Ariya TS A Year Later (PART TWO pg 6) - Page 5

Please update soon dear plz 🙏

He must be thinking that By loving Riya he is cheating Roshni or He is not good enough for Riya

Nice concept... Eagerly waiting for ariya scenes.. Update soon.. take care till then..

Please update soon dear plz plz plz plz 🙏 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

I see you've labeled it as a TS. But I can see this story of yours have a potential to be a FF. 

So if you can find time, please update as soon as possible and think about it.

Waiting eagerly

Update soon 

I am writing dear. 

Originally posted by: RiyaA123

I see you've labeled it as a TS. But I can see this story of yours have a potential to be a FF. 

So if you can find time, please update as soon as possible and think about it.

Waiting eagerly

Update soon 

I wanted to conclude it in two shots but when I started writing the 2nd part I find it difficult to wind up. 

I don't know about ff but I can see my full proof plan of two shots being falling apart 🥺

Originally posted by: Aaina25

I wanted to conclude it in two shots but when I started writing the 2nd part I find it difficult to wind up. 

I don't know about ff but I can see my full proof plan of two shots being falling apart 🥺

Then don't. See if a concept has potential then there's no need to force it to be brief.  Unless of course you have personal reasons.

Don't beat yourself about it. Some plans are meant to fall apart. Just let the characters take you through. Go with the flow and when you feel its time to end . End it. 

If your readers are giving you a good response, even if it's just one. Write with everything you have.

Personally speaking, your writing style is good. The concept is amazing. If you want to write more then at least I wouldn't mind. As long as it is satisfying, it doesn't matter if it turns to FS or ss or even ff. As a reader I'll always want more.

It's just that I always get stuck in lengthy stories. That's why I avoid writing long ones. 

But let's see how it gonna turned out. 

ThanXx for ur sweet words 

Originally posted by: Aaina25

I wanted to conclude it in two shots but when I started writing the 2nd part I find it difficult to wind up. 

I don't know about ff but I can see my full proof plan of two shots being falling apart 🥺

Likhne ka inspiration & flow aise aapne aap hi aata hai, jab aata hai toh aate hi rehte hai, aise ki jaise koi flood aaya ho, aur jab nahi aata toh regularly har roz khud ko time de ke akele kahi baith ke soch ne par bhi nahi aata hai. 

Main bhi wahi kahungi ki zabardasti story ko cut down karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai, jab tak inspiration aa rahi hai likhte jao, jab tumhare mann ko lagega ki story mein aab aur kuch nahi hai likhne ko, sivaye ek achha sa ending ke, tab hi khatam karo. Waise, jitna main ab tak samajh payi hoon, yaha maximum readers khushi khushi long stories hi prefer karenge, ek baar agar woh story ke plot se emotionally connected feel karne laag jaye toh.