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Posted: 23 days ago
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Yayyy you wrote on devrasmiley42 cant wait to see them meet again

I guess Tara must have realised her love after Deva went away from her, and broke her marriage with Arjun

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Posted: 23 days ago
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Posted: 22 days ago
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This is too good Jasmine smiley42

So nice to read your story on DevRa smiley42

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Posted: 22 days ago
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Deva Tara starry night moment was cute. Horse ride also. So they're connected by the horse. Sad that Tara is marrying someone else. If Deva loves her so much why doesn't he tells her? Sad that she doesn't loves him. Both are separating from each other. Wonder who's the woman, perfect pics

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Posted: 21 days ago
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Part 1

Fantastic Start

Tara and Deva were childhood friends

but as time went by , Deva fell in love with Tara

but she was to get engaged with Arjun

while now Deva moved to Mumbai

Precap Deva seen with a woman

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Posted: 21 days ago
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Chand Jalne Laga (The Moon Has Started Burning) Part 2

Deva was seen with a woman.She was his colleague Poonam.

Poonam:Deva,though I know you only since last 6 months I know the depth of your love for Tara.You should not have left her and come here.You should have made her understand your love and fight for your love.Tara would have understood your love one day as she had never loved Arjun.

Deva:It's very easy to say Poonam.But actually it was not easy.Anyways it's all over.Tara must be in America now.

Poonam:What if Tara has not married Arjun?

Deva:There is no reason for her to cancel her wedding with Arjun as she does not love me.You are advising me.But why are you not making your love life alright?Why don't you try to patch up with Reyansh?

Poonam became dull.

Poonam remembered her romantic moment with Reyansh.

Flash back...

Reyansh's mother Neeta yelled at Poonam:What quality do you have to marry my son?You don't even know your parents.Stupid orphan!

Poonam lost her control and said:Though you are rich,your thoughts are of low quality.

Neeta got irritated.

Reyansh became upset:Mom,you did'nt do right to Aradhana.

Neeta:Don't be blind in love Rey.

Poonam tried to walk out.

Reyansh:Aradhana,please don't go away.

Poonam:After getting insulted by your mother,I can't stay here even for a second Reyansh.I am going.

Neeta smirked.

Aradhana walked out.Reyansh started crying.


Present....

Poonam:It's not as easy as you think Deva.I loved Reyansh.But his mother insulted me just because I am an orphan.I can't marry Reyansh and stay in that house with his mother.

Deva:I understand your situation Poonam.But Reyansh loves you and wants to marry only you.Right?

Are you fine with Reyansh marrying the girl chosen by his mother?

Poonam got hurt.

Deva was driving his car.He saw a wife swinging and the husband pushing the swing for the wife.

Suddenly he saw Tara sitting on the swing which was decorated with flowers.

He imagined sitting near Tara and romancing.

(Suraj hua maddham, chaand jalne laga

Aasmaan yeh haai kyoon pighalne laga) - 2

Main thehra raha, zameen chalne lagi

Dhadka yeh dil, saans thamne lagi

Oh, kya yeh mera pehla pehla pyaar hai

Sajna, kya yeh mera pehla pehla pyaar hai

Ho oh oh, oh oh oh oh oh, aa aa aa aa aa aa

Suraj hua maddham, chaand jalne laga

Aasmaan yeh haai kyoon pighalne laga

Main thehri rahi, zameen chalne lagi



Dhadka yeh dil, saans thamne lagi

Haan, kya yeh mera pehla pehla pyaar hai

Sajna, kya yeh mera pehla pehla pyaar hai

Hai khoobsurat yeh pal, sab kuch raha hai badal

Sapne haqeeqat mein jo dhal rahe hai





Kya sadiyon se puraana hai rishtaa yeh hamaara

Ke jis tarha tumse hum mil rahe hai

Yunhi rahe har dam pyaar ka mausam

Yunhi milo humse tum janam janam

Main thehra raha, zameen chalne lagi

Dhadka yeh dil, saans thamne lagi

Haan, kya yeh mera pehla pehla pyaar hai

Sajna, kya yeh mera pehla pehla pyaar hai

Deva imagined romancing Tara like the romantic couples of Yash Chopra movies.


Tere hi rang se yun main to rangeen hoon sanam

Paake tujhe khud se hi kho rahi hoon sanam

O maahiya, ve tere ishq mein

Haan doobke paar main ho rahi hoon sanam

Saagar hua pyaasa, raat jagne lagi

Sholo ke dil mein bhi aag jalne lagi

Main thehri lagi, zameen chalne lagi

Dhadka yeh dil, saans thamne lagi

Kya yeh mera pehla pehla pyaar hai

Sajna

Kya yeh mera pehla pehla pyaar hai

Suraj hua maddham, chaand jalne laga

Aasmaan yeh haai kyoon pighalne laga) - 2

Main thehra raha, zameen chalne lagi

Dhadka yeh dil, saans thamne lagi

Oh, kya yeh mera pehla pehla pyaar hai

Sajna, kya yeh mera pehla pehla pyaar hai

Ho oh oh, oh oh oh oh oh, aa aa aa aa aa aa

Suraj hua maddham, chaand jalne laga

Aasmaan yeh haai kyoon pighalne laga

Main thehri rahi, zameen chalne lagi

Dhadka yeh dil, saans thamne lagi

Haan, kya yeh mera pehla pehla pyaar hai

Sajna, kya yeh mera pehla pehla pyaar hai

Suraj hua maddham

Chaand jalne laga

Aasmaan yeh haai

Kyoon pighalne laga

Sajna, kya yeh mera pehla pehla pyaar hai(K3G).



Poonam was in her house.The electricity went off.That time Deva reached there.

Deva:Poonam!

Poonam:Deva...one second.There is no light here.Let me light the candle.

Poonam lit the candle and walked towards Deva.

Deva:Poonam,there is someone else with me.

Poonam:Who?

Somebody took the candle from Poonam.Poonam looked at that person in disbelief.It was Reyansh.

Deva:Reyansh wants to talk to you.So I brought him here.

Poonam was stunned.Deva walked away.

Reyansh looked at Poonam:Please don't be angry with me Aradhana.I know that you hate my mother and suggested me to stay away from my home after marriage.But I was confused whether to do that as I was attached to my family.I am really sorry for that.

Poonam became emotional.

Reyansh:But now I have a clear idea about what to do.We will stay in a separate house after marriage.I swear.

Poonam was surprised.

Reyansh:Because I don't want to lose you.I can't imagine a life without you.Please forgive me Aradhana.

Poonam:I don't need to forgive you Reyansh.Because as a son you were right.

Reyansh:Thanks for understanding me.Actually now mom repents.She realised that she was right at insulting you.She wants to meet you.I promise that my mom won't insult you again.

Poonam was really surprised.

Poonam:But what if she hates me again?

Reyansh:Then I will cover her hatred with my love for you.Do you know why I call you Aradhana though your name is Poonam?Because I don't just love you,I worship you for your strong character.

Poonam looked at him emotionally.



Deva looked at the food and said:Without you,I don't even feel like eating food Tara.I miss the days we ate food together.

Suddenly he saw Tara there.Tara went near Deva with a plate of food.

Tara:Tonight for dinner you will eat this.I cooked it by myself.

Deva smiled:You cooked this?

Tara:Yes.Let us have dinner together.

They both sat down looking at the stars while having food.

Tara:Having dinner under stars is more beautiful than candle light dinner.

Deva:You are right Tara.

They both washed hands after having food.

Tara:How was my cooking?

Deva:As usual your food is really good.

She smiled.

Deva:Do you know what made the dinner more beautiful?

Tara:What?

He embraced her from behind and said:Your presence.

She blushed.

Suddenly Deva realized that he was dreaming.

Deva:I am a fool to dream of Tara.Why would Tara come here when she is already married and settled in America?

He was frustrated.



Neeta visited Poonam.Poonam did not know how to react.

Neeta:I know that you hate me.I deserve it as I hurt you a lot.But please don't hate my son.My Reyansh loves you a lot.I realised that his happiness lies in you.In your absense he had stopped living his life.I had lost my son completely.That time I understood that Rey can live happily only with you and I was wrong in trying to separating you from him.

Poonam:I will never stop loving Reyansh.He is my breath.We are together now.

Neeta smiled with relief.

Neeta:Thank you so much.If possible please forgive me.

Poonam replied painfully:If you have realized your mistakes why should I be angry with you?I am not angry with you anymore.

Neeta smiled:Thank you.No wonder that Reyansh loves you.You are too good.

Poonam smiled.



Reyansh and Poonam exchanged rings at the engagement ceremony.

Reyansh:Now you are mine Aradhana.

Poonam:Now you are mine too.

Reyansh:We were already each other's.

Poonam:You are right Reyansh.

Deva went near them and said:Congrats guys.I am really happy for both of you.

Poonam:We should thank you as you only brought Reyansh back to my life to sort out our problems.

Reyansh:Aradhana is right.You are her real friend who wants her to be happy.So you helped me to patch up with her.

Poonam:We are grateful to you and we want to gift you something.

Deva smiled:Gift?What gift?I don't need any gift.I did'nt do anything for any gift.


Poonam:But you deserve a precious gift after what you did for us.Turn back and see the biggest gift of your life.

Deva turned back curiously.

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Posted: 21 days ago
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Beautiful & interesting update dear ๐Ÿ™‚

Just loved it ๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 20 days ago
#18

Is his gift Tara?smiley42

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Posted: 20 days ago
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Part 2

Lovely update... brilliantly written

Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 17 days ago
#20

Part 2

Fantastic Update

Finally Reyansh and Aradhana got engaged

after all the misunderstandings and pain inflicted on the couple

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