Masoom (The Innocent) RuSha SS - Page 2

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Posted: 27 days ago
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Niketan telling about Sunny was shocking. Poor Rudra is so worried about telling truth to Preesha. Waiting for Preesha's reaction. Perfect pics

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Posted: 27 days ago
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In this ss i named him Alok instead of Niketan as i forgot his name in YHC.

Thanks a lot.


Originally posted by: salley145

Niketan telling about Sunny was shocking. Poor Rudra is so worried about telling truth to Preesha. Waiting for Preesha's reaction. Perfect pics

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Posted: 27 days ago
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Thanks for the pm

Part 2

Intriguing update.... perfectly written

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Posted: 27 days ago
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Beautiful update dear πŸ™‚

Just loved it πŸ€—

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: 27 days ago
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Omg is it really his sonsmiley3

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Posted: 27 days ago
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hmm hope rusha do not fight over sunny

i wish you had written this when rusha there on show

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Posted: 23 days ago
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Salley

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Thank you so much for the lovely comments.


Masoom (The Innocent)Part 3

Rudraksh went back home after Alok's funeral.He sat near Preesha.

Preesha:Where were you?

Rudraksh:I had gone for a funeral.

Preesha:Whose funeral?

Rudraksh told her everything.

Preesha was shocked and shattered.

Preesha:You betrayed me Rudra.

Rudraksh became upset.

Rudraksh:I swear Preesha.I did'nt.Now only I came to know about my one night stand.

Preesha said painfully:But still you spent a night with some other lady.As a wife how can I tolerate it Rudra?

Rudraksh was really upset seeing her in pain.

Preesha:You expect me to look after your illegitimate son?How could you Rudra?I can't accept him.

Rudraksh:I can understand your feelings.But that boy is all alone.

Preesha:You feel bad about your son.Right?Then you live with your son here.I am leaving with my childen.

Rudraksh was shocked.

Rudraksh:Preesha,please don't do this.

Preesha walked out with Saransh and Ruhi ignoring him.

Rudraksh cried bitterly.

Suddenly he realised that he was dreaming.

Rudraksh thought:No.I can't lose Preesha and my children.I can't tell the truth to Preesha now.




Rudraksh sat near Preesha.

Rudraksh:Preesha....I want to tell you an important matter.

Preesha:Say Rudra.

Rudraksh:I had gone for my friend's father's funeral.My friend and his wife had passed away in an accident.His son was brought up by his dad.But sadly his dad also died.Recently when he was sick,he had called me.I visited him as he was my close friend's father.He requested me to take the responsibility of his grandson as after his death,there will be nobody to look after him.

Preesha was shocked.

Preesha:They have no relatives to look after his grandson?

Rudraksh:No.He trusts only me now as I was his son's close friend and he knew me since childhood.

Preesha:Why did'nt you tell me about your close friend yet?You have told me only about Bunty who is working in Dubai now.He had attended our wedding also.

Rudraksh:Because he was no more at the time of our wedding.So I did'nt want to talk about him.I am worried about his son as he is the son of my friend.

Preesha was silent.

Rudraksh:I know that it's difficult for you to accept someone else's son as yours.But...I am not forcing.The final decision will be taken by you.

Preesha:I know how you are feeling about your closest friend's son.I respect you for your concern towards somebody else's son.I am proud of my husband to even think of taking the responsibility of an orphan.So bring him here.

Rudraksh was surprised.

Rudraksh:You really agreed?

Preesha:Yes.

Rudraksh:You are great Preesha.

He embraced her.She smiled.




Ruhi and Saransh were lying on the bed between Rudraksh and Preesha.

Rudraksh:I want to say that you both are going to get a new brother.

They were surprised.

Saransh:A new baby?

Preesha:Not a baby.

Rudraksh:A big brother named Sunny.Actually he is my friend's son.But unfortunately he is an orphan.

Ruhi:What is an orphan?

Rudraksh:It means that he has no parents.So papa will be bringing him here.You both will get him to play with.

Ruhi:Wow!I can't wait for my brother.

Saransh:I am excited to meet him.

Rudraksh and Preesha smiled.



Rudraksh went to Alok's house.

Sunny was there with the servant.

Rudraksh felt sad seeing Sunny.

Rudraksh:I know your grandfather very well.Now onwards you will stay with me.So I am taking you with me.Pack your bag and come.

Sunny was so stunned that he was numb.

Sunny packed his bag and came back to Rudraksh.

Slowly Sunny asked him:Do you know my parents?

Rudraksh became upset.

Rudraksh:No.

Sunny:I have not seen my parents.Nanaji and Reema maasi told me that my parents are no more.

Rudraksh became upset.

Rudraksh held his hand and said:But you are not alone now,You are going to get a happy family now.Come with me.

Sunny blinked his eyes softly.




Rudraksh took Sunny home.

Preesha,Ruhi and Saransh were excited to see him.

Rudraksh:Sunny...this is Preesha aunty.They are Ruhi and Saransh.

Rudraksh looked at Saransh-Ruhi and said:This is your brother Sunny.

Saransh:Hi Sunny...I am your brother.

Ruhi:I am your sister.

Slowly Sunny smiled.




They all sat for lunch.

Preesha served food for all of them.

Ruhi:Yummy food mumma.

Preesha smiled.

Preesha:Sunny beta...since you are there,I made special lunch for you.I hope you will like it.

Sunny smiled:Thank you aunty.

Preesha smiled caressing his head.

Sunny started eating it.

Preesha:How is it?

Sunny said with a gloomy face:It is very tasty.

Preesha smiled.

Preesha:You tell me whatever you like.I will cook it for you.Feel free with us.This is your home.

Sunny nodded without any smile.Preesha's smile vanished from her face.



Rudraksh was lying on the bed and singing for Ruhi and Saransh.Ruhi fell asleep.


Do Nainaa Aur Ek Kahani

Do Nainaa Aur Ek Kahani

Thodaa Saa Baadal

Thodaa Saa Paani

Aur Ek Kahaani..(x2)

Do Nainaa Aur Ek Kahani

Choti Si Do Jheelon Mein

Woh Behati Rahati Hai

Hearing him sing Sunny went there.Seeing him there,Rudraksh held his hand and made him sit near them.He continued singing.


Choti Si Do Jheelon Mein

Woh Behati Rahati Hai

Koi Sune Yaa Naa Sune

Kehti Rehati Hai

Kuch Likh Ke Aur Kuch Zubaani

Thodaa Saa Baadal

Thodaa Saa Paani

Aur Ek Kahaani

Do Nainaa Aur Ek Kahani

Thodi Si Hain Jaani Hui

Thodi Si Nai..(x2)


Preesha also sang for them.

Jahaan Ruke Aansoo

Wahin Puri Ho Gai

Hai To Nai Phir Bhi Hain Puraani

Ho Thodaa Saa Baadal

Thodaa Saa Paani

Aur Ek Kahaani

Do Nainaa Aur Ek Kahani

Ek Khatm Ho To

Doosari Yaad Aa Jaati Hai

Ek Khatm Ho To

Doosari Yaad Aa Jaati Hai


Ruhi opened her eyes enjoying Preesha's song.All the 3 kids smiled.


Hothhon Pe Fir Bhooli Hui

Baat Aa Jaati Hai

Do Nainon Ki Hain Ye Kahaani

Ho Thodaa Saa Baadal

Thodaa Saa Paani

Aur Ek Kahaani

Do Nainaa Aur Ek Kahani

(Masoom).


Rudraksh went near Preesha. She was lost in her thoughts.

Rudraksh:What are you thinking Preesha?



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Posted: 23 days ago
#18

How long will he hide the truth? Eventually it will come out and preesha will be even more heartbroken over his lie

And what is the poor kids fault in all this?smiley19

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Posted: 23 days ago
#19

Beautiful update dear πŸ™‚

Just amazing 🀩

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: 23 days ago
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Though imaginary, RuSha scene at the beginning was painful. Preesha accepting Sunny was surprising though she doesn't knows the truth. Ruhi and Saransh excited to meet Sunny was nice. Ruhi Saransh accepting Sunny was good. Wonder why is Preesha sad after talking to Sunny. Here Preesha sings well, haha. Wonder if you have heard her sing in the show, you would have laughed. Waiting for next, perfect pics

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