ago
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