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Posted: 2 months ago
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Thankyou Laila, for the feedback ,šŸ„°

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Posted: 2 months ago
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1.Pacing: Is the pacing of the story working for you?

i think the pacing of the story is so slow and the focus should be on important events that revolves around leads , plus there is no closure for any track , they always keep open ends with too many loopholes and illogical tracks.

when we think the story is finally moving on , we are back to square one.No progress with repetitive dialogues and unsolved misunderstanding between leads.


2. Character changes: How do you feel about the changes in characters?Are the new developments in characters working for you?

i didnt see any changes in the characters , Ani is still the same confused , impulsive , full of ego and jhanak have no self respect and she is strong infront of Ani only and she is too mahan with the people who wronged and tried to harm her.

what i dont like is Ani shutting down his once smart brain and being under Arshi's mercy..i hate how his character is being degraded and reaching new lows everyday.And i hate how Jhanak's strengh is selective.

both leads need to be bit selfish, trust eachother and fight for their love not against eachother.


3. Sensitive issues: How do you think the show handles pregnancy, marriage, and baby tracks?

This show handles these tracks the worst way possibe ,they made mockery of real marriage with full rituals first , and then they call the baby who was conceived while leads were legally married as a sin yet they promote EMA and live in relashionship between male lead the parallel lead.
4. Mental health impact: Is the show affecting your mental well-being?

The toxicity and the negativity shown in this show with heavy doses on a daily basis can affect the strongest person...we need some positivity between leads , some light moments.Even in real life there is ups and downs not only downs and negativity..Its so unreal and unhealthy.


5. Expected changes:Do you hope for a change in the current track? If so, what kind of change and why?

-We need original Ani back with his smart brain and his feelings back to Jhanak, the one who always supported her and saved her .

-reunite Runak and start their lovestory properly.

-show trust between leads.

-Make leads fight the world together not fight against eachother.

-stop instults and character assasination of leads by eachother.

-make Arshi villain properly bcoz she aint a victim .

-show positivity and light moments and lot of romance between leads.

-let the leads have sane conversations , understanding..let them communicate not only fight.

-plz let Jhanak voice out her emotions and feelings(love) toward Ani and let Ani have clarity and be sure about his love for jhanak..make him confess about his love for her infront of his family but before that he needs to break all ties with Arshi as they r not legally married.


Any other suggestions apart from which I pointed out feel free to share .

Thats all i can think about for Now.

Thanks maya for this thread.

If i remember anything , i will add it later.


Edited by ..NadiaZ.. - 2 months ago
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Posted: 2 months ago
#23

Originally posted by: MayaFruitbae

Hi my dear friends,

I know you are invested in Jhanak and its thrilling storyline! The forum's discussion says it all.I can see never ending discussions and analysis of past, present and future tracks. Let's gather our thoughts and share them with the creators of our beautiful show (once ).

As loyal viewers of the show since the beginning, we've spent time and emotions on this show.But the recent drastic changes have left us confused. Mujhe kuch acha nahi lag raha šŸ„ŗšŸ„ŗšŸ„ŗ

So please spend a few minutes to share your valuable feedback:

1.Pacing: Is the pacing of the story working for you?


2. Character changes: How do you feel about the changes in characters?Are the new developments in characters working for you?


3. Sensitive issues: How do you think the show handles pregnancy, marriage, and baby tracks?


4. Mental health impact: Is the show affecting your mental well-being?


5. Expected changes:Do you hope for a change in the current track? If so, what kind of change and why?

Any other suggestions apart from which I pointed out feel free to share .



Let's raise our concerns and let's make our voices heard! Together, we can make a difference.

Waiting eagerly for your feedback ā¤ā¤


All the feed backs shared by the forum members shall be consolidated and addressed to the makers of the show. No names shall be used in the feedback sent to the makers and the channel.



Additionally , if anyone wants to make themself heard in person use the below mentioned email of the Production House , Magic Moments , and raise your concerns .

[email protected]

Subject line: "Unite Runak: A feedback from your loyal viewer"


Please use same subject line as it will count our efforts together and make the impact more powerful.

Hi Maya, sorry getting held up. Give me some time, will send it to you in few hours.
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Posted: 2 months ago
#24


Maya,

I donā€™t know if I can go as per the theme of the feedback point wise but will try to articulate my perspective of whatā€™s ailing Jhanakland

At the outset, I believe a story is purely and purely a writerā€™s vision. Itā€™s the writerā€™s prerogative how to bring to fruition their vision.


This serial hasnā€™t ended yet but the writers have reached a point where nothing they do beyond now is going to resurrect the charming love story for me. This I say even if they aim for a happy ending for Runak; with their bare hands, they have crushed to pulp the love story . From here on, it is purely a story of a woman asking for the rights for her yet unborn child and her journey to move away from the life she has led so far. Whither the love story? To see love from here would take a toll on anyoneā€¦.

As a person who connects purely to the writing and nothing else distracts me from that. What can I can say about the writers? Have they lost their way or have they found nirvana? ā€¦ This story always was about the past and present juxtapositionā€¦ I just misread the pairā€¦ I read it as Jhanakā€™s with Urvashi ( assuming she was the other woman in the tale) given her reservations about getting involved with Ani and let the more juicy BB- Ani dynamic recede in my memory. When Kashmir happened I had a doubt but let that slide thinking any closeness between them only fortified Jhanakā€™s resolve further to stay away. But in a case of blindsiding I missed this to be the twist

if the writers intended to reach a stage in the story when Ani and Jhanak will be where Jhanakā€™s parents were I would say they have spectacularly succeeded ā€¦ so much so that the likeness in BB and Ani is astounding. If this was the intended for shock and aweā€¦ the writers have done it fantastically. If they wish to have a release valve for Ani, it is almost hidden from view. To tell them apart is almost difficult now even if I were to give Ani the creative benefit of doubt in not acknowledging the child as his.

Since I have no idea about the BB - Urvashi story, I can only assume, BB may have been just as wonderful guy like Ani who formed a bond with Urvashiā€¦ thereā€™s nothing to suggest in the narrative that Urvashi regretted her love for BB, and all she wanted was for BB to acknowledge her child and she failed.

The story is now telling me that Jhanak is not like her mother. She is determined not to let what happened to her repeat in the case of her child and she has warned everyone about it. The story has now moved from the Ani- Jhanak axis to a Jhanak centric focus. The writers were able to cut the umbilical cord in one goā€¦ BUT THIS COULDNT BE THE AIM OF A STORY

WHY WOULD LEENA TAKE SO MUCH PAINS TO TELL US A SLOW BURN LOVE STORY IF THE AIM WAS TO REDUCE ANI TO A BB?

So, I hope that itā€™s not the aim. However If from this point, they wish to distinguish Ani from BBā€¦. which they will do in all likelihoodā€¦ it might resurrect the story for many viewers but not for me as this is not the way Ani was presented to me even in his worst phaseā€¦Ad shoot phase; if the writer is saying that men can have many redeeming qualities but their one quirk or trait is to be feared for.. ā€œMain sirf tumhare liye bura hoonā€, and that is the hallmark of their love storyā€¦I would like to tell writers to please spare us their writing skillsā€¦ they skills are mediocre if after all this they want to show a love story meandering through hate, revenge, righteousness based on false premises, forgiveness hinging on greatnessā€¦.good luck to them. In love like in life there are no guaranteesā€¦ when we fall in love, we are always guided by instinct, if this is a story to warn women not to trust men, give up the pretence and put the money where the mouth is and show Jhanak move away completely.
Their belief in constructing a hero who is riddled with a flaw that they couldnā€™t even present properlyā€¦.is my biggest grouse. What is the flaw that caused Ani to implode when they have shown him reconciling to a life away from Jhanak almost completely ( irrespective of his bout of jealousy) He came back to BH like any normal guy, upset perhaps but not unhingedā€¦ā€¦ Agreedā€¦ it can be tumultuous to have an ex come to your doorstep asking you for paternity recognition but what is causing Ani - the mastermind of so many battles to disintegrate in this manner?

I can think of a situation where this is possible but unfortunately the narrative isnā€™t indicative of itā€¦ sometimes a writer has to make a choice between whose pov is the story projecting? We are not Ani neither are we Jhanakā€¦ Makers can safely give us a small peep into his mind. I am speculating that Ani does not think Jhanak is pregnant as that is the only reason this story can even breatheā€¦. ( maybe I am wrong)

Ani was always expected to have an arc which dealt with his mode of handling crises. Also his fear that Arshi will combust and harm Jhanak could be the underlying cause of his muddled decision making but writers couldnā€™t you think of a more nuanced twist that tested the lovers other than a twist in which you seem to show an otherwise caring man to develop traits hitherto unknown and implode in such a manner?

Othello is not a love story I hope writers writing to model on Shakespearean tragedies realise this. We are never in doubt that Desdemona & Othello will lose ā€¦ they are set up to failā€¦

Donā€™t set up your love stories to fail. Make your love stories a way for people to keep their trust in love not lose it.


Maya, I am sorry this is a rambling noteā€¦ just poured my thoughts as they came. Feel free to use the portions relevant, if you wish ā¤ļø

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Posted: 2 months ago
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The makers need to work on every aspects that you pointed it out.

The story is no longer gripping because I feel we are still circulating around the same loop, with repetitive dialogues and same scenes. We didnā€™t move an inch. Seems like the episodes are becoming worse with each passing day. There is no progress in RuNak, there is not much character maturing and growth in among the leads especially Anirudh. Every time there is a new track being introduced, viewers hope to get a good outcome or some growth in Anirudh and Jhanakā€™s equation, we end up being disappointed always. The outcome is a failure and turns out to be more nonsensical than before.

The pacing is slow and the writing is inconsistent. I would suggest the makers to really concentrate on consistency of our leads feelings which looks super scattered. If they confessed, they should stick to the feelings and not fluctuate to different extents. We need to see proper leads coming back together, fight together to get their rights back not stand against each other. Give us Anirudh and Jhanakā€™s proper journey!

They need to make Arshi character either completely negative or make her leave the connection from RuNak. Her dialogues are bothersome and the has no attraction at all.

Over all the show needs a revamp!

Edited by Manoshono - 2 months ago
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Posted: 2 months ago
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Originally posted by: sanfan


Maya,

I donā€™t know if I can go as per the theme of the feedback point wise but will try to articulate my perspective of whatā€™s ailing Jhanakland

At the outset, I believe a story is purely and purely a writerā€™s vision. Itā€™s the writerā€™s prerogative how to bring to fruition their vision.


This serial hasnā€™t ended yet but the writers have reached a point where nothing they do beyond now is going to resurrect the charming love story for me. This I say even if they aim for a happy ending for Runak; with their bare hands, they have crushed to pulp the love story . From here on, it is purely a story of a woman asking for the rights for her yet unborn child and her journey to move away from the life she has led so far. Whither the love story? To see love from here would take a toll on anyoneā€¦.

As a person who connects purely to the writing and nothing else distracts me from that. What can I can say about the writers? Have they lost their way or have they found nirvana? ā€¦ This story always was about the past and present juxtapositionā€¦ I just misread the pairā€¦ I read it as Jhanakā€™s with Urvashi ( assuming she was the other woman in the tale) given her reservations about getting involved with Ani and let the more juicy BB- Ani dynamic recede in my memory. When Kashmir happened I had a doubt but let that slide thinking any closeness between them only fortified Jhanakā€™s resolve further to stay away. But in a case of blindsiding I missed this to be the twist

if the writers intended to reach a stage in the story when Ani and Jhanak will be where Jhanakā€™s parents were I would say they have spectacularly succeeded ā€¦ so much so that the likeness in BB and Ani is astounding. If this was the intended for shock and aweā€¦ the writers have done it fantastically. If they wish to have a release valve for Ani, it is almost hidden from view. To tell them apart is almost difficult now even if I were to give Ani the creative benefit of doubt in not acknowledging the child as his.

Since I have no idea about the BB - Urvashi story, I can only assume, BB may have been just as wonderful guy like Ani who formed a bond with Urvashiā€¦ thereā€™s nothing to suggest in the narrative that Urvashi regretted her love for BB, and all she wanted was for BB to acknowledge her child and she failed.

The story is now telling me that Jhanak is not like her mother. She is determined not to let what happened to her repeat in the case of her child and she has warned everyone about it. The story has now moved from the Ani- Jhanak axis to a Jhanak centric focus. The writers were able to cut the umbilical cord in one goā€¦ BUT THIS COULDNT BE THE AIM OF A STORY

WHY WOULD LEENA TAKE SO MUCH PAINS TO TELL US A SLOW BURN LOVE STORY IF THE AIM WAS TO REDUCE ANI TO A BB?

So, I hope that itā€™s not the aim. However If from this point, they wish to distinguish Ani from BBā€¦. which they will do in all likelihoodā€¦ it might resurrect the story for many viewers but not for me as this is not the way Ani was presented to me even in his worst phaseā€¦Ad shoot phase; if the writer is saying that men can have many redeeming qualities but their one quirk or trait is to be feared for.. ā€œMain sirf tumhare liye bura hoonā€, and that is the hallmark of their love storyā€¦I would like to tell writers to please spare us their writing skillsā€¦ they skills are mediocre if after all this they want to show a love story meandering through hate, revenge, righteousness based on false premises, forgiveness hinging on greatnessā€¦.good luck to them. In love like in life there are no guaranteesā€¦ when we fall in love, we are always guided by instinct, if this is a story to warn women not to trust men, give up the pretence and put the money where the mouth is and show Jhanak move away completely.
Their belief in constructing a hero who is riddled with a flaw that they couldnā€™t even present properlyā€¦.is my biggest grouse. What is the flaw that caused Ani to implode when they have shown him reconciling to a life away from Jhanak almost completely ( irrespective of his bout of jealousy) He came back to BH like any normal guy, upset perhaps but not unhingedā€¦ā€¦ Agreedā€¦ it can be tumultuous to have an ex come to your doorstep asking you for paternity recognition but what is causing Ani - the mastermind of so many battles to disintegrate in this manner?

I can think of a situation where this is possible but unfortunately the narrative isnā€™t indicative of itā€¦ sometimes a writer has to make a choice between whose pov is the story projecting? We are not Ani neither are we Jhanakā€¦ Makers can safely give us a small peep into his mind. I am speculating that Ani does not think Jhanak is pregnant as that is the only reason this story can even breatheā€¦. ( maybe I am wrong)

Ani was always expected to have an arc which dealt with his mode of handling crises. Also his fear that Arshi will combust and harm Jhanak could be the underlying cause of his muddled decision making but writers couldnā€™t you think of a more nuanced twist that tested the lovers other than a twist in which you seem to show an otherwise caring man to develop traits hitherto unknown and implode in such a manner?

Othello is not a love story I hope writers writing to model on Shakespearean tragedies realise this. We are never in doubt that Desdemona & Othello will lose ā€¦ they are set up to failā€¦

Donā€™t set up your love stories to fail. Make your love stories a way for people to keep their trust in love not lose it.


Maya, I am sorry this is a rambling noteā€¦ just poured my thoughts as they came. Feel free to use the portions relevant, if you wish ā¤ļø

I feel really bad about ourselves because we have invested so much emotions in this show just to realise that the writer's are simply ruining the very essence of the story by taking the easy ways of garnering trp..

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Posted: 2 months ago
#27

Originally posted by: ..NadiaZ..

1.Pacing: Is the pacing of the story working for you?

i think the pacing of the story is so slow and the focus should be on important events that revolves around leads , plus there is no closure for any track , they always keep open ends with too many loopholes and illogical tracks.

when we think the story is finally moving on , we are back to square one.No progress with repetitive dialogues and unsolved misunderstanding between leads.


2. Character changes: How do you feel about the changes in characters?Are the new developments in characters working for you?

i didnt see any changes in the characters , Ani is still the same confused , impulsive , full of ego and jhanak have no self respect and she is strong infront of Ani only and she is too mahan with the people who wronged and tried to harm her.

what i dont like is Ani shutting down his once smart brain and being under Arshi's mercy..i hate how his character is being degraded and reaching new lows everyday.And i hate how Jhanak's strengh is selective.

both leads need to be bit selfish, trust eachother and fight for their love not against eachother.


3. Sensitive issues: How do you think the show handles pregnancy, marriage, and baby tracks?

This show handles these tracks the worst way possibe ,they made mockery of real marriage with full rituals first , and then they call the baby who was conceived while leads were legally married as a sin yet they promote EMA and live in relashionship between male lead the parallel lead.
4. Mental health impact: Is the show affecting your mental well-being?

The toxicity and the negativity shown in this show with heavy doses on a daily basis can affect the strongest person...we need some positivity between leads , some light moments.Even in real life there is ups and downs not only downs and negativity..Its so unreal and unhealthy.


5. Expected changes:Do you hope for a change in the current track? If so, what kind of change and why?

-We need original Ani back with his smart brain and his feelings back to Jhanak, the one who always supported her and saved her .

-reunite Runak and start their lovestory properly.

-show trust between leads.

-Make leads fight the world together not fight against eachother.

-stop instults and character assasination of leads by eachother.

-make Arshi villain properly bcoz she aint a victim .

-show positivity and light moments and lot of romance between leads.

-let the leads have sane conversations , understanding..let them communicate not only fight.

-plz let Jhanak voice out her emotions and feelings(love) toward Ani and let Ani have clarity and be sure about his love for jhanak..make him confess about his love for her infront of his family but before that he needs to break all ties with Arshi as they r not legally married.


Any other suggestions apart from which I pointed out feel free to share .

Thats all i can think about for Now.

Thanks maya for this thread.

If i remember anything , i will add it later.


Thanks Nadia, for the feedback šŸ˜

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Posted: 2 months ago
#28

Originally posted by: sanfan


Maya,

I donā€™t know if I can go as per the theme of the feedback point wise but will try to articulate my perspective of whatā€™s ailing Jhanakland

At the outset, I believe a story is purely and purely a writerā€™s vision. Itā€™s the writerā€™s prerogative how to bring to fruition their vision.


This serial hasnā€™t ended yet but the writers have reached a point where nothing they do beyond now is going to resurrect the charming love story for me. This I say even if they aim for a happy ending for Runak; with their bare hands, they have crushed to pulp the love story . From here on, it is purely a story of a woman asking for the rights for her yet unborn child and her journey to move away from the life she has led so far. Whither the love story? To see love from here would take a toll on anyoneā€¦.

As a person who connects purely to the writing and nothing else distracts me from that. What can I can say about the writers? Have they lost their way or have they found nirvana? ā€¦ This story always was about the past and present juxtapositionā€¦ I just misread the pairā€¦ I read it as Jhanakā€™s with Urvashi ( assuming she was the other woman in the tale) given her reservations about getting involved with Ani and let the more juicy BB- Ani dynamic recede in my memory. When Kashmir happened I had a doubt but let that slide thinking any closeness between them only fortified Jhanakā€™s resolve further to stay away. But in a case of blindsiding I missed this to be the twist

if the writers intended to reach a stage in the story when Ani and Jhanak will be where Jhanakā€™s parents were I would say they have spectacularly succeeded ā€¦ so much so that the likeness in BB and Ani is astounding. If this was the intended for shock and aweā€¦ the writers have done it fantastically. If they wish to have a release valve for Ani, it is almost hidden from view. To tell them apart is almost difficult now even if I were to give Ani the creative benefit of doubt in not acknowledging the child as his.

Since I have no idea about the BB - Urvashi story, I can only assume, BB may have been just as wonderful guy like Ani who formed a bond with Urvashiā€¦ thereā€™s nothing to suggest in the narrative that Urvashi regretted her love for BB, and all she wanted was for BB to acknowledge her child and she failed.

The story is now telling me that Jhanak is not like her mother. She is determined not to let what happened to her repeat in the case of her child and she has warned everyone about it. The story has now moved from the Ani- Jhanak axis to a Jhanak centric focus. The writers were able to cut the umbilical cord in one goā€¦ BUT THIS COULDNT BE THE AIM OF A STORY

WHY WOULD LEENA TAKE SO MUCH PAINS TO TELL US A SLOW BURN LOVE STORY IF THE AIM WAS TO REDUCE ANI TO A BB?

So, I hope that itā€™s not the aim. However If from this point, they wish to distinguish Ani from BBā€¦. which they will do in all likelihoodā€¦ it might resurrect the story for many viewers but not for me as this is not the way Ani was presented to me even in his worst phaseā€¦Ad shoot phase; if the writer is saying that men can have many redeeming qualities but their one quirk or trait is to be feared for.. ā€œMain sirf tumhare liye bura hoonā€, and that is the hallmark of their love storyā€¦I would like to tell writers to please spare us their writing skillsā€¦ they skills are mediocre if after all this they want to show a love story meandering through hate, revenge, righteousness based on false premises, forgiveness hinging on greatnessā€¦.good luck to them. In love like in life there are no guaranteesā€¦ when we fall in love, we are always guided by instinct, if this is a story to warn women not to trust men, give up the pretence and put the money where the mouth is and show Jhanak move away completely.
Their belief in constructing a hero who is riddled with a flaw that they couldnā€™t even present properlyā€¦.is my biggest grouse. What is the flaw that caused Ani to implode when they have shown him reconciling to a life away from Jhanak almost completely ( irrespective of his bout of jealousy) He came back to BH like any normal guy, upset perhaps but not unhingedā€¦ā€¦ Agreedā€¦ it can be tumultuous to have an ex come to your doorstep asking you for paternity recognition but what is causing Ani - the mastermind of so many battles to disintegrate in this manner?

I can think of a situation where this is possible but unfortunately the narrative isnā€™t indicative of itā€¦ sometimes a writer has to make a choice between whose pov is the story projecting? We are not Ani neither are we Jhanakā€¦ Makers can safely give us a small peep into his mind. I am speculating that Ani does not think Jhanak is pregnant as that is the only reason this story can even breatheā€¦. ( maybe I am wrong)

Ani was always expected to have an arc which dealt with his mode of handling crises. Also his fear that Arshi will combust and harm Jhanak could be the underlying cause of his muddled decision making but writers couldnā€™t you think of a more nuanced twist that tested the lovers other than a twist in which you seem to show an otherwise caring man to develop traits hitherto unknown and implode in such a manner?

Othello is not a love story I hope writers writing to model on Shakespearean tragedies realise this. We are never in doubt that Desdemona & Othello will lose ā€¦ they are set up to failā€¦

Donā€™t set up your love stories to fail. Make your love stories a way for people to keep their trust in love not lose it.


Maya, I am sorry this is a rambling noteā€¦ just poured my thoughts as they came. Feel free to use the portions relevant, if you wish ā¤ļø

Thankyou Rekha, for the feed back ā¤

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#29

Originally posted by: Manoshono

The makers need to work on every aspects that you pointed it out.

The story is no longer gripping because I feel we are still circulating around the same loop, with repetitive dialogues and same scenes. We didnā€™t move an inch. Seems like the episodes are becoming worse with each passing day. There is no progress in RuNak, there is not much character maturing and growth in among the leads especially Anirudh. Every time there is a new track being introduced, viewers hope to get a good outcome or some growth in Anirudh and Jhanakā€™s equation, we end up being disappointed always. The outcome is a failure and turns out to be more nonsensical than before.

The pacing is slow and the writing is inconsistent. I would suggest the makers to really concentrate on consistency of our leads feelings which looks super scattered. If they confessed, they should stick to the feelings and not fluctuate to different extents. We need to see proper leads coming back together, fight together to get their rights back not stand against each other. Give us Anirudh and Jhanakā€™s proper journey!

They need to make Arshi character either completely negative or make her leave the connection from RuNak. Her dialogues are bothersome and the has no attraction at all.

Over all the show needs a revamp!

Thanks Anum, for the feedback ā¤

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Originally posted by: MayaFruitbae

Hi Maya

So please spend a few minutes to share your valuable feedback:

1.Pacing: Is the pacing of the story working for you?

Pacing is slower than a lazy tortoise! Most of the tracks lead to the same thing - no result! More open ends.. more unresolved issues- most of the times no continuity or logic.
2. Character changes: How do you feel about the changes in characters?Are the new developments in characters working for you?

As I mentioned before, I started watching the serial because of the dance element. Then I met the characters especially Anirudh who was introduced as a kind hearted, compassionate young man who had a sense of right and wrong( initially) . He was shown to be progressive, daring yet soft hearted! Jhanak, a young bubbly girl as shown in the first few episodes transformed into a young woman disinterested and dejected with life because of a personal tragedy. The two characters developed an emotional attachment gradually and love blossomed ! That journey was beautiful and pure it had just started off beautifully but couldnā€™t keep up and off late I canā€™t relate to this Anirudh or even Jhanak for that matter. It really makes me wonder if this was the pair I really fell for!!! And the third wheel Arshi is not contributing much to the plot yet somehow sheā€™s kept relevant ! Sheā€™s an independent career oriented woman but always shown as a person whoā€™s manipulated by everybody !

3. Sensitive issues: How do you think the show handles pregnancy, marriage, and baby tracks?

Letā€™s not even go there! Itā€™s fictional but whatā€™s shown is a reflection of our society at the end of the day! Baseless marriage tracks and the way the way they go on about calling them pati and patni etc even before the rituals for instance or expect the viewers to appreciateā€™live-inā€™ arrangements under the garb of incomplete rituals is ridiculous! Making a mockery of marriages and religious practices is on a superlative basis in this serial!!
4. Mental health impact: Is the show affecting your mental well-being?

Physical abuses , suicide attempts by the leads , insults and toxic drama on a daily basis without a single light hearted moment is painful to say the least!
5. Expected changes:Do you hope for a change in the current track? If so, what kind of change and why?

In order to show woman empowerment , the male lead character has been severely compromised! Incorrect facts are added for furthering the drama. We are all for woman empowerment but that doesnā€™t have to be this way where the lead needs to be continually insulted or challenged at every step to rise nor does it have to be that she has to succeed all by herself without the help of her partner! The real world is still beautiful with good people including men and women šŸ˜Š

Any other suggestions apart from which I pointed out feel free to share .

Having said that the entire cast is doing a commendable job trying to tell us a story from the writerā€™s lens as she must have conceived!!


Let's raise our concerns and let's make our voices heard! Together, we can make a difference.

Waiting eagerly for your feedback ā¤ā¤


All the feed backs shared by the forum members shall be consolidated and addressed to the makers of the show. No names shall be used in the feedback sent to the makers and the channel.



Additionally , if anyone wants to make themself heard in person use the below mentioned email of the Production House , Magic Moments , and raise your concerns .

[email protected]

Subject line: "Unite Runak: A feedback from your loyal viewer"


Please use same subject line as it will count our efforts together and make the impact more powerful.

maya I have ranted .. feel free to correct it


Edited by Edkv74 - 2 months ago
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