SPKH March 16th written update

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Maya's house: A girl, Maya, is shown getting ready in her room. Suddenly she sees Max there. She runs to him and hugs him. Max has a tattoo on his chest and his eyes are glowing green. They both share a romantic scene and Max carries Maya to the bed. He wants to give her a tattoo on her back. Maya keeps saying no but Max promises it wont hurt much and gives her a tattoo. The same tattoo is drawn in some old book. The tattoo is of a rope that is usually tied around someone's neck. Max finishes with Maya's tattoo and closes the book and keeps it in his bookbag. Maya questions him when are we going to meet again? He says never and leaves. Maya goes in front of a mirror to look at the tattoo on her shoulder. It's a rope. Suddenly the rope becomes real; goes around Maya's next and strangles her to death and leaves her floating in mid air. Max is shown leaving the place on his bike.

Some guy, Sheen, is standing in a graveyard next to a tombstone and finds a letter by Max. The letter says Warehouse.

Next an actress, Shalu, is getting ready in her trailer and reading the script. Warehouse is written on that script and it's from Max.

A guy, Chunky, is asking some truck drivers to leave for the delivery. He reads "Oye Tomorrow 9.00 pm Warehouse– Max" on the side of the truck.

A guy, Kabir, is checking his emails and get a similar message from Max. He calls up Shalu and tells her about the message. She says she has received the warehouse invitation too. So that means everyone else did too. Kabir calls up Tanya and asks her if she is okay. Tanya asks him why everyone is asking her the same question. Kabir tells her something (secret). Tanya says someone is playing with us as whatever happened is a secret between us 6. Tanya says lets not fall for the joke and get ourselves in trouble. She gets in her car. For a second, she thinks Max is in the back seat. But no one is there. She looks in the rear view mirror and it says "Tomorrow 9 pm Warehouse – Max". She is shocked.

All 5 meet somewhere. They are discussing that Max is back and going to get revenge from us for what we did to him. Tanya says she is just happy that Max is alive. Other's says they don't think so. Because the way they got their invitations about the warehouse was quite unusual. Then Tanya asks has anyone contacted Maya. Others say they haven't been able to contact Maya since morning. They say it was Maya that introduced them to Max since he was her boyfriend. At first Max was very interesting. And then that trip was planned.

Flashback. All 7 are having fun by the bonfire. Shalu says lets play Truth and Dare. She confesses that she is in love with someone from the group. Then Maya says after meeting Max her life has become rocking. Then its Max's turn. He first thanks everyone for letting him be part of this group. After joining this group, he has become excited meeting someone. And her name is Tanya. Maya is shocked to know this. Max says whether you like it or not, I will get you one day. Tanya is worried hearing this. Sheen gets up and says if anyone misbehaves in this group I won't spare them. Before a fight starts, kabir get up says I hope we remain friends for all our lives. Then everyone decides to go to sleep and go towards their tents. Max quietly enters Tanya's tent when she is sleeping and tries to force himself on her. Sheen comes there saves Tanya. Sheen and Chunky start beating Max up. While fighting Max falls down in a deep dark place. Everyone assumes he is dead.

Back from flashback. Everyone decides to go see Max the next day at the warehouse.

Everyone is just about to enter the warehouse. Before they open the door, they hear a basketball bouncing sound from a nearby basketball court. The basketball is bouncing on its own. Kabir grabs the ball. Max comes from the back. He apologizes for what happened the other night, especially to Tanya. He says he must have lost his senses that night and ended up misbehaving with Tanya. Kabir says people usually lose their sense on seeing Tanya. Like Sheen did when he first met Tanya. Tanya looks at kabir and asks him what about you? Kabir changes the topic. Max asks where is Maya since she is not here. Shalu says she couldn't contact Maya.

All of them are present in the warehouse. Kabir asks Max why did you invite us in such unusual ways? Max says you guys assumed I was dead after that incident. So I thought I should scare you with those invitations. While talking Max is drawing an eye (red color on the out and green middle, as if the eyes are glowing green). Tanya asks Where have you been for past 6 months? Max says I was desperately waiting to meet you guys.

Max goes back in the flashback. Max is lying on the ground. Some tantrik finds him there. And teaches him some magic. Max paints fire on a tree. The fire become real and burns the tree. Tantrik tells him that to learn this magic, you have to forget your own self and your body. They show Max body still lying on the ground. Tantrik disappears.

Back from flashback. Max tells everyone he wants to show them something. He shows them a book and says it's a tattoo book. They can select any tattoo they like and he will do them for free. Everyone starts looking at the book.

Chunky gets a fire tattoo on his chest. Shalu gets a dagger tattoo on her back waist. He gives kabir a lighting tattoo on his hand. For Sheen, he does a tattoo of a barbwire. For Tanya he wants to do something special. He turns around so he can do a tattoo on her back. She already has a cross tattoo on her back. Max gets worried seeing it. He turns away. Tanya asks if he is okay. Max asks where she got the tattoo from. Tanya says she got it done some time ago. Everyone decides to dance to some music. They start dancing. Max is checking Tanya out. Suddenly Tanya leaves. Sheen follows.

Outside Sheen proposes to Tanya. She says lets be friends as you are not mature enough neither capable. Sheen says he will wait for her answer. Tanya enters the restroom and ask him to wait for her.

In the warehouse, everyone is drinking and dancing. Kabir looks at max and smiles. Then he notices that max is not visible through his wine glass. He is shocked. He thinks Max is not a human. Max leaves that place and goes outside. Kabir follows him but loses track.

Sheen is tired of waiting for Tanya and is walking around. He notices Max and goes towards him

Kabir is looking for Max and finds Mayas body under some tree. He thinks Max killed Maya.

Sheen finds Max and asks him what is he doing outside? Max says I have returned to say goodbye to all of you. Sheen laughs saying you talk like people are going to die. Max says death is not so bad after all as I have experienced it. Max's chest tattoo starts glowing green and he starts chanting something. Sheen gets scared and runs away from there. Suddenly his barbwire tattoo on Sheen's arm becomes real and kills him.

Tanya comes out of the restroom and looks for Sheen. Kabir and Tanya find Sheen's dead body. Max smiles.

Next day, everyone is present at Sheen's funeral. They all have figured out that Max is responsible for Sheen's murder and that he is here to kill all of us. The priest at the funeral offers them support and asks them to come for help at any time. The priest leaves.

Chunky goes home and falls asleep look at his tattoo.

Next morning Kabir drops Tanya off at her home. She thanks him for being there for her always. She says she always felt secured and comfortable around Kabir. Tanya leaves. Kabir feels the presence of Max in the back seat of his car but no one is there.

Kabir, Tanya, and Shalu meet at the same place as before and think they are safe there. They talk about the past days incidents. Then all wonder where Chunky is. Shalu gets a call from Chunky. Before Chunky can talk on the phone, he sees Max in his room. He starts screaming. Max starts chanting something and his tattoo starts glowing. That tattoo has a devils face. Chunky's fire tattoo becomes real and he burns to dead.

Shalu upon hearing Chunky scream tells others about it. They all come to Chunky's house. They see Chunky on fire. Shalu gets really scared. Kabir says he sees a connection between the tattoo and the death. The tattoo each person has becomes alive and kills them. They decide to go see the priest.

At the church, the priest tells them those killer tattoos were found 700 years ago. Some king was found of killing his enemies in different ways. A tantrik invented this killing method. He is still alive in someone's body. All you need to do is believe in God.

They all are at Kabirs house since they think they will be safe there if they remain together. Since Shalu is worried, kabir assures her to remain with him and she will be safe. Shalu says I am here to stay with you forever. Kabir feels uncomfortable and shows her the way to the restroom. So I guess Shalu likes Kabir too. Kabir goes back and flirts with Tanya. He leaves to make tea. Tanya is looking around his house. She finds a book and is just about to open it, when Kabir comes and take it away from her. He hides the book in the back. Actually that book has a picture of Kabir and Tanya together. Shalu comes from the back and sees the picture. Kabir asks Shalu to have tea. Shalu says she has to leave for shooting. Upset about the picture, Shalu leaves from there.

Make up room: Shalu is asked by a spot boy to get ready for a scene where the actress finds out that she has been betrayed by her love and commits suicide. Shalu agrees for the scene.

At Kabir's house, the electricity goes out. Kabir leaves to get candles. Tanya looks at the picture. Kabir comes back with the candle. Tanya asks him about the picture. He confesses to the love. They hug each other.

Shalu sees Max in her room. She tries running out but the dagger tattoo becomes real and kills her. She is taken away in an ambulance. Tanya and Kabir are also there. Tanya starts screaming at Kabir about how he couldn't do anything. And that Max is much better than Kabir. Kabir should give himself up to Max. Maybe Max might spare him from death. She leaves from there. Max has heard their conversation.

Tanya comes to the warehouse looking for Max. She admits to her love for Max. Max is happy to finally have Tanya. Kabir comes there with the priest and quietly takes away the book of tattoos. Tanya runs towards Kabir and admits to their plan of getting Max. Max is mad and starts hitting Kabir. He brings out the devil from his tattoo which takes the book away from the priest. Kabir somehow get the book back and burns it. With the book, Max also dies. The spirit of other four friends comes out and takes Max away with them. Everyone leaves.

Tantrik is shown giving a new kid the book. The dead body of that kid lies close to them.

Edited by realsimple07 - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago
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excellent update. you write very well. thanks a lot.
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thanks a lot for a great update.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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excellent update. you write very well. thanks a lot. 😉
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excellent update. you write very well. thanks a lot. 😉
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