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Posted: 15 days ago
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Hey guys..so inspiration can strike you at any moment..and i was seeing Akshara and Abhimanyu's scenes in YRKKH..and i felt bad that Askhu moved on..but no nee girl for Abhi??


So this is my take..on a new girl in Abhi's life..


So, Abhi has gone to visit Abhir, Akshu and Abhinav..they have become sort of friends..but Abhi..still felt sad seeing Abhinav and Akshu together..


Abhir- Oh my..Mumma..mein toh batana hi bhul gaya tha..


Akshu- Kya hua??


Abhir- Bui..aa rahi haun..


Abhinav- Haye bhagwan..woh toofan mail..aa rahi hain..


Akshu- Abhir..tu saari important baatein last mein batata hain..kitna kaam karna hain mujhe..


Abhimanyu looked on confused..why was one person coming to meet them..causing so much trouble..


Abhimanyu- Champ..yeh tumhari bui ke baare mein batao na..


Abhir- Aare she is the best bui in the whole world..mere liye chocolates le kar aati hain..mumma se jayada aacha jam banati..ek dum heroine hain meri bui..


Abhimanyu- Aacha..aur naam kya hain bui kya??


Cha- Chandini..naam hain mere..


Abhir- Bui..Abhir ran towards her..but in a hurry he slipped and his head was going to hit a table..but Chandini caught him in time..but end up twisting her ankle..


Cha- Khotya!!! Abhinav bro!!! She screamed..


Abhinav- Aare kya hua..yeh..Abhir tum theek ho na..


Cha- Oh hello..teri behen yahan dard mein tadap rahi hain..saare chocolates cancel..mister..


Abhimanyu- Excuse me..


Chandini opened her mouth to shout..at Abhi..but she was so mesmerized to see the specimen infront of her..


Cha- Haye..such handsome..


Abhimanyu- Thank you..bas thoda sa sprain hua hain..spray laga do..


Akshara, Abhinav and Abhir looked on..while both of them had an eyelock..

Here is the second part

Few years later..

Akshu, Abhinav and Abhir came to Roohi's birthday party..and The Birla's welcomed them..but they were looking tensed..

Akshu- Kya hua..sab theek hain na..she asked as Abhi looked tensed.

Arohi- Aur kya hona hain..iss idiot ne chandini se ladai ki hain..

Abhinav- Bhai..tu thoda shaant nahi reh sakta hain..jab dekho tab..

Abhimanyu- Oh hello..mene usse bola tha..ki thoda rest kare subah se idhar bhag rahi hain..and Madam ji gussa mein muh phula ke chali gayi..

Abhimanyu- Saach batao Abhinav ji..aapki behen hain na..yeh saach mein mujhe Akshara ki behen lagti hain..

Akshara was shaking her head..but Abhimanyu kept complaining about her..

Ch- Itni problem toh shaadi kyun ki mujhse..

Abhi(turning around)- Aare woh mein..

Ch- Roohi ka birthday party khatam hone do..phir batati hoon..

Please do comment..

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Posted: 15 days ago
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Your story is superb πŸ‘ ✨ try Wattpad where you'll get more admirers and supportive audience

I am Abhimanyu's fan and I, personaly don't mind Akshu moving on✨✨✨

Not to forget she even moved on from Abhinav after a month 🀣

Fun timeline of Akshu moving on ✨✨

~ Akshu took six years to give a shot with Abhinav that too happened only after crossing paths with Abhimanyu.

~ 1 month to get back with Abhimanyu after nav's passing (Abhir is a pseudo-excuse 🀭 for promising to give πŸ’― to their relationship)

~ No one after 22 years of Abhimanyu's passing?

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Posted: 15 days ago
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Also make sure to tag this under fan creations or any other proper tag else this thread is under a risk of getting locked πŸ”

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Posted: 15 days ago
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Great start!

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