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Posted: 2 months ago
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Ohh you have made them soo endearing with these funny but realistic dialogues.. revealing their chemistry and heightening their tension at the same time...lines that are looking playful and funny on the surface ...but revealing so much emotions underneath....they are soo true to their characters...

In such fun playful banter...in between the warmth,the pride of Aniruddh Bose for his Jhanak..emotions are beautifully incorporated.... that's so special..

And end when he closed off the blinds if his cabin...I could actually visualise it...

Amazingly written.....smiley27....

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Posted: 2 months ago
#12

glad you liked it ! ❀️

yes i want to keep it light-hearted as much as possible. I was getting Leena kinda thoughts because of her influence on me πŸ€ͺ but i quickly brushed them under the rug


Originally posted by: MayaFruitbae

Some light moments ..

And I loved this one , its amazing as usual,.but for Maya 😝πŸ₯°

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Posted: 2 months ago
#13

i even like to read your reviews smiley42

you write so well Asmi...!

thank you ! ❀️

Originally posted by: asmitamohanty

Ohh you have made them soo endearing with these funny but realistic dialogues.. revealing their chemistry and heightening their tension at the same time...lines that are looking playful and funny on the surface ...but revealing so much emotions underneath....they are soo true to their characters...

In such fun playful banter...in between the warmth,the pride of Aniruddh Bose for his Jhanak..emotions are beautifully incorporated.... that's so special..

And end when he closed off the blinds if his cabin...I could actually visualise it...

Amazingly written.....smiley27....

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Posted: 2 months ago
#14

ab wo to ......



Fortunately

mere hath me hai!

Evil Fingers Hehehe GIF

Originally posted by: Sampada_14

Only visit???😜😜😜

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Posted: 2 months ago
#15

Originally posted by: vira76

glad you liked it ! ❀️

yes i want to keep it light-hearted as much as possible. I was getting Leena kinda thoughts because of her influence on me πŸ€ͺ but i quickly brushed them under the rug




No no no


We need Leena free writing ....soft romance ,light moments ....🀝🏼🀝🏼

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Posted: 2 months ago
#16

I know you are so sweet nah...

Aap thodi nah Leena Mata ke jaise ho...

😜😜



Originally posted by: vira76

ab wo to ......



Fortunately

mere hath me hai!

Evil Fingers Hehehe GIF

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Posted: 2 months ago
#17

Wahh!! Abhi i am going there to reply on another thread!!


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Originally posted by: Sampada_14

I know you are so sweet nah...

Aap thodi nah Leena Mata ke jaise ho...

😜😜



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Posted: 2 months ago
#18

Originally posted by: vira76

i even like to read your reviews smiley42

you write so well Asmi...!

thank you ! ❀️

Thank yousmiley27

You write soo beautifully that it evokes such beautiful emotions inside me...smiley27...

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Posted: 2 months ago
#19

haan ji.. bikul ...


Originally posted by: MayaFruitbae



No no no


We need Leena free writing ....soft romance ,light moments ....🀝🏼🀝🏼

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Posted: 2 months ago
#20

Don'T Be Modest Rdcworld1 GIF

Originally posted by: asmitamohanty

Thank yousmiley27

You write soo beautifully that it evokes such beautiful emotions inside me...smiley27...

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