~~Desire~~AK last part pg56 - Page 20

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Posted: 17 years ago
Awwww why the heck would he dance with miss. carol?!! that evil meanie!! argh!! i hope they do bad and kripa wins!! lol!! Continue Soon!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
angad is makin me mad!!
i hope they mess up so that kripa winss!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
i just read ur whole fanfic!! it's sooo GOOD i like how u update everyday..it brings bak all the readers.. i bet angad is gonna mess up on purpose so kripa could win! lolz well keep going ur doing great!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
Ohh Noo Angad dancing with Carol! Poor Kripa---her heart will break! 😭 😭
But why is Kripa shocked? Didnt she know that A and C were practicing together? She had seen them at practice too?
Angad fighting his desire for Kripa----no use fighting--he will have to give in... 😆

Pallavi
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Posted: 17 years ago
aww. this is so good. continue sooon. please.

man...arent i impressed.
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Posted: 17 years ago
amazing stupid angad performing with miss carol anyways loved it but pls make kripa win this time pls con asap it seems like a clifhanger
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey thank you tons for all your comments, i know angad such a meanie in the last part 😡 😆 ...newaiz i'll be continuing shortly
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Posted: 17 years ago
Part 18
Yes they were doing duet performance even though you were only allowed to do a solo but then again Angad was in charge of the dance section so he must have changed it kripa thought.

Miss carol was wearing this

She looked stunning in her outfit.

Where Angad was looking dashing in a suit with a white shirt that matched her outfit.

And they began to dance as their song played in the background
Song- Maula Mere Maula ( I just love this song)

maula mere, maula mere maula mere, maula mere - 4
aankhein teri - 2, kitni haseen
ki inkaa aashiq, mein ban gayaa hoon
mujhako basaa le, iname tu
(ishq hai
maula mere, maula mere maula mere, maula mere - 2) - 3

ki inakaa aashiq, mein ban gayaa hoon
mujhako basaa le, iname tu

mujhase yeh har ghadi, meraa dil kahe
tum hi ho usaki aarzoo
mujhase yeh har ghadi, mere lab kahe
teri hi ho sab guftagoo
baatein teri itni haseen, main yaad inko jab kartaa hoon
phoolon si aaye, khushaboo

rakh loon chhupaa ke main kahin tujhako
saayaa bhi teraa naa main doon
rakh loon banaa ke kahin ghar, main tujhe
saath tere, main hi rahoon
julfen teri, itni ghani
dekh ke inako, yeh sochataa hoon
saaye me, inake main jiyoon
(ishq hai
maula mere, maula mere maula mere, maula mere - 2) - 3

(meraa dil yahi bolaa, meraa dil yahi bolaa,
yaara raaj yeh usane hai mujh par kholaa
ki hai ishq mohabbat, jiske dil mein
usko pasand karta hai maulaa) - 3



As their song ended there were screams, clapping, whistling going around. Their dance was just outstanding. It was portrayed so well , it was if they were really in love , kripa who just wanted to cry , she felt betrayed and she hated the dance, she got up and left , Aaliya who tried to stop her thinking she was sad because she was scared of losing thought she needed some time alone.

Aaliya and Prithivi went up to Angad to congratulate him.

Aa- omg you two were absolutely good

P- Yeh it was soo romantic

A ( was looking for Kripa)- oh thank you two…where is kripa I wanted to say congrats to her for her performance

P- oh umm she was here a minute ago

Aa- oh umm she left , she needs to be alone she said

Angad new something was wrong and went to go look for her.

Kripa on the other hand was outside she didn't know why but she felt as if he did this on purpose, she didn't know why it hurt so much , I mean she thought she was acting like a baby. She decided she would be strong I mean she can't let him see her like this so she goes to the restroom, coincidentally Angad had finally saw her heading for the restroom and went up to her.

She went in she didn't notice Angad until she heard the door being locked and that when she looked up to see him looking at her. "great now he is going to know I was crying and that to because of him stupid" she said to her self

A- what's the matter

K- what is it to you?

A- gosh why do you have so much attitude, I was just trying to be nice

K-well don't and if you want to be nice can you leave

A- no

K- fine and she makes her way to the door to leave when Angad grabs her wrist and brings her close, he had enough



well here is the next part, if i have time i might post another part up..well hope you like it ...comment please !! and thanx again for all you that commented 😊 😃
Edited by Chocolate_luver - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
PROMO- "The next day she heads off to business class when she is shocked to hear what Aaliya and Prithivi are say as well as rest of the class, but what was more shocking was it was true as the principal came and finalized it after 5 minutes"
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Posted: 17 years ago
great! right i think that Angad quits so he can be with Kripa (i hope) or does someone find out about them and he gets fired !
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