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Posted: 1 months ago
#11

Anokhi being rude was realistic. Who is Rajat? Wonder what was Anokhi's past. Anokhi and Yogesh scene was lovely. Shaurya gifting flowers to Anokhi was romantic. Shocked about molestation. Shaurya is being so obsessive. Perfect pics, Waiting for next.

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Posted: 1 months ago
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I wonder what Shauryas motive is...i hope he doesnt hurt her

It seems like Yogesh will turn out to be the villain...maybe Shaurya is protecting her from him

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Posted: 1 months ago
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Shourya's dance memories with Anokhi is cute. The Saakhi nok jhok was also cute. The yokhi dinner scene and dialogues are romantic. Yogesh comforting Anokhi was romantic. The Saakhi scenes are romantic. It seems that Shourya is confident that Anokhi is marrying Yogesh for money and she loves only him.

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Posted: 1 months ago
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Very interesting update dear πŸ™‚

Just amazing

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Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: 1 months ago
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Part 2

Great update... finely written

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Posted: 1 months ago
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Awesome start. The twist at the end was awesome like anokhi was engaged to someone she loves but she got emotional after dancing with shaurya and both their reactions were like they already have feelings for each other. I wonder how anokhi and yogi met as like anokhi's friend said he is rich and they own a small shop. I am confused of anokhi's real feelings for yogi after her getting guilty over the dance with shaurya.
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Posted: 1 months ago
#17

Part 2

Fabulous and Curious Update

I'm enjoying Shuarya and Anokhi

but she is engaged

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Posted: 1 months ago
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Thank you so much for the lovely comments friends.





Naqaab(Mask) Part 3

I dedicate this chapter to Kavitha who gave a jodi name to Yogesh Anokhi-YoKhi.

Shaurya and Anokhi were having dinner together.

Anokhi:What do you do?I mean..your job...

Shaurya:I am a junior artiste in movies.But hopefully very soon I will get good roles in movies.

Anokhi smiled.

Shaurya:How did you get engaged to a rich mam like Yogesh?

Anokhi:Nobody can believe that Yogesh is marrying an ordinary sweet maker like me.Actually a few goons kidnapped me by forcefully taking me to their car.I screamed.Luckily Yogesh who was in the car nearby heard it and followed their car.He saved me from the goons who were trying to molest me and got them arrested.He took me to the hospital also.He really took care of me.I was grateful to him.Thus we became friends.He kept visiting me to check whether I was alright.His care for me turned into love and my gratitude towards him turned into love.Thus we decided to get married.Yogesh is really nice.Still sometimes I get haunted by the molestation incident I faced.But he comforts me.

Shaurya:He is great.But why are you working in that sweet shop when you are going to marry a rich man?

Anokhi:I prefer to earn for myself.Like everyone thinks,I am not marrying Yogesh for money.

Shaurya:Don't tell me that you are marrying Yogesh out of love.Because you cannot love anyone other than me.

Anokhi was stunned.

Anokhi:What nonsense are you saying Shaurya?

Shaurya:Yes,you cannot love anyone other than me.Because you are my wife.

Anokhi got irritated:What nonsense!

Shaurya:This is not nonsense Anokhi.I am saying the truth.We were a married couple.But you met with an accident as a car hit you.



Past....

A car hit Anokhi while crossing the road and she got thrown off.She fell down hard.

Shaurya who saw this from the opposite side of the road ran towards her.

Shaurya:Get up my dear...please get up.

He placed her on his lap.

Shaurya cried holding Anokhi who was bleeding heavily.The ambulance reached.

Shaurya fainted thinking that Anokhi is no more.


Present....

Shaurya:When I opened my eyes I came to know that you were alive and you were taken to the hospital in an ambulance.

But shockingly the ambulance in which you travelled fell off the cliff.You were assumed to be dead.But later I saw you at the pub.I realized that you had lost your memory.I was after you only because you are my friend.

Anokhi remembered her past.

Anokhi was alone in the hospital after she got cured.She realized that she had met with an accident and that's why she was in the hospital. She could not remember her past and did not know where to go.So she tried for a job and got a work in a sweet shop.




Shaurya:If you can't believe me,see the photographs.

Shaurya showed her their wedding photographs and other romantic photographs.

Shaurya showed her their wedding photographs and other romantic photographs.

Anokhi could not believe her eyes.

Shaurya:Don't deny that you got attracted to me during the dance.That's because even though you forgot me your love for me still existed in your inner heart.I also really love you Anokhi.

Anokhi became emotional.

Anokhi:But i don't remember anything.How can I leave Yogesh who stood by me in my hard times?I can't.

She ran away tearfully leaving Shaurya in pain.

Shaurya rang up Rajat:Rajat...I can't make Anokhi upset.It's a sin to play with a girl's life.

Rajat:You have no choice Shaurya.You have signed the contract.


Shaurya became upset.




Anokhi was thinking of meeting Shaurya...her dance with him...dinner date with him...Shaurya revealing that they are married and they love each other a lot.

Aye Dil Pagal Mere Dil
Tujko Pata Hai
Yeh Ishq Kya Hai
Manzil Dhadkan Ki Manzil
Gumsum Sad Hai
Rab Ki Dua Hai






Bada Zalim Iska Junoon
Nahi Milta Ismein Sukun
Bada Zalim Iska Junoon
Nahi Milta Ismein Sukun


Aye Dil Pagal Mere Dil
Tujko Pata Hai
Yeh Ishq Kya Hai


Tu Hi Khwaabon Mein Aake
Meri Jawan Tanhai Koi Mehka Gaya
Pyaase Armaan Jagake
Jazbaat Ke Ehsaah Ko Behkaa Gaya


Shikayat Hai Shikqa Bhi Hai
Yakkin Hai To Dhoka Bhi Hai


Bada Zalim Iska Junoon
Nahi Milta Ismein Sukun




Aye Dil Pagal Mere Dil
Tujko Pata Hai
Yeh Ishq Kya Hai
Manzil Dhadkan Ki Manzil
Gumsum Sad Hai
Rab Ki Dua Hai


Manzar Nazro Pe Chaya
Har Waqt Hai Mehboob Ke Deedar Ka
Alam Kitna Hasin Tha
Bole Bina Isbaat Ke Izhaar Ka
Khusi Hai To Rangish Bhi Hai
Milan Hai To Bandish Bhi Hai


She became confused and upset about her future.

Bada Zalim Iska Junoon
Nahi Milta Ismein Sukun


Aye Dil Pagal Mere Dil
Tujko Pata Hai
Yeh Ishq Kya Hai
Manzil Dhadkan Ki Manzil
Gumsum Sad Hai
Rab Ki Dua Hai


Aye Dil.(Naqaab)



Yogesh surprised Anokhi with the wedding card.

Yogesh:Surprise!Our wedding date is fixed.We are going to get married soon.

Anokhi's heart got pricked.

She thought:I am betraying Yogi.I can't.

Anokhi was very nervous :Yogi...I want to tell you something. I...

Yogesh:No need of saying anything now.There is only a little time left for our wedding.Let's start the wedding preparations.

Anokhi:But Yogi....I want to tell you something.

Yogesh:After marriage we have a lot of time to talk.Right?Let's do the wedding shopping now.

Anokhi became upset.



The wedding mandap....

Yogesh and Anokhi were sitting on the mandap.Suddenly Anokhi got up from there and said:No...I can't marry you Yogi.

Yogi was shocked.

Yogesh:What are you saying Anokhi?We love each other.Why are you cancelling our wedding in the last moment?

Anokhi:Because I am already married.

Yogesh was shocked.



Edited by jasminerahul - 1 months ago
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Posted: 1 months ago
#19

Very interesting update dear πŸ™‚

Just loved it πŸ€—

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: 1 months ago
#20

Such an interesting and emotional updatesmiley9

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