Surlie FF: Ajeeb Dastaan Hai Ye... - Page 11

Originally posted by: Gags05

Show ke khatam hone pe bhi.. Shree ka this FF makes me feel so happy happy.. I can imagine everything.. cos that's how brilliantly she writes ❤️

@Shree - pls ya 10-20 chapters se pehle mat rukna

Itna lamba kaise kheenchun? I planned it to be 2-3 shot, fir ye FF hi ban gya... 10 chapter touch kar liye to I'll be shocked poora plot is decided shuru se... Bas beefing it up ab...

Moved to private blog. If you're interested in the story, please PM me for invite and access.

The angst was perfect. Imlie can't even think of being with someone else other than Agastya.

Imlie panic attack was heartbreaking but Surya calmly handled her.

Agasthya "jhaad jhankat " and "piano" was dear to me too.

Finally Surya imlie are making efforts towards being friends. Dheere dheere karke pyar bhi ho jayega

Will be waiting for next update

Amazing.....awesome.......ab dosti hogayi ab dheere dheere pyar hojayega......

Awesome ❤❤.....

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Shree.. Bro.. DDP last wale chapter me nai, iss wale me tha..

Tell me, did your eyes well-up too, while writing this...?

Bdw.. While I read this, it has been raining outside, I am sipping my coffee, and listening to the below Jukebox from Papon..

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4iRnfJ13Ofs&t=2s

Ab dekhiye coincidence...

While I heard the first song.. 'Aaj jaane ki zidd na karo", I am reading Agastya's memories flashing in front of Imlie's eyes... and she isn't ready to let go of his memories...

"waqt ki kaid me, zindagi hai magar.. chand ghadiyaan yahin hai, jo azzad hai... Inko khokar meri jaan-e-jaan.., umar bhar, na taraste raho... Aaj jaane ki zidd na karo..."

And while Surya consoles her, and asks her to start living her life to the fullest, the song changes to "Tum itna jo muskura rahe ho.. kya gham hai jisko chuppa rahe ho...

Ban jaaenge zehar peete peete.. Ye ashq jo peete jaa rahe ho..

Jin zakhmon ko umar bhar chala hai, tum kyu unhe, chede ja rahe ho..

Rekhaaon ka khel hai mukaadar.. Rekhaaon se maat kha rahe ho...

Tum itna jo muskura rahe ho.. kya gham hai jisko chuppa rahe ho... "

Ab baat karte hai story ki.. Behan why haven't you published a novel yet ? Too good matlab too good..

Love your way of making serious scenes into comedy, and the self-talks and banter add such fun to the fights.. Thank you for keeping SurLie alive through this FF, even after the show has ended..

FF bhi inti shiddat se likh rahi ho bro... Tum jab apni novel complete karogi, Kamaal likhogi.. for sure!!

Originally posted by: Gags05

Shree.. Bro.. DDP last wale chapter me nai, iss wale me tha..

Tell me, did your eyes well-up too, while writing this...?

Bdw.. While I read this, it has been raining outside, I am sipping my coffee, and listening to the below Jukebox from Papon..

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4iRnfJ13Ofs&t=2s

Ab dekhiye coincidence...

While I heard the first song.. 'Aaj jaane ki zidd na karo", I am reading Agastya's memories flashing in front of Imlie's eyes... and she isn't ready to let go of his memories...

"waqt ki kaid me, zindagi hai magar.. chand ghadiyaan yahin hai, jo azzad hai... Inko khokar meri jaan-e-jaan.., umar bhar, na taraste raho... Aaj jaane ki zidd na karo..."

And while Surya consoles her, and asks her to start living her life to the fullest, the song changes to "Tum itna jo muskura rahe ho.. kya gham hai jisko chuppa rahe ho...

Ban jaaenge zehar peete peete.. Ye ashq jo peete jaa rahe ho..

Jin zakhmon ko umar bhar chala hai, tum kyu unhe, chede ja rahe ho..

Rekhaaon ka khel hai mukaadar.. Rekhaaon se maat kha rahe ho...

Tum itna jo muskura rahe ho.. kya gham hai jisko chuppa rahe ho... "

Ab baat karte hai story ki.. Behan why haven't you published a novel yet ? Too good matlab too good..

Love your way of making serious scenes into comedy, and the self-talks and banter add such fun to the fights.. Thank you for keeping SurLie alive through this FF, even after the show has ended..

FF bhi inti shiddat se likh rahi ho bro... Tum jab apni novel complete karogi, Kamaal likhogi.. for sure!!

https://youtu.be/WYtmISG_piI?si=lIWcL40vYO9LyL3r

you too won't believe gags I was listening this song right now and imagining Initial contract marriage wala Agasthya Imlie.

https://youtu.be/e__5A0_aMmU?si=Qg1SAMwc6pPJu6Ad

What if Imlie had walked out despite loving him and then Agastya had to through a painful redemption to get her back.

Originally posted by: Sunaina7

The angst was perfect. Imlie can't even think of being with someone else other than Agastya.

Imlie panic attack was heartbreaking but Surya calmly handled her.

Agasthya "jhaad jhankat " and "piano" was dear to me too.

Finally Surya imlie are making efforts towards being friends. Dheere dheere karke pyar bhi ho jayega

Will be waiting for next update

So happy that you're enjoying this... ❤️

Originally posted by: hurrom

Amazing.....awesome.....smiley27..ab dosti hogayi ab dheere dheere pyar hojayega......smiley1

Originally posted by: bips_freedom

Awesome ❤❤.....

Thanks for your support guys... ❤️

Originally posted by: Gags05

Shree.. Bro.. DDP last wale chapter me nai, iss wale me tha..

Tell me, did your eyes well-up too, while writing this...?

Bdw.. While I read this, it has been raining outside, I am sipping my coffee, and listening to the below Jukebox from Papon..

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4iRnfJ13Ofs&t=2s

Ab dekhiye coincidence...

While I heard the first song.. 'Aaj jaane ki zidd na karo", I am reading Agastya's memories flashing in front of Imlie's eyes... and she isn't ready to let go of his memories...

"waqt ki kaid me, zindagi hai magar.. chand ghadiyaan yahin hai, jo azzad hai... Inko khokar meri jaan-e-jaan.., umar bhar, na taraste raho... Aaj jaane ki zidd na karo..."

And while Surya consoles her, and asks her to start living her life to the fullest, the song changes to "Tum itna jo muskura rahe ho.. kya gham hai jisko chuppa rahe ho...

Ban jaaenge zehar peete peete.. Ye ashq jo peete jaa rahe ho..

Jin zakhmon ko umar bhar chala hai, tum kyu unhe, chede ja rahe ho..

Rekhaaon ka khel hai mukaadar.. Rekhaaon se maat kha rahe ho...

Tum itna jo muskura rahe ho.. kya gham hai jisko chuppa rahe ho... "

Ab baat karte hai story ki.. Behan why haven't you published a novel yet ? Too good matlab too good..

Love your way of making serious scenes into comedy, and the self-talks and banter add such fun to the fights.. Thank you for keeping SurLie alive through this FF, even after the show has ended..

FF bhi inti shiddat se likh rahi ho bro... Tum jab apni novel complete karogi, Kamaal likhogi.. for sure!!

Sorry for the DDP bro...

Well up, I had tissue boxes ready as I cried buckets...

Awww... So glad that you got the required ambience bhi ❤️

You won't believe, mera writing process hi ye hai... I come up with a basic plot with all iys high points, then i come up with a mental playlist including instrumentals and ambience soundtracks, then I mix those tracks and when I write while listening to those...

I was listening to Tere bina zindagi se koi... During opening scene; then Heartbeat (KHNH) mixed with rain+thunder track and maana k hum yaar nahin during the panic attack scene; Then Auggy piano with bani teri joganiya during the piano scene; and Ei Bidda with bullets tracks during the fight scene

Aur jo end mein tumne neeli syaahi se likh diya hai... Uff... Dil le lo...

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