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Posted: 1 months ago
#21

The Shakhi dinner scene was romantic. Their conversation was sensational. Anokhi's past accident was shocking. Shourya telling Anokhi about their marriage and showing their wedding pics wasn't there in that movie. In that movie, Akshay and that heroine were not married. Glad that Anokhi finally remembered her past and took the right decision as she could not tell the reality to Yogesh.

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Posted: 1 months ago
#22

Poor anokhi is being fooledsmiley38

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Posted: 1 months ago
#23

Part 3

Outstanding.... remarkably written

thanks for the pm

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Posted: 1 months ago
#24

Part 3

A Curious Update

Is Shaurya by any chance playing with Anokhi

while Yogesh is deeply in love with her and their marriage is also fixed

surprise that Anokhi stopped the marriage , hope she has not made any mistake

by trusting Shaurya

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Posted: 1 months ago
#25

What is Shaurya saying? They were married? M shocked. Is it true whatever Shaurya is telling? Is Shaurya lying? I doubt because he has signed contract. Now Yogi proposed her with wedding card. Waiting for next, nice pics

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Posted: 1 months ago
#26

Salley

HeavenlyBliss

Kavitha

GOLDIE ABROL

Taahir

khwaishfan

Bhavisweet03

Thank you so much for the lovely comments friends.



Naqaab(Mask) Part 4

The wedding mandap....

Yogesh and Anokhi were sitting on the mandap.Suddenly Anokhi got up from there and said:No...I can't marry you Yogi.

Yogi was shocked.

Yogesh:What are you saying Anokhi?We love each other.Why are you cancelling our wedding in the last moment?

Anokhi:Because I am already married.

Yogesh was shocked.

Yogesh:You are already married?Then why didn't you say that to me before?

Anokhi:Because I also came to know it only recently.I tried to tell you the truth.But you were not willing to listen to me.

Yogesh became upset.

Anokhi ran out.Yogesh was shattered.

Anokhi told Yogesh how she met Shaurya...getting attracted to him during the dance and Shaurya revealing to her that they are married.Yogesh was shocked.

Anokhi:I know that i betrayed you Yogi.But if I marry you that will be the worst betrayal.I can't do that.I am sorry Yogi. I have to go to my soulmate Shaurya.

Yogesh was shattered.



Anokhi entered Shaurya's house.

He was shocked to see her there.

Shaurya:Anokhi!Your wedding?

Anokhi:Today was my wedding with Yogesh.But I didn't marry him.

Because I realized that I was thinking of you always instead of Yogesh because you are the one I love and not Yogesh.What I have for Yogesh was just gratitude,not love.I love you Shaurya.

Shaurya became so emotional that he caressed her face.

Shaurya:Am I not dreaming Anokhi?

Anokhi:Shaurya,You are not dreaming.I have come back to you.

Shaurya and Anokhi embraced each other emotionally.

Anokhi:Marry me again Shaurya.

Shaurya smiled holding her hand.

Shaurya and Anokhi went to the temple and got married.

Anokhi and Shaurya smiled at each other happily.

Anokhi:Shaurya...what's my real name?

Shaurya:You don't remember our past and you are known as Anokhi. So let it be like that.You will know your name once you remember your past.

Anokhi:If I don't remember my past?

Shaurya:Then also it's okay as we are together now.

Anokhi:Don't I have a family?

Shaurya:No.I am your only family.

Anokhi:It's okay.I have you.That's enough for me.

They smiled at each other emotionally

and joined their foreheads romantically.

Shaurya and Anokhi made passionate love.

Shaurya was feeling upset and disturbed.

He went near Anokhi.

Shaurya:Anokhi...I want to tell you something.

Anokhi:I also want to tell you something Shaurya.I feel guilty about hurting Yogesh.He did not deserve it.I want to talk to him.I want to console him.

Shaurya:You are right Anokhi.You should console him.But you don't need to be guilty.Because you did not betray him intentionally.You came to know that you are my wife very late.Loving me is also not wrong as I am your husband.

Anokhi:But I don't know whether Yogesh can understand it.So I need to talk to him.By the way what did you want to tell me?

Shaurya:I will tell you later.You talk to Yogesh first.



Anokhi rang up Yogesh.

Anokhi:Yogi...thanks for attending my call.I doubted whether you will attend my call.

Yogesh:Why did you call me now Anokhi?Everything is over between us.Right?

Anokhi:Yogi...I...

Yogesh:You broke my heart Anokhi.You made fun of me in public by leaving me alone on the wedding mandap.

Anokhi felt guilty.

Yogesh:Don't try to contact me again.

He cut the call.Anokhi became upset.

Anokhi:Yogi is frustrated because of me.I need to meet him.



Anokhi went to Yogesh's house.There she was shocked to see his dead body in a pool of blood.Anokhi screamed.Suddenly she saw a paper near his body.She took the paper and read it.

"You broke me into pieces Anokhi.I can't live without you.I don't want to live anymore".

Anokhi cried hugging the suicide note.

Anokhi cried embracing Shaurya.

Shaurya:What happened Anokhi?

Anokhi:Yogesh committed suicide.

Shaurya was shocked:What?

Anokhi:I broke his heart.Because of me only he ended his own life.Because of me an innocent person lost his life.

Shaurya felt upset seeing her tears.

Shaurya:You don't blame yourself Anokhi.Shaurya actually committed suicide because of me and Rajat.

Anokhi got confused:Who is Rajat?Why did you say that you and Rajat are responsible for Yogesh's suicide?







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Posted: 1 months ago
#27

Omg did he really commit suicide....or was he murdered?How will she forgive Shaurya?

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Posted: 1 months ago
#28

Loved it dear 😍

Awesome update

Poor him committed suicide things will become more complex now

Thanks for the PM

Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: 1 months ago
#29

Oh gosh

Did he really do suicide?

Btw because of this definitely they are going to have some misunderstanding 😕

Hope Anokhi forgive Shaurya. But is he really responsible for yogesh's death? I am curious to know

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Posted: 1 months ago
#30

Part 4

Gripping update.... majestically written

thanks for the pm

Edited by khwaishfan - 1 months ago
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