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Summer is almost there! And lemonade is so refreshing during summer! That just reminds me of the song "Lemonade" which is pure gold! Especially these time stamps 00:37 and 1:19 must ones!🍵

https://youtu.be/eeHH4rsJTI8

Brilliant idea of making this thread Ipti.. Readers can revisit the scenes and enjoy the original piece and our forum will be active.

It is high time the need of time to mention some iconic scenes of the story . 

The feel that the scenes of Addicted brought was deep as the scene came as natural flow of story. When the scenes comes naturally in the story it makes a different level of impact compared to when the scenes are just forced in the story.... The shop scene was for the first time brought so beautifully by you..

And then my favorite - My Impossible love - The turning point where we see the heinous act of Abhishek. Especially one those you have highlighted in bold - they need attention as they wonderfully show how low a person and the situation so uniquely presented by you. I wish those scenes remain unique ...

Then Loveholic - What a wonderful use of vocabulary - I think I also wrote in those updates that I was so impressed with the vocabs used there

You definitely would wish such presentation to be unique as I can feel the effort to bring those out.

Lastly - Thanks for adding PHCS in this tracker. and highlighting the needed ones 

And I am in awe with your song selection -  That is the highlight of the thread... . I loved it.

Great to see you are also making a thread 

of all your stories 

Addicted - it was Meera trying to harm Geet all along

My Impossible Love - Abhishek the one that was suppose to marry Geet

                                     yet he had all filthy ideas been with Geet

                                     instead of protecting her , he rather took advantage 

Loveholic - Maan getting into action just to protect Geet and the best part his illness

                    did not even cross his mind

Originally posted by: tellyme

 

Brilliant idea of making this thread Ipti.. Readers can revisit the scenes and enjoy the original piece and our forum will be active.

It is high time the need of time to mention some iconic scenes of the story . 

The feel that the scenes of Addicted brought was deep as the scene came as natural flow of story. When the scenes comes naturally in the story it makes a different level of impact compared to when the scenes are just forced in the story.... The shop scene was for the first time brought so beautifully by you..

And then my favorite - My Impossible love - The turning point where we see the heinous act of Abhishek. Especially one those you have highlighted in bold - they need attention as they wonderfully show how low a person and the situation so uniquely presented by you. I wish those scenes remain unique ...

Then Loveholic - What a wonderful use of vocabulary - I think I also wrote in those updates that I was so impressed with the vocabs used there

You definitely would wish such presentation to be unique as I can feel the effort to bring those out.

Lastly - Thanks for adding PHCS in this tracker. and highlighting the needed ones 

And I am in awe with your song selection -  That is the highlight of the thread... . I loved it.

Mention not, it was long due. Falling under a similar trope yet all of these scenes are unique and have their own flavor, and distinct elements. It's always the poignant tone where Geet is in danger and the fear of losing Maan or herself. Just like those in reality too consequences exist when people commit crimes, sooner or later everything comes to light. The truth always reveals itself. Messing with the wrong people is equally costly! Even the most patient sage has their limits. 

Thanks for your kind words & gifting us such precious jewels. It's not everyone's cup of tea to write with such finesse like you do & that too on multiple stories. 🥰🤗💜

Yeah, songs are certainly one of the fine ways to express. Am glad you liked the choice. They add a flavor. Like that song Mehbooba from kgf which I had listened to some 107 times!  Goes well with this very particular trope!

Hi Iptida

Amazing thread.... 

thanks for sharing

Great reading these scenes from your and Anu's stories.

Majestic story..... touching on a realistic topic

Scene 1

Dynamic scene.... fabulously written

Meera was truly obsessive with Maan

well Meera tried to harm Geet to get Maan

Fabulous story

Scene 2

Tensed scene... well written

Hate this Abhishek

angry that he tried to force Geet

Geet was really scared

angry that Abhishek did not respect Geet's wishes

Geet was in danger from Abhishek

dismayed that he continued to touch her against her will

of cos was helpless

well she pleaded to no avail 

Beautiful unique story 

Scene 3

Majestic scene... amazingly written

angry that Dev and Sameera resorted to kidnapping Geet

glad that Geet gained her consciousness 

admire that Geet kept calm

great that Geet's flexibility helped her

pleased that she managed to free herslef

of cos Dev wants to ruin Geet

disgusting Dev

Thank God the police and Raj and Vicky came 

Geet was safe .....

as expected Geet was in shock

good that Maan is back

liked that Maan trusted her

Superb story

Scene 4

Fabulous scene.... wonderfully written

liked Maan's protectiveness for Geet

glad seeing Maan in action

great that he forgot his fears and went to protect Geet

Gosh Maan beat Raghu 

Maan's anger was justified

Thank you for reading & your lovely response. Plenty more to come!