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I am reposting the ff. I was completed six parts of ff and due to some personal reasons unable to continue it. I will update this continuously now onwards.


MAAN SINGH KHURANA-

30YRS OLD BUSINESSMAN. MD OF KHURANA CONSTRUCTION. ARROGRANT, RUDE, AND POSSIVE OF HIS THINGS. 2ND MEMBER OF FAMILY.

LOVES HIS DADIMAA A LOT. LIVE IN LONDON.

DADIMAA-

65YRS OLD GRANDMOTHER OF MAAN, DEV AND ANNY. LOVELABLE AND SUPPORTIVE OF CHARACTER.

ANNY-

18 YRS OLD NAUGHTY SISTER OF MAAN. AND SYUDIES IN U.S.A

DEV-

BIG BROTHER OF MAAN. HANDICAPPED AND HELP MAAN IN MANAGE BUSINESS IN INDIA. 31 YRS OLD.

GEET'S FAMILY-

JUNGU MAMA-

46 YRS OLD MAN . WORKS IN FACTORY . LIVES IN HOSHIYARPUR.


SHILA MAMI-

40 YRS OLD. HOUSEWIFE AND GRADE SHADE . POOR FAMILY BACKGROUND.

NAINA-

18 YRS OLD . DAUGHTER OF JUGU. BUBBLY. AND INNOCENT.

SHAMSHER-

BIG BROTHER OF NAINA AND GEET. ANGRY YOUNG MAN. FOLLOWS TRADITION.

GEET HANDA-

18 YRS OLD BUBBLY COUSIN OF NAINA AND SHAMSHER.

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Part 1 to 4-

ART 1 -

"GEET BETA, UTTO. AAJ TUMHE LOG DEKHNE AANE WALE HAI" SHILA SAID LOVINGLY TO GEET.

"NAHI MAMI, MUGHE NAHI UTHANA, AAJ TO CHUTIYA CHALU HO GAYE HAI. BUS DO MIMNUTE SONE DO NA"GEET TOLD SHILA WHILE SLEEPING AGEIN.

"GEET, UTH JAA. MAI TUZE AKHIR BAAR KAH RAHI HUI. GHAR MAI KITNA SAARA KAAM PADA HAI" "ARRE USE SONE DO NAA. AHIR WO DO DIN MAI SASURAL JANE WALI HAI" SAID JUGU MAMA WHILE COMING IN THE ROOM.

"AAP, CHUP BATHIYE. GHAR INTNE SAARE KAAM WO KAREGA? MAHARANI,TO SO RAHI HAI" SHILA TATUNTED TO GEET.

"OYE, MAHARANI UTH JAA AUR JALDI NICHE AA JAA. NASHTA BANA HAI AUR SHAMSHER KO TERE SASURAL WALO KO LENE KE LIYE JANA HAI" SHILA TOLD ANGNGIRLY TO GEET.

JUGU MAMA SAW GEET SADLY AND WENT TO HALL WITH MAMI.

GEET WOKE UP AFTER HERING RUDE REMARK OF MAMI. AND STARTED CRYING.

"BABAJI, HAMESHA MERI SAATH

ASIA KYON HOTA HAI. AAJ MERE PASS MAA-BABUJI JINDA HOTE TO AISI NOBAT MUJH PAR KABHI NAHI AATI."

"MAA, MAI AAPKO MISS KARTI HUI. AAP XHALI GAYI AUR MAI YAHA PAR AKELI PAD GAYI." SAYING SHE WENT TO BATHROOM TO GET READY.

AFTER THAT SHE WAS GOING TO KITCHEN BUT 10 MINTUES LATE SO SHILA MAMI AGING SAID "HA HA, MAHARANI AA GAYI NICHE WO BHI PURE ADHA GHANTA. GEET, YAHA AAO." GEET WENT NEAR HER WHILE FERING THE CONSEQUNCES.

"GEET, TUME PATA HAI NAA MUZE AUR SHAMSHER KO DHERI ACHI NAHI LAGTI. TO PHIR HAMESHA WAHI GATILYAN HAMESHA KYON KARTI HUI. AAJ TUMHE IISKI SAJA MILENGI. TUMHARA HAATH AAGE KARO". GEET GAVE HER HAND TO MAMI AND MAMI HER PUNISHEMENT.

"AAPNA HAATH AAGE KARNA AUR RIGHT NAHI LEFT." GEET NE APNA LEFT HAND AAGE KIYA AND MAMI GAVE HER HOT COAL IN HER HAND. "TUM YE JALTA HUA KOYLA AAPNE HAATH MAI RAKH KAR NASHTA BANAUGI AND SHE CLOSED HER HAND WHILE GIVING KOYLA AND USING BANDAGE."

"AUR HA TUM CHULE PAR KHANA PAKAOGI. AAJ AALU KE PARATHA BANANA" AUR PHIR SHAM SHER KE LIYE NASHTA PARSHONA. JAB TAK YE KAAM KHTAM NAHI HO JATA TUM YE KOYLA NAHI NIKALOGI SAMJHI!"

"HEE MAMAI," SAID WHILE SOBBING. HER HAND WAS BURNING BUT WHAT SHE COULD DO? SHE WAS SO HELPLESS LIKE HER MAMA INFRON OF MAMI.

SHE SHUDERED RAMAING LAST WEEK INCIDENT.

PAST-

IN LAST WEEK WHILE COOKING GEET BURN VEGETABLES. SEEING THAT MAMAI WENT WILD.

"GEET, TUMHE PATA HAI EK VEGETABLE KITNA MAHANHI HAI ISEE PURE 100 RUPESS KILO HAI AUR TUNE PURE SAU RUPAYE BARBAAD KAR DIYE"

"AAJ, TUMHE ISKI SAAJA MILEGI" "MAMI, MUZE MAAF KAR DO. PLEASE ASIA MAI AAGE NAHI KARNGI. "GEET PLEADED TO MAMI BUT MAMI DIDN'T HEAR OF GEET.

"JAKAR PICHALE AAGAN KADHE HO JAO AUR HAA APNE SAATH RASI LANA."

GEET WENT TO BACKSIDE YARD AND STAND THEIR. MAMI CAME AND ASKED TO GIVE HER ROPE .

USING ROPE MAMI TIED GEET TO KHABA IN HOT SUMMER.

"GEET, TUM AAJ PURE DIN YAHA KADHI RAHOGI AND AAJ TUMHE KHANA NAHI MILEGA. AUR HAA YE MAT SAMHJNA TUMHARA KAAM MAU KARUNGI. SAB KAAM TUMHE KARNA HAI "

"BUT GEET STARTED AGING PLEDING TO MAMI MAMI, YESE MAT KARO. MAI SAB KAAM KARNGI. PAR MUZE ...'

BEFORE SHE COULD COMPLETE SENTENCE MAMI USED RUMAL TO GAGGED GEET."ABHI ACHA HAI ABB TUM BOL NAHI SAKTI" "JYADA RO NAA TU ISSE BADA PHATHAR HAAL KAR DUNGI"

GEET STOOD ALL DAY AND MA MAMI DIDN'T CARE ABOUT IT.

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GEET CAME OUT HER PAST AND WENT TO KITHCHEN FOR MAKING BREAKFAST.


part 2-

GEET COME IN THE HOUSE AND DONE WITH THE MORNING BREAKFAST. IN THAT TIME SAMASHER COME TO THE DINING TABLE.

"GEET, GEET KITHE HAI TU? KITNA TIME LAGA RAHI HAI?"

SAMASHER CALLED IN ANGRY VOICE.

GEET COME IN HALL SHIVERING DUE TO FAER FROM HEAD TO TOE.

" JI VEERAJI AAPNE BULAYA?? " GEET ASKED MEEKILY.

"HA, PICHALE EK GHANTE AWAJ LAGA RAHA HUI? SUNA NAHI DETA?.. JA JALDI LEKAR KHANA LAGA DE.. MUZE TERE SASURAL WALON LEKE JAANA HAI"

GEET TURNED TO LEAVE "GEET KHANA TIKHA HONA CHAHIYE.. MUZE YE VEG KHANA PASAND NAHI HAI.. USKE SAATH OMLETE AND CHIKEN WOH ROASTED HONA CHAYIYE"

"PAR VEERAJI, MAMI AAJ VEG KHANA BANA LEKIYE BOLA THA.."

"GEET, MAA J BHI BOLEGI TO KARTI HAI NAA? TO MAI JO BOLATA HUI WO TUZE KARNA PADEGA, AUR HAA APNA SAR DAK LENA"

"KHADANI LADIYAN APNA SAR ASIA KHULA NAHI CHODATI" SAMAJI" SAMASHER RUDERLY ODERED GEET.

GEET MADE ROSTED CHICKEN AND OMLETE BUT DUE COSTANT CALLING OF SMASHER SHE BURNED THE CHICKEN.

GEET CAME IN THE DINING HALL WITH SAMASHER'S BREAKFAST. SHE STATED SERVICING BREAKFAST TO SAMASHER. BUT WHEN VEERAJI TESTE CHCICKEN HE EXPLODED...

"GEET, YE CHICKEN HAI YA STONE HAI? KITNA JALAYA HAI? APNA MOOH KHOL.."

GEET DENIDEN PELAED " PLZ BHAIJI, MUZE MAAF KAR DO"

"NAHI GEET, TUNE YE CHICKEN JALAYA HAI NA TO YE GARAM CHICKEN KHAYEGI..."

HE FORCEFULLY FEED CHICKEN TO GEET AND EAT HE REAMING BREAKFAST..

AS HE LEAVING VEERAJ SAID " GEET, MAI TUZE SASURAL WAALON KO LENE JARAHA HUI LEKIN USE PHELE MUZE 1GHANTE BAAD STORE ROOM MAI MILANA..."

"JI VEERAJI" AS HERING HIS REQURIED REPONSE HE WENT FROM THEIR.

AND GEET SOBBED SITTING OF FLOOR WITH HER ALL HEART.

"BABAJI ASIA KYON... MAMI JO JULM KARTI HAI WO MAI SHELO GI" BUT BHAJI JII KE JULM KAISE SAHOON KARRON?"


part 3-

"1,2,3" " flight now taking off! please put ur seatbelt! we are now going to london!"

airhostes" sir, plane has now take off! "

sir"hmm... okay!"

airhostes " sir, what can i bring for u?"

sir" one red wine after that send some model in the cabinet!"

airhosts" sure , sir!"

sir" one moment, before u bring that model she should be blind! i don't want know about myself to her!"

airhostes" okay!"

airhostes went to paterny and came with his red wine!

model" hey you called me! "

airhoses" yeah! sir calling ypu! but first put this blindfold! and here is ur drink!"

model drank her drink and put blindfold.

airhostes served drink and model to her sir.

sir" A1, please closed the door and don't distrub for hr now!"

airhostes locked his door and went to her room.

here in sir room,

after model drank her drink she had drugged. in that drug stage sir and model completed his business.

after that sir made called his personal assistant.

sir" hello, michel yeah put the money on xyz model account. don't tell about my name"

m for michel from this on.

m: yes sir i put the money on her a/c.yeah my name is used"

sir"okay. and i am going to ..."


part 4-

maan started his work again. maan called the airhostess.
airhostes" sir, are u call me?"
maan"yes, bring me strong vodka and dinner"
A: "yes sir"
as airhostess served the dinner and drink and left from the room.
After some time-------
the pilot announced that flight will land in 30 minutes in chenai airport.
"please tight your seat belt, we are landing on chenai airport due to emergncy"

hosiyarpur,
geet left from the home . she carried the all vegetables and indigrants

at home.
mami" jaldi, tyaar ho ja. ladke wale aa rahe hai."
geet "ji mami"
geet got ready and came downstairs.










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for further parts 5 to 8 check index for link

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Nice character sketch

Going read soon

When u update do pm

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Us waqt geet ko ladke dekhne aane wale the

Fir suddenly all things changes

She became lawyer

How

Us file ke kya tha

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part 8 link updated...

plz do check smiley27

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Nice part 8

What happen to her

Maan forced her physically

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Welcome back!m I recall reading these few chapters years back. Looking forward to reading more. Maan was obviously a player and it seems had broken Geet. It will be Geet’s payback now.

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